The mafia princess return Comments
Reader-238343
so far so good
09/04/2025 01:04
Visitor
it’s good but it needs to be edited better.
09/03/2025 19:25Visitor
love
09/03/2025 19:20Visitor
It's a good story but could be better if you got someone to edit your work before publishing it
09/03/2025 15:39Visitor
great book so far. haven't gotten very far but it is my attention at the beginning
09/02/2025 21:26AssasainWolf101
Okay I'll be honest I was giving it a chance even with all the grammer errors. It starts out fine then all of a sudden all this info about the character comes out of no where and its almost like she hasn't gone through trauma. On top of that she somehow all of a sudden goes from not knowing any family to remembering a whole slew of them. I tried and theres not many books that make me break. I hope the author revisits this one day and rewrites it.
09/02/2025 14:44Visitor
love this book and thrilled to read more of it
09/01/2025 07:40Visitor
love the book
08/31/2025 14:00Visitor
love the writing and the story line - looking forward to finding some of your other work to read as well
08/31/2025 11:02Visitor
it’s addictive
08/30/2025 04:52Rachel Kullman
Also it being her real mom that helped with the abuse puts it to a totally different level.
07/15/2025 00:54Rachel Kullman
I like the differences in them. One version of her tough as nails the other some what a delicate flower but, not fully & than not having everyone love her an be there for her gives it a different perspective.
07/15/2025 00:54Rachel Kullman
I see this book is similar to your other mafia book. I also like this version as well. Will you be adding to this book as well?
07/14/2025 22:31
