Unhinged Comments

Reader-003394

Osiris just sealed his own fate. His own words should show him what is to come. “ Those who sacrifice others for their own gain will only lose in the end”

Yolanda Padrnos

This is such a good series. Didn’t think I would say it but I am sad for Neron. It appears his mentally unstable father ruined his chances for a happy life from the beginning. Kiya will heal hopefully with her real parents. Adoptive or not they are the ones who truly love her. Hopefully Odessa’s betrayal gets put on display. She’s got to go. It doesn’t look likely because of so much pain caused on her home territory but I route for Neron and Kiya to find a happy balance of a relationship.

Geraldine Ferraren

remember how Jonathan kept telling Neron to learn about their family’s history? it seems Selene’s avatars are destined to be at Zircon Moon with born into or force. looks like Neron and Kiya are meant to break the cycle of tyranny and create their own powerful offsprings.

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

OH this is all kinds of BAD!

I'm not liking where this is going. this makes me upset. Especially since she has friends and family she loves

Sherisa Weston

Osiris caused the car accident. Cerberus caused the dent in the car and caused the collision.

Justmee

How low can Osiris get?! Manipulating a child 😑! Even though Kiya never allowed her inner child to heal. Giving him all the opportunity to make his move on her most vulnerable inner self. Is the mark the reason he was able to connect with Kiya's younger side? Maybe this is nothing more than Osiris projecting images to her through the ritual? This chapter was deep 🤔😳

Reader-003394

my heart is breaking for Neron and Kiya. The past is not something that will be forgotten easily but I believe that for Liya to truly heal she needs to forgive . Easy for me to say right but Neron has proven time and again that Kiya is his heart and he will stop at nothing to make her happy. I just hope letting her go is not forever. What Neron should do is create a new pack , a pack that lets the past go. He should separate from his father and anyone who is with his father, banish them from his lands so everyone can heal. oh and I’m so sad for Darian please let Selene give him another mate , one deserving of a good man.

I really hope she doesn’t have much more suffering in her future. Odessa must be caught quickly. if Odessa turns everyone against her and she suffers again I won’t be able to take it. 😢😢😢

Geraldine Ferraren

I am crying too 😭😭😢😢😢😭😢😭 I want Kiya and Neron to be together, Moon Godess! make a way lol

Elle 🧿

I have a feeling Johnathan is behind this or working with Orisi 🤨. Am I the only one who doesn’t feel any romantic connection or doesn’t want a romantic connection between Kiya and Darien 😅🙊? Also, when he looked at the necklace, I just feel he’s hurting, he’s heart broken in such a bad way. I do hope that he finds someone (like a second chance mate), just not Kiya. Is it wrong that I am slightly excited to see what happens with Orisi and Kiya (forbidden feelings 😂🙊). However, I am still routing for Neron and Kiya to end up together 🙌.

Lois Withers

MORE MORE MORE PLEASE

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

"Kiss my ass!" -Kiya hahaha! oh I love that one 😁😁😁

I can’t wait to see her destroy Johnathan, tbh! But I do hope she fight Osiris’ power. Did he have the necklace enchanted? Or was it the darkness itself that prevented her from saying anything other than she trusts him?

Sherisa Weston

Is this the final in installment or is there going to be another one? Would that be the last one?

AstarteLor

gah! so good

Reader-008277

Marii Solari will more of the packs ancestral history be revealed? Jonathon is bent on his family becoming most powerful and eludes to Neron not knowing his family history. Also, who is Osiris to this pack? He has zoned specifically on this pack to destroy.

AZM24

YES!! I love this chapter and I’m loving Neron even more, I am so glad he FINALLY told his dad where to shove it!! I think Kiya is falling for Neron too, or at least I’m hoping for it...Diana is such a sweet owl, I think she’s Nuria watching over her 2 favorite people and helping them come together 😍

Rebeca G

Completely random note Marii, but have you ever heard the song House of Wolves by My Chemical Romance? The music and lyrics really remind me of this book.

Reader-003394

I love Neron and Kiya together. they have grown together and I believe he may be the only one to save her from Osiris. please please pleeeeeeeaaaase can you write faster , I’m dying here waiting lol

Taina Iosefo

Oh no no no they gotta find Kiya before the ritual is done. come on... please don’t take Kiya away from Neron or her family. Osiris is unbelievable.. while Neron was reading the journals he didn’t see anything about Osiris???

Sherisa Weston

I love how Darien protected Kiya. When Kiya said she felt like the odd one out because mates were comforting mates and then Darien came up to check on her hehe

Jessica Pye

Talk about a cliff hanger...oh man I can't wait for more! Onyx officially has my heart!

Nurse_Nikka

i seriously hope he gives Kiya the drawing as a parting gift 💜

how often do you release a new chapter?

Brittney Allen

so Jonathan is already at it again. I hope Anthony and Neron take turns beating his a$$ to a pulp. pumping him with so much wolf's bane and silver he is begging for death

Meowdel Em

ohhh 😮 Nadia is alive!!!!!

Brittney Allen

Could Osiris be the son of Jonathan's brother? Going back to Untouchable Jonathan's brother killed the Luna and their daughter to get back at his brother but did they ever say why he did it....let me go back and read that part again...

Taina Iosefo

Finally Darian rejected Odessa... She deserved it all from the rejection and to Kiya stabbing her. I hope there were people that heard Odessa’s confession of everything she did. They need to take her home and away from that pack. It’s only making things worse for her.

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

Sweet Cheese! I forgot all about the Ritual! 😱

HanaBana

I enjoyed seeing Odessa realise she was a pawn all along! She'll get what she deserves! Neron has matured so much, I really hope this isn't the end of the line for Kiya and Neron. I feel like Neron is really redeeming himself.

Stephanie Bourne

been waiting for this book. hope Kiya gives Neron a second chance.. but dont blame her for all that was done to her.

Krexroat619

I wonder if Darius was meant to be Kaya’s second chance mate that the moon goddess had offered her after her suicide?!? I had thought this early on when he was first introduced, but we then discovered his connection with Odessa. Shortly after Kaya and Neron’s connection started growing as well, so I put that thought aside. Now, I wonder if after Darius rejected Odessa if he might feel the pull towards Kaya. So he may have been staring at the necklace Neron gave her? .....or I’m completely wrong and due to his experience with Osiris’s dark magic he may have sensed the mark on Kaya... 🤷‍♀️ #MyCurrentTheories 😅 Thanks for the updates! You are an amazing writer! I truly love how intense and in-depth your story plots get.

Justmee

Lawd, I'm more nervous now 😳🤔

Roza Pestana

Now I'm just wondering what the hell are those bastards doing to Kiya

Glemmett Maylor

Yesssssssss!!!!!! Can I say love this a million times?!

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Codex Winchester

oh kiya. I knew something like this would happen! Garnet moon did their job....go home! Get away from Zircon!

Dollsenz Oui

this story is really dragging out and getting boring. seems like no new developments of each chapter. Seems author is struggling with storyline....The only thing keeping me interested is Neron the and Kiya's relationship. If the ending centres on Kiya and her family then Neron and his Pack should be written out of the storyline. Odessa isn't even worth writing about. should just hand her the sentence and be done with it.

I need more!

Can Diana lead them to where Kiya is? That owl is obviously magical.

MirahLove

literal tears running down my face reading this chapter 😩

676lucy

this story line is just so good and it’s very real in real life too hence why I can’t stop reading this and not cry when reading it lol. Being abused, neglected or raped is still happening today and what she’s going through the constant battle with mental health because of her trauma is exactly how it is in real life especially when being confronted with it. I have to say the details are spot on and a job well done you deserve every positive feedback coming your way 😊

Legend of Gru

I am soo proud of Neron!

Lois Withers

don't have him killed I say rape for rape he did it for 3 years to her so he should get the same

Gee Higgins

chapter 36 yeah for adopting mum she the bomb

Reader-367123

absolutely loved the first book. had me completely hooked. I really hope Neron ends up with Kiya (crossing my fingers)! I can’t wait to see what this book brings.

Pupu

Neron seriously deserves another chance...he is not like Kiya's birth parents who care only about their guilt. He loves Kiya. It would be sad if they do not end up together.

Why do I feel like this is a challenge and trap?! OMG Kiya please be carefu! I hope Violeta is close by along with Phoebe and her friends and family!

Kish Kush

I understand how she feels sympathy for Amber but not Osiris. He kidnapped her and forcibly marked her. He sent people to ambush her family and sent the man who assaulted her to torture her.

Marii Solaria

Hey, readers! The end of chapter 27 will be edited! If there’s any changes, like if the chapter gets relocked after the edit, let me know! ❤️

Yolanda Padrnos

I really like this story. I am very sad to see how it’s shaping out though. Despite what she went through becoming dark, cold, and heartless won’t serve Kiya well. I feel bad for the direction she is headed. The evil can easily take hold of her now.😢

Malinda Hoffman

have you wrote any more books, I read both in this series

G.A Coppola

Ohh no!! I’m happy Neron isn’t being selfish but I don’t want them to be separated.

Roza Pestana

Osiris doesn't want her to leave zircon moon. why crash the van?

😭😭😭😭 no words...

Tina Rodriguez

I want her to forgive him because being together will make them happy but he needs to show to his pack that what they all did was wrong to her and not showing pity to her but building a trust and leasing to forgiveness not just qith him but also the pack

Sherisa Weston

uhmm in chapter 13 when Galen mentioned something with Ximey,what does that mean? Who or what is Ximey?

ballen282004

I started crying and was so passed but when she got her revenge I felt that evil cackle to my core baby. (snap snap) yesss baby get them ki👏🏾ya👏🏾!!! Blow that whole pack off the map. give them that Carrie prom night scene they begging for baby!!!

Sherisa Weston

what chapter either kn this book or the previous one did Diana first make her appearance?

Bebear9874

I hope she doesn't take Neron back....

Alyssa

Kiya is a doggone Avatar!!! She doesn’t need anyone to save her!!! She has everything within to save herself. She has Selene’s blessing!!! At first I was like.... where’s Anthony/ Neron, BUT I am tired of these werewolf heroines being saved by the man!!!

Marii Solaria

Hi everyone! I’ve posted chapters 32 and 33 today and should be available to read! I will not be updating for the next few days because of the holidays, so I left something for y’all to think about. The only thing I can say to you all is that this book is titled “Unhinged” for a reason... Happy holidays! ❤️ 🎄

Justmee

Babyyyyy this update schedule is giving me life 🥳! I guess I should be happy that Raina is willing to avenge Kyia. It's a slippery slope for me and my emotions are all over the place 🙄🥺! Raina was old enough to understand what was happening to her sister even if she missed the clues of abuse she did hear the crys directly from Kiya for help ***sigh. I'm torn between Kiya executing the guard and Neron 💔! Im so protective over Kyia I wonder will she be able to take his life without a negative impact mentally 😪! Thank you again for another brilliant update 🤯👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

I do feel for Osiris. What a horrible way to grow up! Zircon moon has a terrible history (and Neron was worried about tarnishing his family legacy...) BUT, exacting revenge isn’t going to heal him, as Kiya is starting to figure out with herself

Jessica Pye

Hey guys! Im trying to find out if I need to read Unhinged next or the Halloween special first? I dont want to mess up my story line!! HELP!?!😘

Thanks for the update! Loved this chapter.

your writing has me on the edge of my seat consuming every word as if I am starving. I can’t wait for your next chapter. The respect to the subject matter is well done and compassionate.

LuciAnn Lara

I absolutely love your characters Love how you evolved Neron into a lovable character I just couldn't put my phone down and read through both books I do hope they somehow wind up together but whatever you are planning for your heroes I am excited to find out!!! Oh and I absolutely love Kiya being an avatar!! Thank you for all your work it takes me away from all the stress of raising my 3 grandbabies...

kittyXO

I love this story so much but the new chapters are very short tbh. I need more lol and I am so curious as 2 what the owls is? xx

Ashley Hoyle

absolutly love these books. you have some mazing writting skills and an amazing imagination. please keep writting. ❤💚💜💙💛

Who are you going to kill Neron? Jonathan or Osiris? Why do I feel that Jonathan was like Odessa. He sold himself to Osiris too. 🤔

Taina Iosefo

I love how close, honest and open Garnet Moon Pack is with this situation with Kiya. They will forever have her back no matter what. I also love that Neron is wanting to make sure Kiya doesn’t change and she doesn’t lose herself. I hope Kiya finds it in her heart to finally give Raina a chance. Not so much forgiving her but a chance to earn her trust and forgiveness.

Mia

please finish Johnathon off now...& that “elder” too

whew lord!! I need a rum and coke to read this. great job on portraying her emotions. This is heart breaking to read. Wonder how her parents will feel? Excellent excellent work

Brittney Allen

I love onyx lol...he gives me so much life lol...if it wasn't for him I would be happy with Neron dying with the rest of the pack

Kari Shockley

I hope Neuron & Kiya get to be happy together soon. He is trying so hard to redeem himself.

Tracy Lattin Fournier

I really love these two books!! I have laughed and cried with both and my emotions have been all over the place!! thank you for being such a great writer that you can draw in your readers like this is really happening right there in front of you!!

Gernari De Villiers

I am so conflicted... I want her to destroy the pack, burn them to the ground(all the human parts anyway, Odessa and Ashleys wolfs are actually nice, and I love Onyx). However Kiya and Artemis is actually loving, I just don't know how you will ever be able to find a way for Kiya to move on from that horrors... Its irredeemable... Luckily you are amazing and I can't wait for the conclusion... How many chapters are you planning???

Oh I need more chapters faster!! The suspense is killing me!

Roza Pestana

I hope Phoebe can help find Kiya. Maybe use a tracking spell

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

Osiris doesn't realize what he is doing is no different from that Alpha Prince?

Dollsenz Oui

@Maria Solaris, so we should have the updates now?....btw great read. I absolutely love it!...im in Australia.

Sherisa Weston

I am furious!!!!!! Not really about Kiya but everyone else ughghhhhhh

Sherisa Weston

what happened to the bartender in the first book that poisoned Kiya at the party?

Bravo 👏🏾 This chapter had me all in my feelings blowing snot bubbles 😩😢😭

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/3! 6978MZ

rita lora

first & formost you are very talented, this is a great chapter, I do hope Kiya & Nerón get a chance to be together because he is obviously a different person, I agree with many, he should resign his title as alpha since he never even wanted it, that would be 1 of the partial revenge to his father Jonathan... I think this was good for Kiya because it pushed her to open up about the rape which is what was truly holding her back to fully heal & be the Avatar she is meant to be...

Sherisa Weston

This is Neron's redemption story but remember his redemption doesn't only mean Kiya finally acknowledging him as her mate and finally being with him. Redemption means making up for all the wrongs you have done and finding your true self so one of his redemption could be just truly being there for Kiya and them just being close friends

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

That's how a parent should be. Ashley, Steven, and Jonathan are all despicable. Especially Jonathan. Not even a bit of remorse in him. Horrible man.

Jessica Pye

Oooh....I felt a little flitter in my heart for O but I pushed it away! HE KILLED HIS WOLF, no coming back from that! AWESOME AWESOME saga!!!! Cant wait for more but its soooo worth it!!!

Alyssa

Oh my!!! So much to unpack here. The Prince family has a cursed bloodline. My goodness, those Prince Alphas are just horrible!!! That Jonathan also wanted Neron to mark Kiya by force. Power hungry, heartless men. However, that Osirius is no better than them!!! He also kidnapped Kiya and marked her by force!!!

Also, side note - why the entire hell didn’t Kiyas parents go after Jonathan?! They continue to beg for forgiveness from Kiya and BOOM they’ve done nothing to stand up for her to Jonathan! They are horrible!

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/8! KPR72T

Oh hell no! You cannot just leave me hanging like that!!!

Pheobe is AMAZING!! I have to admit though she actually freaks me out 😳😳😳 But wooooow what a powerful Woman she is!!

Justmee

Onyx "You still are kind of" -‐---> 💀😂😂😂! Why did that make me laugh so hard? He never misses a chance to remind Neron that he's an idiot 😅😂😊! Diana... hum 🤔 I guess her role will be revealed to us soon. Thank you Marii for another awesome update💃🏾.

Albertina Pelzer-Mcclain

I'm glad Kiya parents showed up too take her home. sorry for Nero, but when the Goddess gives you should appreciate.

Berry Bear

uhh... i thought Ariel was already gone... love the Twist. Maybe it is possible to separate them and Ariel can live as a Wolf on the packgrounds. i would love that ♡

Reader-728799

oh my god.. update soon 😖😖