Unhinged Comments

Tammy Lewis

how often do u post new ch? i usually wait until book complete to read.. but i just finished untouchable and want to know what happening next...

I LOVE that he is having Kiya do it 💜Neron is definitely impressing me!

AZM24

after chapter 20 I was worried Kiya was taking steps backwards with Neron but I’m SOOOOO HAPPY with how 21 ended!! I don’t think Neron will kill Odessa, he may see it as becoming his father I think he will banish her. As for Neron’s father I hope he gets the full wrath of Neron and Kiya, but wait will that feed into Osiris’s evilness?!?!!...that scripture about the white wolf and their mate was some deep shiz. A lot to ponder with that!!...LOVE IT!!!❤️ FEED ME MORE!! 😁🙏🏻🥺

rita lora

I believe that Nerón & Rayna are truly repented of how they treated &allowed Kira to be treated, I believe those 2 should be given a second chance, I don’t think Rayna’s parents should be forgiven @all. I still believe Diana is the moon goddess, I think Kira still has a lot of healing to go but all this is a step closer in aiding the process, Johnathon needs to be exposed & publicly held responsible for everything that has happened to Kira. @MariiSolaria this is an amazing story

I was wishing to hear from Neron. Yey!!!

I love both books

AZM24

Wow you never cease to amaze me in giving more depth to the story! Ugh, how can the affects of Osiris’s mark be taken away?! If she comes clean and completely trusts Neron will that help? #bringingthemclosertogether...that nightmare is also CRAY but I know the light in Kiya is stronger than the darkness!...can’t wait for more!! 🤗🥺

Reader-018349

I’m still routing for Neron and Kiya to get together. If anything a few years down the road so they can get to know each other more and have stability in their lives. To the author: you have done an amazing job. Your books are captivating and leave you in suspense for more. You are a gifted aurthor. Keep doing what your doing.

Rebeca G

Love this most recent update! I think you've do a wonderful job with portraying abuse and trauma, and the lengths people will go to avoid their own guilt. Question- do you think you'll ever go back and write the direct aftermath of when everyone (esp neron and raina) found out shes innocent.(even in flashback) It could be interesting..

Legend of Gru

The way I love Phoebe!!! She’s a whole Queen 👑

Hey Ms. Marii! It's already New Year in my country. I just like to let you know that having read your stories is still one of my favorite (unexpected) things that happened despite the misfortunes of 2020. Keep safe everyone! Happy New Year!!!! 🥂🍾🍸

Elsa Rodarte

wow very raw

Esessanee Wallace Moten

30 chapters please let kiya and neron get together please

Bethany Watters

awesome books! pls keep writing these. ❤️❤️❤️

Taina Iosefo

Phoebe is awesome!! Can Neron not mark Kiya to get rid of Osiris’s mark? just curious is all. hehe I want things to work out with Kiya and Neron.

Darien was bitter and mad but he was also dropping truth bombs! LOL

Caroline J Hodges

I love this read the author is very imaginative and creative, it is the first book I have been emotional about! I’m 100 percent invested in it haha! this is a brilliant read with amazing characters! I wish I was as talented to be able to imagine such things! amazing work 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

Kira Galkina

After all what happened you would think the wolves must have a mind link set between them... Can’t wait for next chapter 😊

Reader-087914

I don’t see an other ending. how do I unlock it?

Sobina Hammad

I really don’t get it y does she keep repeating stupid mistakes they have the witch avatar who can’t sense evil makes no sense neron knows Odessa yet he does nothing her friends are not even going after Darien she does not understand that he can hurt her friends for her apparently she does not trust them like she should sorry but the story is angling towards madness

JamieHichew

another amazing chapter! soooo much emotion! 💗

Taina Iosefo

OH MAN NOT GOOD. Wait Octavius didn’t have much of a interaction with Kiya... so what’s his storyline in this whole thing besides wanting power and Kiya?

Weeb Lord

I feel embarrased, I lost my comment .w.

Ifeoluwa Adeniyi

Unhinged is the perfect title because that is what Odessa and Jackson are. some people are really crazy

Taina Iosefo

OMH... come on this is a huge cliffhanger to leave us all on without another update. I really hope Neron sees what’s happening and saves Kiya. And then I hope Kiya is able to open up to Neron about this situation.

JustMee

You can’t be serious... leaving me on the the edge with that ending 🥴! Give me more please 😂! I absolutely love this book. Stop teasing me 🥴😂😂😂

"Do it again... " best line in the entire story!

Reader-008277

Marii Solaria Marii, do you have more stories in print? If so how can I retrieve them?

Elizabeth S. Clark

when is the last two chapter on the unhinged comes out?

Jael Brown

Neron needs to tell Kiya how he feels and how he truly regrets causing her so much hurt. They both need to heal. I am glad Neron regrets what he did because often at times the abuser has no remorse for the person they have abused.

HanaBana

Wow! Artemis and Onyx! I need more chapters like these! And then that cliffhanger!!! *waits impatiently for the next chapter*

FiestyOne

omg!!!! such a cliffhanger! I cannot wait to read what happens next ☺️😬

Jael Brown

Yes Phoebe tell Kiya and Neron about that tramp Odessa. I am so glad that Phoebe can read people so well. Love this chapter and things are starting heat up.

Lois Withers

I almost cried here lol

Teresa Calhoun

waiting on book 3

Justmee

***oh my 🥺! I'm so upset for Neron. I'm happy that he recognizes Kiya needs to leave his territory to heal again but my heart still aches for him. Odessa is slowing getting everything she deserves. Hopefully she loses her mate as well. I can't wait to see what the next update brings. You amaze me every chapter.

dee brack

I can’t wait to read the rest of Unhinged, great writing!. This should be a movie!

Tammy White Evans

more chapters please!😁

G.A Coppola

yes Artemis! get it girl

Lois Withers

does anyone know when that will be? the suspense is killing me

Alyssa

I’m going to need people to stop leaving nasty comments for our beloved author. You are doing a wonderful job, and I love that the characters celebrate their natural hair and wear locks. Very good representation in these 2 books. Ignore the haters

Reader-680486

I can’t wait for your next update! Read this and your first constantly over the last two days! Obsessed, ha! How ofen are updates please?

Marii Solaria

New redemption code for today, 12/1! TRZRVQ

Taina Iosefo

OMG... I love how they both have a connection with Diana. I love more that Kiya is opening up to Neron. Yay! Just hope everything will be okay later on and who said the last statement? 🤔

Tahiti_650

This update was so good. so glad Kiya is starting to trust and open up more to Neron. please keep the updates coming

ashley surrency

i NEED the rest of this story...and like now!! so im seriously impatient

ballen282004

I loved this update. I'm finally coming around with the shipping of Neron and Kiya. onyx sold me on it. I was smiling and so happy for Kiya in these last two chapters. 🥰😍🥰😍🥰

Yet another awesome chapter...Love it 👍 Thanks Marii

Lois Withers

you are pure evil!!!! lol the suspense is killing me this is sooo awesome!!!!!

Legend of Gru

so this Osiris guy is being such a pain in the backside! He’s putting people in this Z-moon pack under his spell, the very same people that tormented Kiya when she was still there. Thisbwill cause her to forget all of the positive validation she’s been receiving from the G-pack and lead her to regress to her dark thoughts. Then he’s going to claim to be the only person that understands and cares for her! He’s a literal snake! Even though he has a snake! Honest scum of the earth. I also think Jonathan knows of the impeding darkness coming from Osiris, but because he’s blinded by power and pride, he’s going to be one of the next people that Osiris will target because he already has a weak mental state. I feel sorry for Nero as well, he needs to have a whole counselling session for his guilt. Not saying that he shouldn’t forget what he did, but that he shouldn’t let it ruin him as well. Our minds are tricky. This is such a mind game I tell you.

Taina Iosefo

I’m so glad Kiya is slowly opening up to Neuron. I hope they can work together on figuring out how to defeat Osiris. Awesome writing!

MirahLove

ooooh this is so good!! 😆 I’ve been waiting for this! It has my heart pumping. Cant wait for more

Okay... we got a here a teenage wolf. 😂🤣😂🤣 basically this is her first kiss. Give her a break. Yeah! I enjoyed this chapter. 🥰

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

I hope Odessa has come to her senses now that her wolf has abadoned her...serves her right for being a b****...

Lois Withers

omg this was so beautifully

I can’t read the update 😭😭😭

Reader-018349

I’m such a romantic. I know it would be a long road, but I hope Neron and Kiya end up together. I also hope that Neron, Valerian, Raina, Kwame, Lorelei, leave Zircon Moon and create a new Pack.

Glemmett Maylor

What the hell?! I'm already here bawling my eyes out, now this? I am so loving this book

Shannon Reed

So good!!! I know it would seem ideal for Kiya to end up with Darien, but, ..., I'd like to see her with Neron. 🤷‍♀️

Sherisa Weston

Neron should not feel guilty for letting Kiya go. He couldn't have made her stay he wanted to. She wanted to leave and if he forced her to stay she would have hated him and so would her friends and family

Glemmett Maylor

Holy hell! You can't leave me here....nooooooo! I need more now! lol

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

I won't be happy until Odessa and Jonathan are DEAD. And Osiris! Ahhh Neron, you're learning SO MUCH! Unfortunately, it looks like you still have a lot to go thru still....

Jael Brown

Will Kiya ever get a break, things just keep coming back to back. I do think that it's funny that Odessa's wolf wants nothing to do with her because of the stupid decisions she has made

Taina Iosefo

I love your stories!! I hope that Kiya will open up to Neron and let him know about Osiris.. She can’t just keep it to herself. I think Kiya is having real feelings for Neron. She’s bugged she doesn’t feel the sparks but that could all be because of stupid Osiris. I love seeing Diana more when the time fits. I always had a feeling Diana is Nuria.. Can’t wait for the next update!!

Meaghan Prue

also dont forget what selene said to Kiya make good choices and this isnt a gopd choice to be with him he is a demon

I feel like Kiya might fall in love with Neron despite the mate bond. I really like how the author thought up these characters. ❤️

Reader-018349

I have to say these 2 books are so captivating I keep rereading them over and over again....so I feel for Osiris, but only a little bit because he has turned into the monster that Titan was. He has shown he is no better by taking Kiya and marking her without consent. I’m not sure of his entire plans for her, but it’s not going to turn out how he wants. As for Neron and Kiya, I went back and reread the chapter on when he asked Selen to remove his rejection and if you think about it, she never really did that. She said that what he does from here on out; that his actions and decsisions will decide the fate of their bond. Without even realizing it, Kiya is getting what she asked for as far a real realationship blossoming because she doesn’t know that Selen never fully repaired their bond. Neron truly loves her and is keeping his vow that he made to her to keep her safe and loving her with all he has, even if they’re not together. I feel somehow that he’ll end up making an ultimate sacrifice which will brake my heart cause I would love to see them be together. As far Zircon Moon goes, I think I Neron was going to disban it, but don’t know for sure. I think he should take the whole Gamma family, Val, Raina, and Adonis, the newer warriors and trainy pups and their families and start and new pack. Leave all the old families and the old Zircon to its fate. They should find a new territory and rebuild from the ground up and in the same likeness as Garnet Moon. If that happens I definitely see a future for Neron and Kiya. They can change the circumstances they were born into and make a new one for the better. Selen said Kiya would change the world. Last note, part of me feels like the Diana the owl could be Nuria watching over her brother and best friend, but we shall see. I can’t wait for the rest of this story and book 3.

Roza Pestana

oh so maybe Jonathan is working with Osiris? Jonathan must have told Osiris that kiya and her family left so that bastard sent Cerberus and the rouges to attack them. The rouges were just a diversion to keep Kiya's family busy so Cerberus can abduct Kiya

Krissy Cookie Kretchmer

oh goddess I'm about to start this book now... and it's not finished, and there's a cliffhanger?! not that that will stop me from reading 🤣 why am I rooting for Neron though? I have no idea... but the Moon Goddess destined them together for a reason! I do NOT like Neron's dad at all. 🤬

Legend of Gru

I genuinely appreciate the sacrifice which Neron made for Kiya and makes me toto for their friendship even more. Any potential relationship between Darien and Kiya that’s not platonic......I highly doubt. Before the whole Odessa thing, they were the bestest of friends and him fighting with Kiya and protecting her blind spots was doing what a friend would do. With all that’s happened especially Osiris adult-napping Kiya, I actually feel sorry for Neron. It’s going to tear him apart when he finds out. Maybe this is when we’ll discover what or who Diana is 🤔

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Paige Copeland

He deserved it plus some, but I’m really concerned that she agreed with Osiris. I hope she can get her rage back under control, and know that to keep Osiris away she has to keep her rage under control. In my opinion the only other people that still deserve her rage are obviously Odessa, Neron’s dad, and her “parents.” Everybody else has worked tirelessly for her forgiveness, especially Neron. I’m still really really rooting for them. He was a terrible person when he was around his father and Odessa, and now he has proved repeatedly that he CAN be trusted, and he does love her. I want them to be together, but not because his father wants them to be. I really feel like the only way they can be together is if his dad and Odessa are dead. They are pure evil and will always be a problem.

Lips

I usually lurk the comments and feel the feels with everyone else here but omggggg that was intense and satisfying and heart wrenching 😭 I was positive that he was her rapist based on her reaction to his name when Neron said it. I wonder if she will let Arty take over her body for a while now. I hope she does 😔 I have mixed feelings about her shielding Artemis from those moments in the past. I want Artemis to know so she can get angry for and with Kiya but I also don’t want her to feel the horrifying memories and pain like Kiya and I understand why Kiya blocked her from it. I know I am gonna keep re-reading the chapter till the next update 😬 Great work Marii!

Tahiti_650

i hope odessa lives. she deserves to be tortured as kiya was for all her wrong doings

T Rich

Nuria is the owl! I'm convinced!!

Yes! so glad we can finally expose Odessa finally!

Kari Shockley

pls end Osiris already. No more ppl under spells, how many flipping obstacles can one couple possibly fight against.... sigh. Let them ne together already.

Sherisa Weston

Did Kiya tell her parents about Darien? I know she told them everything but just want to know if that was apart of it

Savannah Felix

we need like 5 chapters please!!!!!

Alyssa

I hate this pack. If Nerón wants to be with her, he can’t be alpha of this wack ass pack!!

Pupu

Many wants Neron to give up being Alpha. but I think he should not. he would be not taking responsibility of making a better regime in the pack if he gave up. He should give up only after he has made a better pack. leaving responsibility is running away.And being Alpha now Neron can better protect Kiya from other dangers

Pupu

it is sad to see how dark the place is where Kiya is falling into. it is understandable why she is sucked into darkness. however I am still hoping .. she gets pulled out from that place and Neron and Kiya gets a chance together

Geraldine Ferraren

Odessa has it coming to her. I feel she would survive this though however Neron would be the one to end her life. I really want Neron and Kiya to be together still. . . Even if it means for Neron to step down from Alpha for Zircon Moon. I also want Kiya to use all this rage and end Osiris as I do not like the path Kiya is going on.

😳😳😳 yes Phoebe

Christine Londo

how often do you update. this book gets better and better

Monica Paz

I wish Neron would leave the pack for her. Maybe then he can have a chance to earn Kiya’s forgiveness.

Sierra Russell

PHOEBE IS A BAAAAADDDD BIIIIII*CH!!!! Damnint man I knew I loved her character for a reason. I just hope the best for Kiya and Neron.

Alyssa

I need Kiya to kick Osirius ass and Kill Jonathan

Mia

I am glad that Kiya had her revenge on that guard... I am also glad she finallly told everyone of what he did to her - albeit under those horrible circumstances. It also highlights and reminds everyone at Zircon pack of how they treated Kiya terribly. (to even allow such attocities to occur!)

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

Go, Neron! Go and save Kiya!

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

Phoebe you rock!!

Jael Brown

Now did Jonathan really sign his soul over to satan or did it already belong to him. I don't think this evil bastard caused the accident but he was definitely following Garnet Moon to wait for his opportunity to snatch Kiya up. And if he did cause the accident where is the coward now?. Osiris hates the Prince family with every fiber of his being so would he work with Jonathan, I don't know. Oynx is so cute and very intelligent he has always known or at least suspected that Kiya was his mate and yet Neron choose to ignore him when he earned him to stop hurting Kiya. I am glad Neron and Raina realized that their selfishness not only hurt but ruined Kiya's life. I can't wait to see what Neron has in store for Zircon Moon it seems many of the pack members are old dogs set in their ways. You can teach an old dog new tricks but it's hard to change the mind's of those who are older because many of them refuse to accept change. Even though Neron is the new alpha many of them are still easily dissuaded by Jonathan. Not only that many of them are weak willed and easily influenced. Neron definitely has his work cut out for him. I don't think Neron would be able to kill his father, Jonathan is an asshole but he is still his father. Something big is going to have to happen to get Jonathan to soften his heart, what we just have to see. I can't wait for the next chapter, or chapters I pray.

Brittney Allen

I'm getting a vibe that Kiya and Darien were an item at one time by what he said to Odessa and why Kiya was so hurt when he was under Odessa's control. Am I reaching or nah? 🤔

Brittney Allen

beautiful chapter...I would love to see the drawing neon is doing of Kiya with her parents...I'm still up in the air about Kiya and Neron. I'm going to wait and go with what ever Kiya decides. 😆 🤣 😂 great update🥰😍🥰😍🥰

Tina Rodriguez

is there another chapter or book coming ??

Mrs.Hyde

You really do a great job of the inner dialogue of these characters. You also do a great job because this story has alot of emotional depth. And really makes you think about what it really means to forgive another person for hurting you.

ZiZo ELF

OMG😻🥰

ballen282004

yessss Kiya!!!! now get Jonathan and Odessa!!!!

Albertina Mcclain

omg! when is she going to accept Nero! Her wolf accepts his wolf.

I still feel so soorryyyy for Odessa. But I am also annoyed.