Fates Hands Comments

Judy Jay B Banda

lovely story

Sadi Henkaline

Adira is one letter off from my name. (Sadira) 🖤 I've never had a story use anything that even remotely makes me think of my name.

Cynthia Cindy Estrada Long

enjoying so far!

Melissa Bell

when is the book for the spin off of this

Carmen Adorno

please how do u unlock! help me

Reader-169525

the base of the story which you have here is a great start. I think you need to fill out the story there are so many ways to fill out the characters world. you did in ways fill out some parts but just not enough through the rest of story. when describing characters and places your painting a picture for your reader so the can see, hear and smell every bit of the scenes set. these are wolves so add the smells sometimes. get creative with the way you paint the scenes and characters. characters need to feel real so readers can connect and want to know them. you start with giving them emotion but it was anger and love that’s it. I’d like more backstory as well as motivation for why characters are the way they are better descriptors for the way they feel give them range make sure readers have better understanding of the shifters in this world why they act as they do. I didn’t like the way everything moved so fast without a better healing process.

Crystal S. Jacobson

I’m so hooked!! can’t wait to read to the end. good job!

Audrea Isaac

this is a real good book so far

Lizbeth Rosas

enjoying so far

Rose Rogerio Cardoso

how do you unlock chapters?

Stacey Thomson

it's good so far

Angie Tiger Lazcano

did anyone passed the chapter 6???? started showing error messages after chapter 6

MAUREEN BOWMAKER

Very captivating

Emily Hinton

I thought Marnie wolf was Hera?

Steph Leschner

read the first 10 chapters but could r get into it as I’m not a fan of how it is written. sry.

Jill Faver

I finally gave into reading this book after so many ads for it. not disappointed

Fatima Williams

I love this chapters so far

I really like the books. Please keep up the great work.

Katrina Feighan

Good read so far

Karen Haney

love this but i can't get into chapter 6

this book has the potential to be something amazing but the author struggles to keep up with the story line and forgets characters or changes their names

Nonie Gonzalez

how do you unlock chapters

Tina Moxley-Hamilton

awesome storyline.

Vanessa Thomas

great story so far looking for more

Nifemi Ani Kuponiyi

I love this book.. how do I continue reading

Randi Holden

I'm Sooooooo hooked!!! neeeeeeeddddddddd moreeeeeeeee

Tricia Yesildal

would drove to be able to read this . says scroll but won't let you .

Candice

I am hooked great story so far

Pauline Tanner

good so far

Kari Wall

The plot was ok. The writing needs polishing big time. 3/5 starts...

Kimberly Pevehouse

very well written, with interesting characters.

Carol Ann Hurter

Love this story

Aniemerr Dela Cruz

nice story

Reader-196417

I’m curious as to how this book start in a first person point a view of spare and jumped to 3rd person

Reader-282727

enjoyed the book. I have not read a book in a long time. work, life, school, have been in the way. I read a piece on FB and decided to continue. may I say, you captured the audience. thank you for bringing me back to reading.

Stephanie Warren

love book one and on book two cart put down

Susan Fuehrer

Good start

Melissa Anderson

kind of saw that coming.

April Graesch

I am looking forward to reading more!!!

GnoMe- ToXicYT

good story

Valdeen Safedien

how do we unlock chapters

Mylyn Carbonel

Nice ebook

Mary Williams

Love the book! Great job!!

terrie aranda

good sofar

amorsita

loving the story so far can't wait to read the rest

Marsha Boyd

love this book getting really good

Jan Daniels

: 6ch³/ R5

Olga Garcia-McRae

so good. can't stop reading it

Maureen Otieno

Nice story

Robin Schlimgen Perron

Alexander is short and heavy.

Kels Brand

loooovvvveeeee

Reader-484844

Am I the only one who checks back hourly for an update? lol

Kiesha Berryman

The three chapters you must added were amazing. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more. Great writing...I have some suspicions on who the best truly is so I'm excited to read more.

Caroline Greeney

Great book so far

Lucilyn Cuevas

suspense is ascending that hooked the readers. I lobe.to read more.

94DeZz

almost 1am and I cannot stop reading.... Amazing book ❤️

Carlena Wilson

loving the story

Ana Margarita Teodoro

Loved reading both your books! Very stress-relieving and direct to the point. Love to read more. 😊👍💕

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That name though. I am just imagining if i had a name spare i would give it a fancy pronounication to make it sound like spa - re ore sp-are-re or something and i will hate my mother for life

C Lorraine Manning

Enjoying so far. Amazing

Tina Smith

can't wait for more

mummy moo

can u bulk unlock chapters?

Vicki Dutton Reid

love it so far, can’t stop reading!!!

Sherry Cripe

love the chapters so far

Lori Haygood Boykin

good story

Mercedes Gonzalez

I love the story

Akerele Christiana Adebukola

living this book more and more. next chapter please

spices03

nice book, need more chapters

Luna Wolf

I'm was hooked by the first page. keep on writing. this is so good

Pamela Ratterree Hicks

love it so far

Maria Kosiek

This one hell of a book! I read it in one night. Aside from the grammar errors and misspelled words, I enjoyed all the characters and their journey's. I want to thank you on bringing Child Abuse to your audience, not many Author's would. As a now grown woman, I was a victim of child abuse and then sexual trauma in the military. I applaud you.

Reader-354449

enjoying reading its a curious read

donna batts

how can Michael mind link when his wolf is gone and most of his enforcers wolves are gone? Doesn't sound feasible.

jan cud

This book is fantastic, I am dyslexic and love books but can find reading stressful. I tend to use Audible books but have not read so much for pleasure in years. it's also nice to see we all make grammar mistakes.

Maxine Virgo

well I never saw that coming!😳

sheila velezv

I was just curious about it. Now I’m hooked, can’t stop reading. I want to know what’s going to happen to Spare.

Lori Gresl

This was an awesome read!

TeeTee

🗣 WHERE IS MY DUNCAN 😭😭

Del Budden

I really love what I have read so far wish I could read more

Ashley Santana

love the story so far

Michelle

really enjoyed reading this book. can’t wait for jacks story I do hope the others are in it to.

Daniel Jimenez

o thought in the second book Jack's seconds name was same not morgan.

Mouélé Makendzo

this is so great

Alix Sandvid

starting to get good

Tammy Thrash Hollingsworth

I’m loving this story so far

Zikhona Pasiya

looking forward to hearing more. very interesting

mvsphoto

I'm hooked!

Chandra Ford-Anderson

attitude not additude

Lori Ameling

The Spare is now "Fates Hands" A three book series . everything is the same, just changed the name.

Reader-905306

is this book part of the unlimited section?

Geesje Wright

is it three stories????

Shayla Holloway

i like this book but is it a reall book like can I go buy this in a store ?

Quinnda S. Hansell-McMullen

love it and actually love the name Spare!

Debra A Jackson

I’m really loving this so far

Reader-491360

I’m really liking the story so far. It makes you want wonderful things for Spare.

Tammy Jans-Ward

I'm hooked

Brandie Tiana Diaz

I like the story so far. just wish writers would keep up with the right characters. if you can’t remember Ashton from Asher then maybe not name them almost alike 🤷‍♀️

Reader-249566

repercussions not reprecussions

Rose Rogerio Cardoso

love it

Reader-619916

I wonder how the king figured out that the tea had a drug in it?