Shattered Girl Comments
Visitor
I just want her to stop whining
11/17/2024 14:07Brit Helms
What!!! i need to know what happens!!!
11/16/2024 22:10Visitor
another book not done 😭I have decided to start checking if the book is complete first and won’t read anymore incomplete books
10/31/2024 13:39Visitor
I think the stories great!! just ignore the misspellings and stuff you get used to it. common since kicks in and you just don’t care anymore! but love love love this story. NEED NEW CHAPTERS ASAP!!!
10/24/2024 21:38Visitor
I’m sorry but this girl sleeps to damn much.
10/24/2024 04:15Rachel Gonzales
U.S. Navy, Marines, and Air Force have BASES. U.S.Army has POSTS or FORTS. Can someone please explain this to these writers? not just here, but movies, TV, radio, news, etc. It’s irritating, just like the sloppy salutes and inaccurate details about military life.
10/23/2024 03:39Visitor
very frustrating and hard to follow the story with all the name changes and mix ups. also I feel like there is a large section of the back story missing. it seems a bit off that she goes to a complete strangers home with now step brothers and and broken bones after repeated physical abuse over years and years and is ready to hop into bed with 4 strangers?
10/21/2024 21:41Visitor
I just gotta say this, if you’re gonna make references to things, make it a little realistic. twins run on the mothers side not the fathers side.
10/18/2024 03:55Heather Stephens
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
10/18/2024 02:21Visitor
when’s the next chapter coming out??
10/16/2024 14:05Visitor
I don’t get it. It went from 17 to open the book to almost 100 to open a book.
10/13/2024 23:39Sarah Grant
so is this going to an ebook? I'd rather buy direct from the author than keep paying for chapters.
10/13/2024 21:07Nancy Miranda
she brushed her teeth twice?
10/13/2024 18:41Visitor
hard turn off having them all talk about their past experiences
10/12/2024 23:13Visitor
it switched the males name to Daniel too
10/12/2024 23:04Visitor
no josh did not really tell her much of anything no one has
10/12/2024 22:48Visitor
that is literally my favorite pizza
10/12/2024 22:19Visitor
so is sharing chicks a regular occurrence for these dudes or were they already aware of her and plotting this out and why would a girl with no experience except extreme abuse be so ok with all this?
10/12/2024 21:25Visitor
this set up is a little concerning like the just got a new toy or something it’s kinda creepy how fast they basically just jumped on the share her train
10/12/2024 21:10Visitor
How do I know when/if more chapters get uploaded?
10/12/2024 19:47Reader-668509
is anyone else imagining a black hooker dress with makeup on a girl with a broken nose, arm and a lot of bruises all over looking oking like a crackhead? so sexy😂🤣
10/11/2024 06:01Visitor
wait, is this the end of the book?? please tell me there’s more
10/06/2024 11:03Nancy Palmer
people these books are not completed writings. They ask us for comments so if you see something wrong in the storyline then then let the writer know “nicely” I myself am jumbling the twins as their names are too close together. love the story though and would love to read more please.
10/04/2024 10:12Octavia Arrington
I’m out! I just can’t. good concept poor execution.
09/30/2024 22:44Octavia Arrington
I thought she had scars she was embarrassed to so off…
09/30/2024 22:43Visitor
I’m sorry but for this girl to be beaten the way she was and then gets horny for her new step brother and he pushes in between her legs to “help her wash ?” WTH? Really?
09/27/2024 15:53
user2409115140
I really enjoyed the book but is that end or is there more chapters?
09/27/2024 12:22Visitor
so sad for a child to endure.
09/26/2024 12:51Visitor
the book the shattered girl— who’s it by
09/24/2024 06:32Visitor
Emmie is getting annoying with her constant whining and acting like a spoiled little girl
09/23/2024 14:46Visitor
this story is a waste of life to read. too fast. too cringy. too inconsistent. just a dumb read all around. I don’t expect much talent wise from smut novelists but this is by far the worst I’ve ever read and that’s saying a lot.
09/23/2024 11:05
Carol Crosswicks
this is sooooo much FOUR OR DEAD.
09/16/2024 15:37Stngray3
what happened to Mike, he was missed as they loaded up and now mixing up the characters names when you just mentioned who was standing there. I know it shouldn’t be a big deal but if the author can’t keep the characters straight, how are we supposed to as readers?
09/15/2024 18:16Visitor
I’m also confused as to why they are so touchy feely with her without really knowing her
09/11/2024 02:04Visitor
it feels as though I’ve jumped into into the middle of a story in the beginning as there is not a lot of lead up or story development it’s kind of rushed it seems
09/11/2024 01:55Reader-750494
keep mixing up Josh and Jake in the story line
09/10/2024 22:02Reader-095344
Hi is this book ending soon? it’s good but doesn’t seem to have an ending soon
08/15/2024 14:05
Bella Jersey 2
a new date we’re going on
08/11/2024 14:09Bella Jersey 2
she got the beginning to a new library
08/02/2024 16:39Bella Jersey 2
it was a wonderful interaction with main characters
07/29/2024 20:34Bella Jersey 2
another important moment and evening. I hope they take advantage of it
07/28/2024 08:10Bella Jersey 2
this was a very important and meaningful step they needed to take and see
07/27/2024 13:04Bella Jersey 2
dear lord evening gown and sneakers LOL!!😂
07/25/2024 08:03Reader-416051
nope. I would be saying you don’t want to be here and I don’t want you here now leave. Put me in the system. I don’t want to go anywhere with her
06/06/2024 14:56Brandee DiPiero
I do my best to upload at least five chapters a week M-F.
05/08/2024 21:19Jocelyn Smith
When is the book updated? I'm loving the story so far
04/24/2024 00:23
