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Legend of Gru

I usually don’t like reading books that are ongoing because it’s like eating scrambled eggs over the period of breakfast, lunch and supper where they’ll get cold and icky and you won’t want to continue eating them but you do because it’ll be a waste. However, this book is the only book that I’m reading that’s ongoing. It’s written really well and it’s like water, regardless of when you have it, it’s always refreshing.

Sherisa Weston

I love Raina's reaction. Did you all realize Neron is going to disband the pack and probably start from scratch with the four members he can trust?

Christi Smith

is this book complete? I'm only asking because I one part it says complete and when I somewhere else on this site it says ongoing! I'm confused but that doesn't take much! lol This series has probably been 1 of the best I've ever read! I look a million times a day to see if there is an update! lol

Jael Brown

Odessa and Darien are mates, 😫😫😫😫😫 Ugh. Why wasn't the mate bond strong enough to make her forget about Neron. Odessa knew for awhile Neron was not her mate so why hold on to the hope that he would love her. I know he cares for her, she was his first in many ways but being someone's first doesn't mean you will be there last. How is it that Neron just abandoned his feelings for her to say that he was in love with Kiya and no longer Odessa. I hate her but I do feel sorry for her, no cares for her and that is a hurtful things. Even though she is reaping what she showed.

Jessie Rose

eughhh read 40ch in a day, plus the last dozen from untouchable 😩 the suspense is killing me! so much goodness and turmoil! I’m soo hooked ♥️

Shazam

read the first.. now reading this.. you certainly manage to write in a way that draws people into the book.. when reading, you feel as if you are part of what is going on.. so many Emotions, elation, tears of joy, tears of sorrow, anger at how some have acted... I could go on, but I just couldn’t do it justice.. definitely a recommend read.. fantastic.. x

Rebecca Carlson

@Marii Solaria I have to say that out of all the books that have been written on various apps across the board (and it has been a lot on my end), your writing is phenomenal. Looking forward to the coming chapters and seeing what happens next. ☺️

Meaghan Prue

i dont feel bad for osiris at all i think he made it up to get kiya too pity him and be like him evil and souless he killed his wolf he has no mercy for anything or anyone so no i dont believe him he is a liar like the devil that he is

Reader-008277

Marii Solaria Is Diana Selena, in owl form? She shows up when they both (Kiya& Neron) need comfort and encouragement plus it’s one of the most unlikely beings to love up on werewolves being they’re cuisine in the norm. Both have taken to her and look forward to her appearances. Also she told Kiya yes, she would see/visit her before sending her back to earth. when will Kiya learn the potential of the gift she has been given and begin to walk in it on a greater level?

Was it Jonathan or Osiris? 👀

Sherisa Weston

I wonder where Osiris' mother is and if his twin brother is still alive

Cassandra

what happens to the wolf once they leave you? can you get it back? do you become weak r u just human now without the strength you had with the wolf? and now that Siris has taken his power back from Odessa does that mean Darien will return to normal? and I thought you could not leave your mate once you’ve claimed them wouldn’t that make Darien weak and sad maybe die because he not with his mate? I can c y kiya can leave bcuz he rejected her first she excepted and than she died and came back alive as someone different I still don’t get why he could change his mind about his previous rejection and try and mate with her again he should be out of luck lol

Brittney Allen

@marii solaria is there going to be a 3rd book? will you write about each avatar?

Reader-018349

So kinda figured it was a trap and Kiya can’t completely escape him cause she’s marked. I have a feeling this 2 part ritual is to ressurect Amber and turn Kiya bad. Also part of Osiris tale has been proven to be a lie. If the portrait on the wall is really his parents then what he told Kiya about not knowing if his mother made it to his father after she was banished is a lie. He absolutely knew his parent made it out together, he’s living in their castle. In order to help Kiya, I think everyone is going to need some history lessons from Zircon, somewhere back there are going to be the answers they’re going to need to rescue her and bring our questions to light.

Silvia Stomp Gummels

i want some kiya and neron romance

Marcy Carrillo

Keep Ariel. Ariel deserves a chance at a better life, better human her truest of true mates. She deserves the happiness Odessa robbed her of because of her selfish reasons. ODESSA needs to go.

Geraldine Ferraren

That is a powerful request from Ariel, I hope Neron honors it.

i love this series so much! i am on the edge of my seat begging for more. ❤️❤️❤️

Nicola Jones

I am loving these books can’t wait for the following chapter fantastic 😘

MzDiva1987

it’s about time Neron saw the truth for himself. Odessa never loved Darrien and she never really love Neron, loved only what he can give her. Odessa’s real true love was always power. it’s sad

Went to him and? And? 🤔

S Andrews

the cliff hanger...REALLY?! so when is the next update? I love the book but I'm so cross with the lack of ending.

Taina Iosefo

I hope Kiya realizes how much Neron has grown and truly wants the best for her. letting go is always hard. I hope he finishes his drawing and able to give it to Kiya as a reminder of their happy times together. she remembered him being awesome as an artist. That’s such a great thing for her to bring up. Can’t wait for the next update.

Glemmett Maylor

Finally! I love me some Darken, really happy he finally rejected her. Better the pain now than a broken heart every time she betrays him. I hope he gets a second chance mate. He deserves it. But watch out now for Odessa. She is a woman with nothing more to lose. That makes her even more dangerous.

Sooo Darien seemed extra protective. Making up for his lost time with Odessa, or something else?? 🤔

Sarah Wolfe

So worth the wait! I’m buying the series when available.

Sherisa Weston

oh my goodness Nuria or the mom is the owl!!! I feel like that last chapter confirmed it but which one?

Jennifer Quimby

when will have more chapters? i need more, my brain will not shut off from this story. also will there be another book or will this be the end book? please please please send us more 😁😘

I was actually considering ‘shipping Osiris and Kiya but now I am not. Putting the family in danger and sending a monster to hurt and kidnap us not the way to a girl’s heart. I am still not team Neron yet though so... I guess I’m team Kiya kicking ass and taking names forever!

Weeb Lord

Wait!... Is this like the next book of Untouchable?

in my opinion - I hope Lady S does whip and torture Neron and his dad - though not kill Neron. I hope that Onyx can find a way to release Artemis from her prison in time to save their humans. I think Diana is going to be a very important role as well.

Brittney Allen

awesome update! first off yay!!! everyone survived!!😪 phew had me worried there for a hot minute 😅 Secondly is Darien more upset about the photo or the necklace? 🤔 will there be a bong chica bow wow reunion between Darien and Kiya where he confesses his undying love...or shall he be a casualty to unrequited love😫😭😭😭. join us next time on Unhinged: Kiya's Revenge 😆 🤣 😂

Songsearrae Cummings

YESSS!!!

Good Odessa about to see old lady Karma. Poor Neron he continues to redeem himself. he isn’t being selfish he is strong enough to let her go. I hope they see each other again soon and form a bond maybe slow but a bond at least

Ana Pizarro

I can’t wait for the next update❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Taina Iosefo

NO NO NO NO.... this can’t be happening... why didn’t she open it sooner why didn’t she say to turn around... this is al Osiris doing. I hope Neron finds and saves them especially Kiya. That was the most purist bond I read and felt when Neron and Kiya we’re saying their goodbyes. I’m so sad. what’s next....

Albertina Pelzer-Mcclain

I hate that she left Neron, but I understand. I don't want Kiya to end up like Osiris. Hopefully everything will work out with her and Neron and Kiya will heal from the love they have🥰

Elizabeth Edmondson

It takes serious talent to publish chapters while still writing a book, without leaving plot holes. I've read hundreds of books across a few apps and this is the best author I've read.

Now that is what we call “snapped!” She brought wreck, pain and havoc to that ass and I loved it! Jonathan better watch out because it looks like our girl is handing out total destruction and hugs today and she is fresh outta hugs...

Man, what is Neron going to think of that display?? 😬😬

Sharon Jones Linder

as my anticipation increases I am on the edge of my seat can’t wait for the next chapters

Lois Withers

I did love it not gonna lie especially the ending .... right now in my life I'm pretty much in the middle of a nervous breakdown .... so that rage Kiya just showed I felt it but I really thought odessa really would have thought of something more like Kiya said with the silver because I could so see her kicking odessa's ass even with a silver knife sticking in her and I mean a beat down and have her cave her face in

I'm trying to read but it says oops try again, what is going on please

Jael Brown

Mari don't kill me but I have to ask why was Jonathan present at Kiya's birth, did he know from the get that Kiya was an avatar since she was born with blue eyes or was he there because Steven was his best friend. There is alot that Jonathan is not telling and I really hope in one of the next chapters we found out what he knows and why he hates Kiya.

Sherisa Weston

what if Osiris entered Jonathan loke he did Odessa, like they made a deal together. Omg for the love of everything author don't kill off any of Kiya's friends and family. I can't handle her having any more pain

676lucy

fxcccck I can’t!!

Kristy Anderson

I really hope you up date this book soon, I gotta find out what happens and if Kyia and Neron can be together

Kathy Mac

when are the updates

Berry Bear

Onyx is the best :D I would like to read a little conversation between Kita and Arty after all this happening. just Saying :) love Arty ♡ congrats ao first and second at the Ranking :)

Meryam Ahsan

I knew she was better than that! I think Steven should kill Tristan. Or better yet, they should shoot him. Death squad by silver bullets

Meaghan Prue

Give it up weasel lane you are never going amount to lyria and her husband they loved and wanted her when she had nothing now she has her life back on track and u want to crawl back like the worms u are. stuff your apologies with silver and wolfsbane disgusting mutts

NO NO NO I CANNOT STAND THE SUSPENSE!!!

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for 12/7! YKB2YB

Meaghan Prue

one more thing if the skank does die can we please see a chapter of selenes judgement on tristan and odessa that would be probably the best chapter ever

Lois Withers

do have a good holiday!!!!

Glemmett Maylor

Is it bad that I so wanted him to kick Jonathan's ass? lol

Reader-008277

WOW!! 😳😢. while her anger and hatred is valid for ovious reasons I want Odessa to live. Her confession and every hearing it will help turn the tidal wave of ill will towards her and hopefully the people will see how they have erred and been a pawn in Jonathon and Odessa’s hands, carrying on like mindless puppets without a will to think and act honorably. By living Odessa would have to deal with the punishment deemed for her actions at the very hands she is fighting to get, Neron, what an absolute slap in her face and see the hurt, anger, disappointment and hatred in his eyes for her, a person he once loved and had hopes for good things with her mate, in turn take her life. Kiya’s stability will be challenged wherever she goes. her ultimate fight is with the growing darkness within trying to completely extinguish her light. Leaving the environment is not going to help because she is being influenced more by Osiris, he is a demon and will follow her. she must fight the greatest fight of her life and release her pain to allow her light to take over,

kittyXO

I need more!! please pretty please!!❤️

Samantha Shini

i read the first book and up to here in 3 days! I love this book. wish it was longer lol

Poor Darien. He’s one of my favorite secondary characters and I’m sad he got such a ho for a mate. Odessa got her just desserts in his rejection. I’m not even sure Odessa deserves a redemption arc at this point 🤷‍♀️

Janet Bedford

She shouldn't forgive them after everything that's done to her. Put Jonathan in cells as well as her mum and dad give them a taste of what happens to her

June Chase

haha Odessa

Фатя Султанова

please share a longer chapter once in a while. you give us redemption code anyway ❤️

Reader-003394

I know Odessa brought on all that is coming to her but a part of me feels pity for this lost soul. something in her past made her this way, I wonder what it is. poor Darien his heart must be breaking . I do hope their Selena gives him a second chance mate and a good one. Also I wonder when it will come out that a part of Osiris is inside Kiya. Her sadness is turning into darkness, please let Neron save her.

Yey!!! Mommy and daddy are here now, baby girl!

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

I feel bad for Neron. 😢 That cliffhanger though.

Tahiti_650

oh gosh these updates turned me into a big cry baby

Rebecca Marie Squires

How much and often do you update please Marii Solaria? Many thanks

Justmee

*sheesh 😪! If I know Jonathan as well as I think I do. Kiya's real father better sleep in her room on the floor with the door locked. That old SOB will not let her go without a nasty fight. I know the next update will be epic. Ready set FIGHT 👊🏽👊🏽👊🏽👊🏽👊🏽

ok Neron is becoming a favorite to win Kiyas heart ❤️ He’s owning up to his past and Showing her he’s right there for her and he’s beside her for everything she does. I do agree with him… I truly hope she does not lose her self. God I hope alpha Anthony comes! I know this is something that she needs to go through however, she does need help.

Extacy925

I don't think she should kill him. Neron should be the one who should do it. Also I think everyone that falsely accused her should be whipped with a sliver whip for what they did to her including Neron.(whipping post)

JamieHichew

I’m devistated for her. I can’t even imagine. I hope Neron gives up being alpha and takes her far away from there 🥺😭

Alyssa

I want Lyra to beat this egg donors ass! How could these people turn a blind eye to her pain for so many years!!! OMG they are disgusting

Nivia M.

this is disappointing. I really hoped that Kiya and Artemis would eventually reject Neuron and fall in love with someone who hasn’t and won’t hurt her, someone who deserves her. but whatever I guess.

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

I think Kiya executing Tristan is what Osiris wanted...for Kiya to give in to the darkness inside her...

G.A Coppola

Phoebe gives me life! 💪🏼 👏🏼

Justmee

I'm glad I read the comments. I would have missed the changes made to the previous chapter. So I read them both again. Just when I thought this book couldn't get any better. You have once again surpassed my expectations. Bravo!!! Please give me the next update tonight 😪! I'm like a kid at their favorite toy store while reading your work. Thank you for taking the time to fill my day with your amazing talent. FYI I'll be here waiting for the next flawless update.

Sherisa Weston

uhmm who is Orion again? 😅

Taina Iosefo

Man I’m glad the family’s getting closer and some answers to how they can find Kiya. So excited to see what happens next.

"Rapists are scum. We'll be doing the world a favor" ****** This execution is too late to give justice to Kiya. They may think killing Tristan would avenge Kiya from his assaults. But part of me thinks, they just want their guilts away.

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

This story is getting so gooooooood!!

If I remember correctly, part of her power is to be the judge, jury and executioner in the Moon Goddess stead for werewolves right? Like part of her power is to make those decisions? If I am remembering that correctly, then she can certainly take out this trash ass pack and still be on the side of right in my opinion. kill them, kill them all! 😏

JustMee

***sigh 😩! I need more. I apologize, I’m super greedy when it comes to your books. I can not get enough. Thank you for the update (loved it). Please try to give me two updates at a time 🤭😂! I’m stressed... I need to know what happened 😅🧐🤯

Debbie Boston

ok this doesn't make sense. Osiris can change and take over any body he wants to, so he is just temporarily using Odessa. killing her is not going to kill him, therefore, not solving the problem of how to kill Osiris. so dont kill her just keep her in prison like the govt does now.

Junita Braithwaite

I admire Kiya's strength in this chapter. She was able to face her attacker and in some ways overcome her debilitating fear but now I also fear for her struggle with her sense of morality. Did she take a step closer to the "light" side or the "dark" side? I'm so excited to see what happens next!!!

I love Onyx 🖤

Kat

Praying that Ariel gets to be with a human that truly cherished her and Darien gets the love he deserves ❤️

Shannon Gibbons

I am absolutely in love with your series! I cannot wait for the next chapter to be released. I finished the 1st and 2nd (until the next chapter release) book in 3 days. Keep up the great work and feel better!

Lois Withers

I really hope the guards that hurt Kiya are alive cuz I wanna know what neron with do to them ..... I'm a victim of it .... it happened once and took me like 10 years to finally recover but to have it constantly I hope she goes all car battery and metal box spring on their asses

Reader-857386

I hope Nadia and Lucien escape being captured and help the garnet pack. I’m still guessing on Diana being the reincarnation of Amber or his mother. Another thought, his wolf Set is in limbo, not dead and meets Artemis. Lots of guesses and scenarios, hopes and maybes. I get frustrated cause this book seems to go on forever. But still love the read. THX

rita lora

what are redemption codes for?

ChinaRedd

OMG! This book is getting better by the chapter. When is the next update? Can we get an update schedule. I be so sad when I get to the end of a chapter.

Meowdel Em

so here’s an interesting thought 🧐... and I’d just like to throw this out there.... Halima as Halima is still mated with Neron is she not? Because the rapes and everything else occurred after she was nine, at which point she was still bonded to Neron .. so my mind is wandering around the fact that is it possible he’s the only one who may be able to reach her mind via that link? Halima’s not Kiya’s...

avjones

it’s getting crazier! *bites nails* omg I never bite my nails! 😋

AZM24

Ahhhhhh you are such a jerk!! 😂 leaving us hanging like that, why?!?!!! OMG I can’t wait for more!! 🥺

Nasteeha Hussein

when is the updates

JustMee

🥳 <—— this is me after the update!!! 🤯 <—— this is me after that ending!!! I’m starting to think you like to give me mini heart attacks 🥴🙄😔! Love this update... please keep them coming. You are a brilliant writer!

Taina Iosefo

Seriously... I wonder if Kiya notices the hickies on her neck or upset with what Artemis did or maybe it’s something totally different... the anticipation is too much. can’t wait for the next update!

Ashley Fuller

Ugh pulling at the heartstrings and bringing tears to your eyes with the breakdown of the parents!

JustMee

Hope you’re having a blessed holiday weekend 🍽🍁🦃. Just wanted to let you know I’m waiting on the update 🥴🧐! No rush 😂😂😂! Just a reminder 👀😩