Fates Hands Comments

Cici Chavez-Marquez

love it

Katrina Stordahl

I cant get this book to open anymore 😩 haven't been able to for a few days

Marie K

makes you wanna read more, so far I’m loving it. thanks!

Oris Lawani

I love the book, now that I'm really enjoying it, is when the rest chapters are locked, this is not fair, I want to read more today

Karen Jacobi

So far decent story, but very poorly written. Punctuation would help. as well as a writing class.

Kendra Moody

I need book 3 please

Amanda Levis

Ashton is the funny one out of the werelions

pamela bettis

I love it so far. It's really good. I can't wait to read more.

Janice Schuster

how do I get the rest of the chapters

Reader-217133

I found this site and I love it

Hannah Ebertowski

Great story so far

Debbie Tates

I can't put it down, great book

Tammytamikalee Tavai

umm..book is great..this unlocking chapters is just pathetic.👀👀

Ayla-Marishna Rowlands

just started reading and I am absolutely obsessed

Rita Queen

couldn't read alll just chapter.... I wish I never started reading......this sucks

Michelle de la Cruz

lovin it

Robyn Charles

I like the story so far

Kathy Ellis

the more I rear the more interesting this book gets

Lisa Higgs

love this story ❤️

KaosPixi3

I usually have to wait a few days to read a few chapters. I might be hooked lol

Claudine Davoren

what I'm finding annoying is reading it then all of a sudden it stops and says oops try again

June Vandouser

great story.

FV Zammy

Where can we buy the whole book?

Hitana Azul Raviz

i love it

Valdeen Safedien

pls can we know how to open the bonuses for n not wait so long to open other chapters..Author pls respond

awesome read can't wait for Jack's book to come out. keep writing and I will keep reading 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Jessica Cleveland

is it Adira or Adair?

Lori Ameling

You won't have to wait for long.

Kristen Short

I have to kno before I continue to read. FL isn't going to continuously get hurt again?

Valdeen Safedien

pls help me 🔑🔓unlock chapters 🙏

Melissa Woods Lemons

great story so far

Trina Castjean

Absolutely love this story ❤

Bonnie

I'm enjoying this book so far 😃

Tammy

the story is building and I would like to unlock more chapters

K.C. Wimberly

So, how often are they updated because I’m completely invested and not knowing the ending is giving me anxiety. Lol! I can’t wait for the 3rd book. This has been the read I’ve had in a long time!!

Shauna Loomer-Mulder

this is a well written, suspenseful, romantic, story full of interesting plot twists while also having romance, it also deals with bullying and abuse in an intriguing way

Sherry Martin

I am so hooked!! Dying to find out what happens next!! On chapter 7.

keituza kau

very good story.. poor spare..atleast she has a chance for better life..

omg Lily deserves to find her happily ever 💖 after

Reader-066926

I think it’s a dragon

Nina Penning

who think this? The King?

Christy Linville Spradlin

love so far

Donna Thom

love this book so far

Jay E Woods

lori ameling you knocked it out of the ball park fantastic read …

Jennifer Hawkins

What is the name of the first book?

Katrina Feighan

Great book

Megan Alling

I am getting really into this book it is beautifully written

Sabrenia West

Intriguing...enjoying the read.

Ladan Malek

beautiful story ❤️

Ezekiel Happiness

its so crazy and beautiful ❤️

Carla Harris

This book is awesome so far

Romina Apollon

beautiful

Kurtisha Brooks

How do you unlock chapters?

Mary Anne Clayton

love it

Sanjni Kumari

so far love the story ❤

Sara Dean-Reardon

so far so good!

Vonakile Hlongwane

I earned 21 bonus points, and all of the sudden before I could even use them they just disappear. Where are they?

Reader-854304

I really enjoyed this story.

Chrissy Gun

so far so good

Bev Horton

simply the best story I have read in this genre absolutely enthralled from first to last can’t wait to read jacks story you have a wondrous talent keep the stories coming please ❤️

Carolyn Tucker

so far grest

Abigail Lonia Smith

Love it

Bezo Maimbo

should have not should of

Reader-819860

The beginning of this book had me hooked, however it did fizzle out towards the end. it was a good read.

Lorraine Russell

very good read

Christi Thomas

I’m already in love with these characters!! this is a great book so far and I’m really loving this storyline.🤓🤓

Ebony Rosado

amazing story crazy twist and turns.. never kno what to expect next great story

faulkdizzy

so far not bad but I get thrown off with the POV. will keep reading though.

Jenny Burston

love it

Jackie S Byrd

so far so good

Reader-601715

these were great reads. great characters and plots. lots of suspense, humorous parts and drama. please post rest of chapters quickly

libra inday

nice story

lenya Brent

This book is bringing me so much joy in reading it, thank you for sharing your craft. please continue to write stories, you have a true gift.

Lucilyn Cuevas

very interesting, want to read more...

love it

Mere-Wairita Ecawa Naisua

So far so good 👍

Patrice Karas

so far, I'm enjoying , but I would prefer to buy the whole book in one goal.

Elexis Craig

I must say, I am really enjoying this book, but more than some of the others I've been reading on these apps. This has definitely got me hooked. Poor King..

Michelle Mckinney

how often do you do updates I normally don't do these kinda of stories but seen it on FB so far it's pretty good but please don't Drag it out

Lisa Ferguson

I am excited to see how this one progresses. the story line has everything a great book needs and it keeps me interested to read more!!!

Lori Ameling

Book 2 chapter 1 is now posted with the Spare, decided to do it as a bundle. that way all three will be right here.

Scryn.Gurl

The beginning is thrilling

Claudine Davoren

what I'm finding annoying is reading it then all of a sudden it stops and says oops try again

Sondra Robinson

love this story.

FireJewel Howard

Lori ameling....this is fantastic...I would like to buy an actual printed book

Laura Graham

loving the story the people are well written and 3 dimensional, my only complaint is my little pet pev is some gamma mistakes other then that cant wait for the next chapter.

Janinne Broxton

Chapter 6 or 7 her name changed from Adira to Adair. was that intentional?

Monja Oosthuizen

Very well written can't stop reading

Ioana Pop

Liked the story și far

Charito Calabia

love the story

I want to thank everyone one for reading this story. I post at least one daily, however it isn't showing that this story is updated. Just wanted you to know. check it now and then for the updates. Love you all,😉Lori

Johanna neal

OMG I love this book!! please update more chapters!!❤❤❤

my comment about the chapters being locked was deleted?

Ashleigh Nadeau

I'm addicted to this story! I just binge read the chapters that are here. can't wait for the next update!

Lori Ameling

To all my reader's, just letting you know that, the story will soon come to it's end. I hope you will all continue to enjoy it.

Pat Taumaa

omg just started this book and love it Needing more updates please author you have me hooked on ur story already😊💞

Lori Ameling

Thank you everyone , I hope you are all enjoying the story. I love to read all you comments. please if you find something wrong let me know.

Congratulations on getting the story signed

.love the book, when is the next update? i cant wait! ❤

Reader-727304

Why other chapters lock now ?