Unhinged Comments

Kirsten Burmeister

i was happy neron was able to reach her too. hopefully with him and the help of her family and friends she will be able to overcome the darkness, although that would mean forgiving people. I am still unsure how I feel about neron and kiya ending up together...neron definitely has grown.. he needs to re-evaluate and change his life (maybe kick the alpha bucket and just live his life)...i can see them being friends for a long time, no clue if a physical relationship is even possible with the past they have..maybe with the mate bond severed through Osiris they can live as friends and move on with other people romantically...i am happy i don't have to work out the details though and that this decision is up to our lovely author 😊

Hell yes!

Justmee

***LAWD, please let Kiya be okay! I seriously hate buddy right now 🤬! Another great update. Thank you! Ignore the negative comments. People have to understand you still have a life outside of writing and it's the holiday season 😊. Keep up the great work 🥰! I'll be patiently waiting for another brilliant update 💃🏾

yes!!!

Cassandra

how many chapters does this book have?

JustMee

That chapter sent shivers down my spine 😩! Glad Phoebe finally checked that ass 👏🏾👊🏾! I’ll be here patiently waiting for the next update 🥰

Oh my Kiya 😭😭😭 It's about time she releases herself from the nightmare. I am so proud of her. Revealing this kind of dark secret takes HUGE amount of courage. I hope her healing starts from here. Oh thank you, Ms. Author.

Meaghan Prue

Marii hope you feel better soon we understand please do not rush creativity and awesomeness just to get the book done there are other things we can do too so please rest and don’t strain your self

Nathalie Iliana Van Kerckhoven

Every Chapter is Writing with so much truth and emotion, exept ofcourse the existence of were-wolf. Even in the "hello-ween" part is much of truth in it, that we all can Fall in Darkness when the World have done us wrong..even when we are good hearted. Sometimes I wish that i had an were-wolf part who talk to us and Guide us 🤣 Again, Nice Chapters and I love the realistic Touch in these Books. keep doing the good work!

Albertina Mcclain

please gives us longer chapters.

Nasteeha Hussein

I hope neron and kiya end up loving each other. I know neron made mistakes but he was young and losing his mother and sister made him do what he did. but know I hope kiya give him chance since we already know that he loves her

ChinaRedd

"Kiss my ass!" yeeessss Kiya! She is unregretably fierce. Can't wait for the next update.

Veronica Loya

this book has me 🤦‍♀️😫😭 my emotions are everywhere!! one minute I’m laughing the next I’m pist!! or I’m crying!! I really wish she snaps out of it and kicks his ass for making her turn to the dark side can’t wait to read how it ends!!

Sniderin

W. T. F.

erin genovese

How often is this book updated?

l can’t wait until he dies and l hope Artemis and Neron does it 😡😡

Lyss

Oh My Gosh it feels like Christmas waiting for a new chapter. I am rereading untouchable while unhinged is updating. No other books compare right now. I am so excited to find out what happens next. I know others won’t agree with me but I hope Neron and Kyia end up together. Marii I just want to comment on how talented you are. You capture us with your amazing writing. I really hope someday this becomes a movie!!! it would be amazing. I love this story!!!!

Mez

Does anyone else lowkey want a Diana? I do 🤣 She’s so lively and cute!

Jael Brown

Damn it I knew Octavius was Osiris, things are really starting to heat up now I love this story so much. I hope Neron gets the chance to follow his dreams.

Rosemarie Carrillo

how often is the book updated?

Jael Brown

I am so blown away with Phoebe right this girl is freaking awesome. I glad she has Kiya's back the way she does and if Kiya doesn't slapthe taste out of Odessa's mouth I know Phoebe definitely will. I am so glad Odessa is going down and in the end she will have gained nothing but heartache and misery but that's her fault.

Sierra Russell

HEELLLL YAAAAASSSSSS!!!!Phoebe to the rescue 👊👊👊 Im sooo happy someone finally called that b*tch out😠😠🙂🙂

omg!!! kick his ass Kiya or lucid Darien or Neron to the rescue??? the man Neron trusted to help him he’ll find assaulting Kiya... so many ways for this one to play out.

india long

I just finished the first book and I cannot express how excited I am to start this! You are an incredible author!

well Kiya is not the girl she was back then. I’m sure seeing him knocks her back for a second but she is more than capable of taking care of herself. I’m sure Tristan is about to get his

Christy G

Oh my goodness a I'm so excited to read this.

Humairah Mahomedy Rangila

I found this series so compelling. I cannot wait for updates, or I will wait until this book is finished and then binge read.

It's so good to see that Darien is still in there and aware of all that's happening.

G.A Coppola

Ohhhh no!!! I hope Neron finds her in time. how does Odessa know what Tristan did? was she responsible for it somehow? or does she simply know bc of the power Osiris gave her?

Meowdel Em

I knew it!!!!! I knew he could reach her at least partially if not completely!

ballen282004

omg Kiya kick him in the balls sis and run!!! please have Neron or Jackie tear Odessa and Tristan a new a$$ hole!!! thanks for the update rooting for Kiya to make it through this 🙌

Emma Atkins

My favourite colour (and my hair) are purple :)

Jessica Pye

Ooooh it's about to go down!!! She has been spotted and Jonathan is going to get for the 2nd time from Nikolai. Lyra's pain is heartbreaking and to be reassured by Isabella that it was Kiya for sure and not be able to find her..oh boy. I got a feelin things are about to crank up a notch or two!

Why girl! Whyyyyy! Anyway, let me tell you how I was hook the first time I read your books. You really gift! Cant wait to see what you have in store for us! Congratulations!!

Reader-008277

Nerons ancestral genealogy is dark and twisted and that’s by choice. As Nerons life unfolds from childhood to adult he has grown tremendously, from kind and loving to dark and twisted to kind, sensitive, patient, etc. The influence of both his parents had drastic differences in his character but when he became a man he made a choice shaped by his life’s events he chose to walk an honorable path, sorry, repentant making amends for past behavior and accepting the consequences for his errors. In my world that’s responsibility and he does deserve a second chance at a life with the true love of his heart, and yes he has/ needs to work hard moving heaven and earth to prove it because of the nature of his infraction. He is becoming the leader needed to change the course of Zircon Moons pack history into one of integrity and that’s another tremendous challenge. Kiya said she wanted natural love not the bond...looks like love for her with Neron is happening naturally without her realizing it and it’s beautiful. it’s my hope that the love Neron has for her will reach beyond the distance of mind links because it’s a much greater connection (spiritual bond) and it leads him to her. I hope she begins to feel him in a way like never before destroying the bond of the mark Osiris has placed on her and together they deal with him as a force like never before. Osiris is evil by choice and how do you overcome evil?... by doing good. His story is touching I’m sure there’s much more and I’d like to see a piece of him given back...maybe the twin brother comes back into his life and /or he meet his father or maybe a family reunion. Anyway I have hope for Sir Evilness.

Kat Layman

i love this book iv not been able to put it down and cry sobbing for neron i cant wait to read how he leaves his pack for her and her wolfs love i hope they make a new pack and she can be nerons luna she would be a great luna and they have pups of there own

Michelle Cox

I loved the book at first, but lately I feel I’m struggling to finish. Now this part of the story with this guy has gone on long enough I’m starting to feel over it. idk I hope it wraps up soon.

I wonder how Jonathan is after the encounter with Neron?

Joel Holt

So does this mean you haven't finished the book, im new and a little lost right now

MzDiva1987

I was like oooohhhh sh*t! this was long over due. keep it up👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

aaaaayyyyyyyeeeeeee really wanted to see a fight BUT I'll take it! lol

Reader-008277

Osiris’ ancestry has me more curious than ever as this story unfolds. Who really was his mother? Titan being who he was, I can’t see there being mercy for her allowing birth then banishment (life) plus him keeping the kids whatever the reason. She birthed in prison and then banished, who cared for them until they were able to serve in servitude? Was she his (Titan’s) sister? Why was she not immediately killed once her truth exposed? Why had Titan not mated? He was not balanced due to the missing mate and what is it about the white wolfs power that they seek to have and use but abuse and destroy the person who possesses it? If i recall correctly, Jonathon knew Halima was an avatar because she shifted once while a slave and he saw the wolf but kept her in servitude. Osiris’ actions are exactly like Titans up to this point aside from mating with Kiya. He has marked her without consent, which as she puts it is a beacon for him to keep up with her. He’s assaulted her pack (family) for his selfish gain and he’s smitten with Kiya because she reminds him of the first person he loved (Amber) who undoubtedly didn’t have the same feelings for him. And why do he need Kiya’s help in destroying Zircon Moon pack? He’s a big powerful avatar with goons why do he need her assistance? Kiya is Garnet Moon which greater blessings flow to because of her. Was Nadia his bond mate? if so it apparently had no affect on his madness. Osiris is/was rounding up all the avatars and imprisoning them to harness their power...for what? He made Cerebus from avatars that’s why it’s so hard to kill him.

Ah! Poor Neron, he’s being tested, big time. But he’ll emerge stronger because of it, and be a better leader 😊

Lois Withers

GOD DAMNIT!!!!! you got my eyes to water Lol but omg I'm dying here come on you can't write a chapter like that and then make us wait lol this story is freaking amazing and someone needs to make connections to make it into series or movies

Annabananaz

Hey Marii, have you had any thoughts about doing a book about Osiris' history. I feel like he has a story to tell and would make an interesting backstory.

Amarfis De Los Santos

I don't think she should end with Neron. Although he has changed, he really hasn't made any sacrifices for her. He should have never asked her to kill her rapist, he should have done that himself. I also think that if he really loved her, he would leave that pack and follow her were she is happy and can heal. I don't think he should he the one to stay with his pack and for her to be Luna of a pack that damaged her so much. No one there is willing to sacrifice anything for her. Why should she become their Luna and give them the protection of her wolf? Even when she fought Tristan Neron said to her "is a crime hurting a pack member" so he smack her with that when it wasn't a crime when they were hurting her. She shouldn't end with him. He may have change but I think is out of guilt for his own behaviors, not love.

Reader-087914

I would love it if Diana was Nuria and that she is there to watch over Kiya. But I would love to get here back and be mated to Darien. That would be awesome. And that Jonathan give up his life for his daughter to be with his mate. or something in the lines of that. Maybe Neron and Kiya can kill him together.

LuciAnn Lara

OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! Wow!!! I truly didn't see Osiris coming in wow awesome twist!! can't qait.to see how Kiya and Artemis are going to beat him

Chasin’ You by Morgan Wallen came on today and it just works with this newest chapter (42) 😭😭

Taina Iosefo

Oh man... always into dee with the updates and trying to figure out what’s gonna happen next. I was wondering what or how Neron felt his bond with Kiya breaking. love that Halima her inner child has made it to the surface yet scared for what she has gone through and what will happen next. Feelings are true no matter how much you try to hide or bury it. Can’t wait for the next update!!

Reader-381524

i did not see that coming at all. now I feel bad for Osiris and I never thought that possible. Great job creating such a complex villian and a great story! I’m loving it!❤️❤️

Falina J. Ham

is there a book 3!?!?!?! im in love with the books!

Taina Iosefo

How can anyone be so full of themselves to not feel anything for anyone? Her own sister, she asked for help and nothing. I hope her brother and parents hear about this from her other pack members. They need to know what’s going on now. They have more right to know.

waking up to two new chapters 🤩. does anyone think that Neron will give up he Alpha title to be with kiya?

Moonlight Muse

love the story so far, and cant wait for more updates i do hope we can see more of neron and kiya moments as he has grown so much as a man and thinks selflessly for kiya.

Chala

marii, I love these books and cannot wait for more chapters!!! you put everything into these characters!!

Sherisa Weston

hmm I wonder if Kiya was meant to be Darien's second mate. He seemed jealous when I assumed he saw the necklace Neron gave Kiya. Hmm Darien and Kiya used to date but broke it off because Darien had a mate but now he doesn't hmmm

Emna Makni

ok.... i am crying..!!!

Jamee Moore

I won't lie. I shed some tears and then yelled at the last chapter. Leave it to Osiris to ruin the mood. Like at least let a girl cry her moment out, geez!

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

Woah! An Elder suddenly came out of nowhere. Where in the world was he during Kiya's enslavement? And obviously he's a prick like Jonathan. Kiya will never get justice she deserves with this two. I hope Elder Sage and Jonathan gets btheir karma soon. I am glad Tristan is dead. Although I want Neron or Raina to do it.

louisa van eysden

wow so many emotions, you've written this so beautifully! ♡ but I'm running out of tissues lol ♡

JustMee

***sigh 🤧! Things just got real. Now we will see how badly Kiya was truly affected. That embrace from her parents will allow all the real emotions to flow. Neron made the right call. He needed backup to help save Kiya. Another great update 🥰

Stacy Jefferson

I had a feeling there was something up with Tristan I just didn’t think it was this omg!!! Habe to reread a few chapters to if I’m what I’m thinking about Neron thinking he is one of his best men.

Be your own Alpha, Neron. Maybe Kiya can be the pack's leader while you study. And Osiris... whew. I wish Octavius wasn't you, but oh well. Now, who hurt you? why so dark?

JustMee

*** tears 😭! I’m relieved that Neron is standing by her side. I have hope that Neron and Onyx love will be enough to bring her back from that cliff she’s standing on. Not going to lie though. It feels good to have all the ones that hurt her living their lives in fear for a change 😒🤦🏽‍♀️🤷🏽‍♀️! Thank you for another great update.

I love this book but I will wait until you finish it.

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

Onyx!! I'm falling in love with you! ❤

Stacy Jefferson

ok it’s been 3 days now no update what’s going on not cool!!!

Tanya Johnson

is anyone else unable to read the updates? I've been trying all day and it keeps saying oops try again :(

Paige Copeland

I really want them to be together so badly. ugh

Shannon Reed

Wow!!! I have read both books (up to ch 38 in book 2} in less than 3 days and am in love!!! Anxiously waiting for what's to come. 🥰 Great job!!!

Elizabeth Turner

Its like I'm a herorin or crack addict! I keep checking for an update every 5 mins because I need a fix! I NEED to know what happens! Amazing job on the series, I can't wait to see what happens next

Poor Neron, but his decision shows that he’s matured a lot since Kiya came back

G.A Coppola

ouf! I feel like this is another step back for Neron. I hope she’s able to see the difference between him and his father. I feel the only way their relationship could work is if the father is banished or dies or they go live somewhere else. I can’t see her staying in that pack.

Sherisa Weston

I am so happy Kiya and her friends are finally leaving that horrible deplorable pack. Good riddance. Now it is time to deal with Osiris even though Odessa and Johnathan have not been properly dealt with

love it!! It would be great for Neron to give up Alpha for her. He seems to only do it for duty not a passion for him at all

Brenda Vega

so dumb. she should just tell them...only making matters worse....what's the saying...2 heads are better then 1....dumb

Jenn McCoy

its time for the pack and neuron that want a better future to go with them let Johnathan have the pack back of those that want to stay. Kiya needs her home, family and friends. I just hope they can fix Daren before they go back so oddessa doesn't go with them.

spazz 31

luv this book. very well written. just hate waiting for updates

HanaBana

Oh em geeeee! What a cliffhanger! I'm glad Kiya got revenge for what that guard did to her, and now that Neron knows maybe he will punish him too! I hope now that Kiya got her revenge it might have released some of the anger and that she will be able to being to recover. I'm looking forward to more Kiya and Neron moments though!

sawanee

Diana...... only sticking with Neron and Kiya...... Marii, could Diana be Neron's sister and Kiya's childhood friend..? that's a genious story inside the bigger story.... !

Im about to sleep when I saw the update. My heart is beating so fast that I think Kiya would be in my dreams tonight. 🥰

Absolutely bawling 😭😭😭😭 Beautiful chapter. It's great to see the character growth in Neron that the possessive Alpha loves her enough to let her go.

first of all, you’re a genius writer. Woww can’t even describe the feeling I’m having when I read your chapters. Bravo!! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 Secondly, you should not let negative comment affect you. you obviously have a life beside writing. Don’t let anything disturb your peace or mind. You strong and you know it ☺️☺️ Again bravooooo ☺️☺️

AZM24

Yes! this chapter was great, loved the banter and steamy make out sesh!! LOL 😂 ...do it again!!

marina simeonoglou

my apologies. seems someone else has the same story. it would be nice to have some more chapters as the tension is growing within the story 😁😉

Justmee

Wow! Just wow. Everything in me loves what she did to that horrible SOB! I only feel bad that it was Osiris pushing her to do it. Either way the scum is dead. I really hope Kiya can still find the light at the end of this long tunnel. She deserves her happy ending. MERRY CHRISTMAS 🥳☃️🎄🎁🎀

Lips

that was magnificent

Elsa Rodarte

when did Tristan abuse her?

Paige Copeland

Okay that genuinely made my heart hurt a little bit for Darien. Actually even more so for his wolf, but I am just repulsed by Odessa. I mean it’s not like I haven’t been this whole series, but to treat your mate as an object and ruin his life for someone who doesn’t want you? Whew, the delusion...

Justmee

Why did I feel like crying for Kiya? Lawd have mercy 😪! I'm honestly in love with all the characters in your book but Kiya holds a special place in my heart ❣. I felt her pain SMH 😔🤯! I'm glad she was able to release some of her pain. ***sheesh that was deep! Thank you for another wonderful update.

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

They want Kiya's forgiveness and yet they did nothing when everything went to chaos during Tristan's execution. Raina and Neron at least did something to earn her forgiveness.

Albertina Mcclain

This last was is nice! I need more Neron and Kiya!

AZM24

GREAT update!! Love the Darien POV and that he is aware of his mate’s evilness! Odessa needs to get a major tude change or die, but I feel bad for her wolf who is good and loves their mate!...Can’t wait for more Kiya and Neron and maybe more dates and the continued blossoming of an amazing love story!! #bringingthemclosertogether

Reader-828631

I cried for Kiya and Neron - Alpha Jonathan brainwashed his son, Neron Prince use to beg his father to spare her when he was younger , He spewed hate and birth hate in Neron Apha Jonathan is dangerous and Neron will kill his father .Something fishy going on with him

G.A Coppola

yes Phoebe expose that brat,Odessa! 👏🏼

Sondra Calmes

To me, the only possible way they can redeem themselves is to die saving her life. Then and only then can they maybe get her forgiveness. Love these books. You are a very talented story teller.

I think this also gives Neron a new perspective on why Kiya was terrified of him when she was in heat. He was only aware of the physical abuse back then 😞

Brenda Walker

love the book cant wait for the updates

Great update! I’m glad Kiya isn’t going to kill Tristan (though I imagine that that could change next update, especially if he starts taunting her under Osiris’ influence 😬). Thank you, dear author!