The mafia princess return Comments
Visitor
it’s a good boon
11/03/2025 03:42Visitor
love this book so far can’t wait to see what else happens
11/03/2025 03:32Visitor
I really like this book and I can’t wait to read more to see what’s gonna happen. To see if her and Kayden can get back together, kinda like the mafia books
10/31/2025 15:16Rani Gaston
I think you are doing great. there are some errors but finding out English isnt your 1st language i am happy with what you have written and your story line so far.
10/31/2025 11:13Visitor
great story
10/29/2025 16:36Visitor
love
10/28/2025 04:11Visitor
it’s pretty good so far
10/28/2025 01:50Visitor
I’m loving this book so far
10/27/2025 02:09Visitor
omg love this all ready
10/27/2025 01:55Visitor
good story but the editing is terrible
10/26/2025 21:51Visitor
amazing book sad made me cry but hoping it’s a gd ending
10/26/2025 12:34Bethany Guerin
I am absolutely in love with this book right know it’s amazing so far
10/24/2025 01:49Visitor
so far it’s great. but definitely needs some more editing
10/23/2025 14:40Amber Hall
I absolutely love this book it’s amazing
10/20/2025 10:07Amber Hall
your doing amazing keep up the great work
10/19/2025 18:48Visitor
I have been reading this story for a while now love it its full of lost but found pain, lots of pain but lots of healing, protection and l am hoping revenge that gets rained down on the scum bags
10/15/2025 07:54Ashley Ferguson
I’m still early in but I am enjoying greatly. I can’t wait to continue
10/14/2025 13:08Zy Love
love
10/13/2025 22:02Visitor
loving this book
10/13/2025 21:59Devon Burnett
when is the next chapter coming?
10/13/2025 18:04Ass Love
love
10/13/2025 13:04TT Love
love
10/13/2025 12:25Visitor
nice one
10/12/2025 07:29Visitor
nice storyline, I enjoyed reading it
10/12/2025 01:01Visitor
this is wrecking the storyline for me. This abused girl is now going to be with all these boys? Kayden just shares her? yeah. I am out
10/11/2025 19:38Visitor
ok. I get they love her but a 17 year old sitting in all these laps is not appropriate. her boyfriend yes. The rest not so much.
10/11/2025 19:18Visitor
it’s like you aren’t even trying. major surgwry. died on the table twice. now she can take a shower? yeah. no
10/11/2025 18:01Visitor
No remotely believable. Internal tear in a min artery she would have even dead within minutes if the strike.
10/11/2025 15:30Visitor
no brother would tolerate this. he would have beat Nico’s ass
10/11/2025 15:00Visitor
love the novel so far
10/08/2025 05:43Visitor
the novel is great, I hope she meets Kay and his parents again.
10/07/2025 21:06Visitor
great book very addicting
10/07/2025 17:03Visitor
love this book can’t to read the rest of it
10/07/2025 16:15Visitor
I love the story it is so engaging. It would be even better with editing.
10/06/2025 22:50Visitor
This author clearly likes to use the word WERE instead of the NEEDED word WAS. Author needs a better proof reader
10/06/2025 12:12Visitor
So is he wearing a suit or dress if he’s a boy?
10/06/2025 00:44Visitor
good story, can wait to read the rest
10/05/2025 20:21Aries Murphy
I love this book
10/04/2025 23:32
Rosemary Rutherford
direct pressure can stop blood from flowing unless her fingernails dug in so deep that she hit an artery.
10/04/2025 20:02Rosemary Rutherford
if she was a master to all of these fighting techniques why didn't she protect herself from Gregor, her mom, step sister or Gregor's boss?
10/04/2025 19:29Visitor
thank you so much for the amazing updates you make so frequently and I hope your family and you are doing ok after your emergency. knowing the language barrier to English, what you write is really so impressive! you get most of it right to where even if there are some mistakes it’s easy to follow and keep the story flowing. I’m sorry some are not as nice in their comments but know you at least gave one fan who is excited for each new chapter!
10/04/2025 14:59
Reader-751608
great storie, but its a lot of People to keep track of
10/03/2025 22:29Visitor
So far the book is good. I just feel that with the injuries that she has you guys don’t portray much. Also does spellcheck
10/02/2025 21:09Visitor
it’s a good story line but the grammer could be better
10/02/2025 17:00Visitor
it is a terrible story. the starting is pretty good but its stretches for ages.
10/02/2025 09:38Visitor
I am really enjoying the book. It has a great hook to get you in the book I am looking forward to finning the story.
10/01/2025 00:12Katlyn Charette
very good book so far
09/29/2025 23:41Visitor
good story
09/29/2025 16:44Visitor
this book is amazing so far and I’ve only just started it. I can’t wait to see where this story goes.
09/29/2025 10:11Visitor
made someone laugh a few house ago? Honestly the story seems good so far, but the constant misuse of words if seriously having me reconsider trying to finish this story. Olease fix ALL mistakes
09/28/2025 16:17Visitor
needs serious editing
09/28/2025 12:47lorena corrales
The story is good but needs a bit of excitement
09/27/2025 18:45Visitor
love how the book is going so far
09/27/2025 02:04Visitor
good book
09/25/2025 21:18Visitor
liking this book
09/25/2025 05:13Visitor
It's a good story to read
09/24/2025 13:42Visitor
this is a very interesting read so far. I can’t wait to read more of this book and see how the love situation develops
09/23/2025 19:44Visitor
really enjoying this book
09/22/2025 02:36Visitor
this is such a good story! I am drawn in since the beginning but I need more!!
09/21/2025 18:13Visitor
I need more chapters!! 💕😁💕
09/20/2025 00:13Visitor
this is so good so far
09/18/2025 15:44Visitor
it is a really good book
09/17/2025 22:31Visitor
loving it so far
09/17/2025 19:35Visitor
love it
09/17/2025 18:02Amber Hall
you are doing amazing keep up the great work
09/17/2025 13:51Visitor
I really enjoy this book so far, it leaves me always wanting to read the next chapter
09/17/2025 12:43Visitor
its really good
09/17/2025 01:27Visitor
very good read
09/16/2025 22:16Katrina Franklin
this book is the best one I’ve read so far it leaves you wanting to know what happened next.!
09/16/2025 15:45Visitor
I love it
09/16/2025 09:05Visitor
I love reading this book
09/16/2025 08:22Cassie Lee
I’m loving this book so far and hope it continues to be an excellent read thank so much
09/16/2025 07:25user2412253794
okay the question I have knowing English is not your first language. when you say string are you referring to a g-string or a thong?
09/15/2025 13:55Visitor
so good so far
09/14/2025 02:42Visitor
This book is amazing to read but also sad with what she's been through
09/13/2025 19:12Visitor
love it so far
09/13/2025 12:49Visitor
loving this book
09/13/2025 08:08Visitor
this is the best book I have read. I absolutely love it!!
09/12/2025 19:23Visitor
love this book
09/12/2025 16:16Visitor
omg i love the book to adictive
09/12/2025 15:13Brenna Giblin
agreed that this is a good plot, but the editing needs work
09/11/2025 21:22Visitor
the story is interesting. there needs to be some editing
09/10/2025 15:26Visitor
love it
09/10/2025 10:27Bezoeker
leuk verhaal maar aan de grammatica schort het hier en daar een beetje
09/10/2025 10:16Visitor
good book, exciting characters!
09/08/2025 21:38Tiffany Smith
I love it so far
09/08/2025 06:51Visitor
love it it so interesting I hope he gets to see her again
09/08/2025 03:58Visitor
love this story
09/07/2025 23:58Visitor
good story hope she gets the ending she deserves
09/07/2025 22:53Visitor
so far it’s been a good read .
09/07/2025 17:52Visitor
good read
09/07/2025 17:43Visitor
this book will keep on toes
09/07/2025 15:10Visitor
good story so far loving being able to get into the characters
09/07/2025 12:40Visitor
how long before the story ends I’m just starting to read now
09/07/2025 08:32Bezoeker
a great story but you can see clearly that English isn’t their first language or second of needs editing
09/07/2025 05:23Visitor
I have been enjoying the story. I do wish however that the relationship was only only Lia and Kayden. I love how sweet they are.
09/06/2025 21:36Besucher
story has potential but it need another serious round of editing
09/06/2025 17:05Visitor
It's a good book, but I think Talia got too comfortable too quick
09/06/2025 09:18Visitor
Liking theory so far
09/06/2025 06:40Visitor
decent story but the grammer is not. needs help with editing before publishing
09/04/2025 23:29
