Shattered Girl Comments
Laura Arnette
got to rough
01/11/2025 09:34Laura Arnette
I swear you no any other words then hole like is ur vocabulary limit? 👀
01/11/2025 09:22Laura Arnette
incredibly sensitive what? Core erase the word stop it makes no sense
01/11/2025 09:15Laura Arnette
He would be right down
01/11/2025 08:45Laura Arnette
She sounded like someone I would have really liked.
01/11/2025 08:15Laura Arnette
sneaking up behind him
01/11/2025 08:04Laura Arnette
sips
01/11/2025 00:33Laura Arnette
I was so fun and ready? that absolutely makes no sense and stop using the word hole to describe her sexual genitalia gezzzz it’s like a virgin wrote this book
01/10/2025 22:30Laura Arnette
I swear you made this chick bipolar 😂😂
01/10/2025 12:29Laura Arnette
just about came not just about orgazimed that doesn’t make much sense
01/10/2025 11:44Laura Arnette
stop with the tight hole stuff use a sex book or something to look up other descriptive words is you’re vocabulary limited? just curious
01/10/2025 10:21Laura Arnette
sliding a hand/his fingers over her breast
01/10/2025 10:11Laura Arnette
I jumped when he cleared his throat.
01/10/2025 09:27Laura Arnette
she must of magically healed and forgotten she’s got broken bones while jumping into his arms like that 👀
01/10/2025 07:48Laura Arnette
He whispered ok before kissing me.
01/10/2025 05:47Laura Arnette
them getting interrupted in the shower is annoying why couldn’t they of had there privacy like any other time. rude much
01/10/2025 03:20Laura Arnette
since I knew they had heard me cum before
01/09/2025 22:08Laura Arnette
finger not find
01/09/2025 21:51Laura Arnette
Mo Chuisle is Irish Gaelic meaning Darling or Sweetheart
01/09/2025 16:07Laura Arnette
Jumped up and disappeared
01/09/2025 11:53Laura Arnette
I can’t wait to leave my mark on your beautiful body so everyone knows your ours. that statement is what made me think they maybe wolves in a pack
01/09/2025 10:32Laura Arnette
the word stage needs deleting
01/09/2025 08:42Laura Arnette
Who was sitting on the couch still talking.
01/09/2025 08:13Laura Arnette
Jake not Jack!
01/09/2025 05:13Laura Arnette
wouldn’t leave me
01/08/2025 16:47Laura Arnette
caused a loss of concussion that absolutely does not make sense
01/08/2025 14:09Laura Arnette
further away from me
01/08/2025 14:00Krisima Eastham O'Neil
is there going to be more chapters
01/04/2025 01:17Laura Arnette
Aaaawwwwe come on I need more lol
12/27/2024 06:49Laura Arnette
Will*
12/27/2024 06:45Laura Arnette
the canoodling with have to wait! oh gezzzz that’s got me crying that was do funny 😂😂😂😂
12/27/2024 06:45Laura Arnette
uh the guys were just on the phone what happened to that there was no goodbye nothing? The conversation just stopped
12/27/2024 05:33Laura Arnette
this makes no since are they not all going to the party then why not all go together and one of them can drive she doesn’t have too?
12/27/2024 04:21Laura Arnette
DONT need issues
12/27/2024 03:53Laura Arnette
I’m still not entirely sure
12/27/2024 03:47Laura Arnette
ummm I would of liked to have read her telling them about the situation not just their shocked reactions to said situation. the book is good but you leave so much detail out of it as well
12/27/2024 03:39Laura Arnette
I DID miss them even when I was mad
12/26/2024 22:25Laura Arnette
how is Mike sitting at the end of the bed and standing next to it 🤔
12/26/2024 07:23Laura Arnette
I stand corrected on my last comment 😆
12/25/2024 21:34Laura Arnette
no sex with Mike? interesting
12/25/2024 21:30Laura Arnette
really Chinese again. your story needs better variety and more context and detail all they do is eat sleep shower fuk and occasionally go places and along the story she gets injured or kidnapped smh
12/25/2024 19:14Laura Arnette
I knew that was gonna happen sooner or later
12/25/2024 15:48
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loving this
12/25/2024 11:39Laura Arnette
your stuff will be here in 3 days
12/25/2024 09:28Laura Arnette
such polite men you are.
12/25/2024 07:37Laura Arnette
Ma’am not mam
12/25/2024 07:35Laura Arnette
oh mercy page 109 had me laughing crying that was good
12/25/2024 05:56Laura Arnette
you continue to get the names Jake and Josh confused pick one plz
12/25/2024 00:07Laura Arnette
it’s not pretty not present
12/24/2024 18:42Laura Arnette
the fact that Mike is practically making her do something that’s making her visibly uncomfortable and then telling her to be still that she can’t enjoy herself is not how BDSM works and the fact that your writing about something you have no knowledge of is highly offensive and annoying
12/24/2024 14:29Laura Arnette
now his names Josh and not Jake 🤔mmmmmk then
12/24/2024 14:07Laura Arnette
they don’t want a 24 hour sub/dom lifestyle but that’s exactly what’s been happening with them being super overbearingly dominant with her
12/24/2024 13:56Laura Arnette
seriously is she a robot to comply with everything even when it’s not her fault. it’s not like she just vanished into thin air she went in a store by herself gezzzz give the girl some freedom smh
12/24/2024 04:13Laura Arnette
the way that Josh spoke to her like that and then “dissipated” her that shits not my cup of tea that’s a form of abuse the way she coward and ducked her head and looked at the floor to get away mentally from the situation I’ve done that very same thing it’s abuse and not okay
12/24/2024 04:02Laura Arnette
Empty hole ugh nvm I spoke to soon smh
12/23/2024 19:04Laura Arnette
tight opening……. sighs well at least you didn’t call it a hole this time
12/23/2024 19:01Laura Arnette
what is up with you and calling her vagina I hole that is actually kinda rude find other words use a thesaurus
12/23/2024 11:59Laura Arnette
there’s no way that thing is going to fit in my mouth. 😂😂😂😂 That was so funny
12/23/2024 10:29Laura Arnette
the mind is an evil place to be stuck when you have been mentally/physically/emotionally/sexually abused it’s just like a recording that plays on a loop
12/23/2024 08:52Laura Arnette
I bet you were not I bet you did
12/23/2024 08:26Laura Arnette
horseback riding! That was funny 😆😆😆😆
12/23/2024 08:11Laura Arnette
you need a bigger vocabulary when it comes to sexual terms a vagina does not always have to be called a hole author
12/23/2024 07:38Laura Arnette
who knows if this was done in or out of the water I guess we will never know bc our other is so inconsistent with details
12/22/2024 23:18Laura Arnette
pajama pants sleep pants sound odd
12/22/2024 21:51Laura Arnette
uh ok like why is he talking to her as if she’s going to bark at him at any given point now that they have had sex 👀
12/22/2024 08:18Laura Arnette
here we got with the tight little hole commentary again I swear “glares at the author” Really!
12/22/2024 06:59Laura Arnette
I love the way they all take care of her it’s sweet but the way she acts I can’t deal with that. you can still be spoiled and taken care of by your man/men and still act like an adult woman instead of a teenage mentality incompetent little girl
12/22/2024 03:20Laura Arnette
the bratty attitude is really annoying I don’t know of any adult that acts like that unless again they are mentally unstable
12/22/2024 02:44Laura Arnette
sometimes the way that it’s written makes her sound like a child and they have the parental responsibilities over her like she’s mentally encompatent
12/21/2024 10:43Laura Arnette
Dang I dunno why the surprise books on her bed made me emotional but that was super sweet of them 👍🏻
12/21/2024 10:28Laura Arnette
I think Patrick maybe my favorite so far followed by the twins
12/21/2024 09:09Laura Arnette
your gonna really do the whole BDSM thing with someone that’s been verbally physically mentally and sexually abused by her father that’s sick their are other ways to be pleasured this definitely ain’t it.
12/20/2024 09:04Laura Arnette
lmfao Jake laughter oh gezzz that was funny
12/20/2024 08:54Laura Arnette
can you please stop changing their freakin names 👀
12/20/2024 08:01Laura Arnette
uh Sharon not Shannon
12/20/2024 07:24Laura Arnette
Chapter 36 now that is how you write a proper cohesive chapter 👍🏻
12/20/2024 05:46Laura Arnette
Mo Cuishle is Irish Gaelic it means my darling or my blood 👍🏻
12/20/2024 05:07Laura Arnette
this book has nothing to do with her being a “shattered girl” It’s mostly a smutty book that’s about it
12/20/2024 01:17Laura Arnette
this book is just smutty cring with no context/story/imagination to it
12/20/2024 00:59Laura Arnette
the writer has no imagination I swear keep calling her vag a tight hole smh 🤦🏼♀️
12/19/2024 13:40Laura Arnette
the word stage doesn’t need to be there on the last sentence of the page
12/19/2024 12:00Laura Arnette
you really need to go back slow down and make this book make sense some of it is good but there’s so many inconsistencies
12/19/2024 02:54Laura Arnette
jack? don’t you mean Jake 👀
12/18/2024 23:33Laura Arnette
they wouldn’t leave me and they care about me.
12/18/2024 16:19Laura Arnette
four rambunctious boys
12/18/2024 14:13Laura Arnette
caused a loss of consciousness? ummmm that’s not a word lol
12/18/2024 13:03
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is this completed or are there more chapters???
12/14/2024 23:26Visitor
where is the last part of the story. is it under another book or did the author just quit
12/09/2024 06:00Visitor
it’s good so far
12/05/2024 20:22Visitor
this is an interesting story and it can be so much better with for plot investment. the author is rushing the story to fast and it’s unbelievable if it’s not supernatural.
12/01/2024 23:50Visitor
is there a regular schedule for updates? I’ve been waiting on a new chapter for a little bit and am anxious to read more.
11/25/2024 12:29Visitor
it’s good
11/25/2024 06:02Visitor
it’s good , def a fever dream of perfection, but good. she def is bratty though for sure
11/19/2024 01:36Visitor
I just want her to stop whining
11/17/2024 14:07Brit Helms
What!!! i need to know what happens!!!
11/16/2024 22:10Visitor
another book not done 😭I have decided to start checking if the book is complete first and won’t read anymore incomplete books
10/31/2024 13:39Visitor
I think the stories great!! just ignore the misspellings and stuff you get used to it. common since kicks in and you just don’t care anymore! but love love love this story. NEED NEW CHAPTERS ASAP!!!
10/24/2024 21:38Visitor
I’m sorry but this girl sleeps to damn much.
10/24/2024 04:15Rachel Gonzales
U.S. Navy, Marines, and Air Force have BASES. U.S.Army has POSTS or FORTS. Can someone please explain this to these writers? not just here, but movies, TV, radio, news, etc. It’s irritating, just like the sloppy salutes and inaccurate details about military life.
10/23/2024 03:39Visitor
very frustrating and hard to follow the story with all the name changes and mix ups. also I feel like there is a large section of the back story missing. it seems a bit off that she goes to a complete strangers home with now step brothers and and broken bones after repeated physical abuse over years and years and is ready to hop into bed with 4 strangers?
10/21/2024 21:41
