Shattered Girl Comments
Reader-751608
too mush sex, too little plot!
09/11/2025 19:16
Visitor
I like that it isn’t a a lot for the beginning I like getting into the story fast and it’s my secon time reading it
09/06/2025 18:57Visitor
loving it again as I just noticed it updated
09/06/2025 18:12Visitor
I started to read it and didnt know it was updated now behind love this book
09/02/2025 01:26Visitor
I thought the book was okay. Inwould have like a little more character development leading up to them just all of a sudden having such strong need to protect and love her
08/31/2025 14:21Visitor
love it!
08/18/2025 22:52Visitor
love this story so much
08/15/2025 15:05Visitor
love it
08/11/2025 17:45Visitor
this is a pretty decent book for someone just starting but i do understand the mixing up in names when there are so many
08/02/2025 05:21Visitor
❤️
08/01/2025 12:54Adamaries Arocho
I love this book
07/31/2025 22:32Trinity James
🩷🩷
07/31/2025 12:46Visitor
loved this book, very addictive. it pulled you in and kept you captured
07/21/2025 20:58Devon Burnett
what happened with this story? It was awesome is the author going to finish it?
07/20/2025 20:09Visitor
I like Josh most
07/18/2025 18:53Visitor
story seems a bit rushed has great potential but it’s like the back story is on the shallow side do get to the dirty parts
07/15/2025 23:26Visitor
wish there was more to the ending, but the book was good
07/15/2025 04:13Visitor
interesting story
07/13/2025 13:40
Shann_
The book started well but it has dragged on too long. too much repetition of take out, tv/movies, and gaming.
07/09/2025 11:08Trinity Mason
loved this book just wished for more to the ending
07/03/2025 02:30Lovette U. Thompson-Taylor
Love the read but would have appreciated a build up
07/02/2025 00:57Visitor
it was captivated. Only the ending of the book was really a short ending, didn't really have a lead up to it.
07/01/2025 20:50Visitor
I’m loving this book so far
06/30/2025 09:54Tmsh Brwn
This was an interesting book. Glad she got the love she deserved.
06/30/2025 04:26Reader-582755
interesting so far, curious to see where the story goes
06/27/2025 05:26Visitor
this is a really good book I can’t wait for the next chapter
06/21/2025 23:55Merisa R
I loved reading this book. I am glad she finally found not just 1 but 5 guys that loved and protected her.
06/18/2025 03:16Visitor
Such a good read
06/14/2025 17:09Visitor
this book is really good, can’t wait to keep reading more, it is very interesting and great plot
06/13/2025 08:33Yollanda Van Reenen Bester
This is a good book can’t wait for the next chapter
06/09/2025 20:04Visitor
nice
06/07/2025 21:42Brianna Skals
this book is really good I can’t wait till I can fully unlock the book
06/06/2025 14:59Visitor
love the story
05/31/2025 03:06Deanna Clever Jacobs
Really hoping for a sequel. Really good story
05/29/2025 07:42Visitor
my god. you all moan a lot. if you don’t enjoy it or a character. Instead of moaning. fine something else to read maybe
04/24/2025 13:21Visitor
please let us know if there will more or another book!!!
03/27/2025 20:43Rose
would’ve been nice to actually find the book properly. Hate the way it ends
03/15/2025 05:22Visitor
didn’t she tell Jake josh and Patrick she was a vergin after the altercation with her mother??
03/06/2025 04:08Laura Arnette
a description of what all the guys looked like would of been nice
02/22/2025 07:33Laura Arnette
I’m curious as to why he asked her to stay up there as if she wasn’t allowed in the basement/game room
02/16/2025 04:41Lydia Katz
I live this story. very upset the way it ended. would have like to read more about them. is there a sequel coming?
02/14/2025 00:12Visitor
I can’t wait to read more
02/13/2025 11:53Visitor
please another book!!
02/13/2025 11:53Laura Arnette
Jake not jack
02/11/2025 19:01Laura Arnette
wicked birth of a mother makes no sense. Your wicked birth mother makes since.
02/11/2025 06:20Laura Arnette
exactly****
02/10/2025 19:08Tabitha Nichols
the lead character whines way too much! I even tried to skip over her parts to continue the story… But DAMN the whining is out of hand!
01/21/2025 02:18Laura Arnette
stroked…..
01/19/2025 11:28Laura Arnette
let out a whimper
01/19/2025 10:30Laura Arnette
his grin grew wider not wiser
01/19/2025 10:02Laura Arnette
As he came
01/18/2025 14:42Laura Arnette
Aching for HIM……
01/18/2025 14:35Laura Arnette
confused are the all trying to make up for missing Drew’s birthday because of Emmy’s accident? If so that couldn’t be helped and the guys shouldn’t feel bad or anything for something that couldn’t be helped.
01/18/2025 14:23Laura Arnette
grinning through the screen at us.
01/18/2025 10:41Laura Arnette
He slid into the car behind her?? that doesn’t make sense you mean he slid into the seat next to her 👀
01/18/2025 10:17Laura Arnette
wrapped an arm around my middle? you mean he wrapped an arm around my waist
01/18/2025 10:13Laura Arnette
why is Drew sitting her next to the bed? you mean on the bed……
01/18/2025 09:31Laura Arnette
and you cut this chapter short too 🙄
01/18/2025 09:01Yvonne Whoknows
this was rather disappointing in the end! it started out quite nice and promising. than it kind of got stuck and the ending is rushed and frankly disappointing! ot quite worth reading
01/17/2025 13:30Laura Arnette
lick not like
01/17/2025 03:17Laura Arnette
smacked me ass……
01/16/2025 19:14angies
***spoilers*** I just finished this book. Emmy honestly is an annoying character. she’s incredibly immature…the whole sticking her tongue out at the guys is so childish, and then they scold her like a parent would to a child. It’s really strange. I also don’t understand the point of revealing she has grandparents that know about her…but nothing comes of it. It would have made more sense for just her mother to set up that trust fund than to have something be from grandparents that we never hear about again. when she gets texts from an unknown number and goes to their private investigator also doesn’t make sense. she’s never without the guys. they frive her everywhere, so when did she have time to do all that on her own without them knowing?? and where was spell check throughout this whole book?! LOL. All of my annoyances aside, it’s a sweet story and I do love the connection she has with each of them and how much they take care of her.
01/16/2025 12:47Laura Arnette
alternating
01/16/2025 09:31Laura Arnette
WOULD’NT have to deal with it
01/15/2025 21:10Laura Arnette
I don’t want or I don’t like to play twenty questions.
01/15/2025 11:56Laura Arnette
Pressed a kiss to his tip
01/15/2025 11:04Laura Arnette
Jake was in front of what??? 👀
01/15/2025 09:51Laura Arnette
I got a hold of my dads…..
01/15/2025 04:02Laura Arnette
kissing my hand. if he was kissing her palm that would be the inside of her hand which doesn’t make much sense
01/15/2025 04:00Laura Arnette
my face not my space
01/15/2025 02:36Laura Arnette
startled me awake
01/15/2025 00:05Laura Arnette
their uniforms
01/14/2025 19:36Laura Arnette
When Mary brought the discharge PAPERS into the room
01/14/2025 18:31Laura Arnette
stuck his head out the door
01/14/2025 16:13Laura Arnette
it was Joshes own fault for creepin in her room like that serves him right lol
01/14/2025 10:17Laura Arnette
Josh being taken down by a nude Mike cracked me up
01/14/2025 10:10Laura Arnette
I laid them all out
01/14/2025 08:54Laura Arnette
Deja Vu
01/14/2025 08:02Laura Arnette
I don’t think HE would be dumb enough to get involved in drugs.
01/14/2025 07:56Laura Arnette
Sending out little moans
01/14/2025 06:53Laura Arnette
HE begin to twist them
01/14/2025 06:52Laura Arnette
whimping at the feeling of Patrick’s mouth
01/14/2025 06:51Laura Arnette
what did he do to put that expression on your face?
01/14/2025 05:08Laura Arnette
erase the words “that I hoped” they don’t make sense in the sentence.
01/14/2025 04:33Laura Arnette
Helping me in
01/13/2025 22:11Laura Arnette
tissues that I OPENED…..
01/13/2025 16:46Laura Arnette
The assertive dominant BDSM Jake whimpered? Really now all I can picture is him sitting there sucking his thumb whining just bc Emi wants to stand up 😂😂😂😂
01/13/2025 08:17Laura Arnette
You fold and I will pack 👀
01/13/2025 05:45Laura Arnette
I switched who I was cuddling with each time
01/12/2025 23:29Laura Arnette
his mouth on my breast*
01/12/2025 18:30Laura Arnette
it would of been really nice to have gotten the guys pov’s on some of this like what they talk about after she leaves the room to go shower etc.
01/12/2025 18:15Laura Arnette
rolling my eyes at this whole chapter bc it’s dumb
01/12/2025 09:51Laura Arnette
the guys not they guys
01/12/2025 07:04Laura Arnette
PLEASURE…… You need spell check turned on or slow down your typing
01/12/2025 06:47Laura Arnette
EAR 👀🙄
01/12/2025 06:44Laura Arnette
would be done in a little while
01/12/2025 06:27Laura Arnette
my tiptoes
01/12/2025 06:01Laura Arnette
Into his mouth
01/12/2025 02:06Laura Arnette
He sat up straighter
01/11/2025 10:00Laura Arnette
I said into Patrick’s neck
01/11/2025 09:53
