Untouchable (The Moonlight Avatar Series Collection) Comments

Reader-863789

Damn that was deep. I’m glad she’s making Neron work. I mean a part of me wants them together but I definitely DON’T want her to make it easy and if they don’t get back, she has every right not to love him. so if they don’t complete the bond, then I’d rather they both stay solo. Great story.

Petra Du Plessis

is this the first book

Reader-357800

Was hoping you wouldn’t have Neron fall into darkness. They already went through this with Kiya.

Neva Dat

I just want them to go ahead and mark each our it will probably keep asshat out his head as well

2 wrong don't make a right...

Katrina Miller-Whittaker

Amen to the quote at the beginning of the chapter

Reader-863789

Odessa should have never been in his bed! Especially after talking to the moon goddess. Give her the boat. I feel bad for her true mate

onyinye everest

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭ohhhh

Ta1sha

so funny and so cute I can’t stop picturing nuria in the tree waving at her brother so funny

🥰🥰

there are some battles you can't fight alone. She needs to talk with the other avatar and friends, specially the Alpha.

Vampire is getting me very annoyed, even when all counts in love and war.

Robin Austin Haas

yes phoebe would definitely know something

Samantha Johnson

this book is soooo good

Robin Austin Haas

really good story

Book is good, I know I read one soooo similar to this one, but this story is really good.

Robin Austin Haas

I'm loving ❤ the quotes before each chapter! bravo to the author

Shebee1614

I’m loving this book and I’m hoping she and the Beta become mates, although she aske the Goddess to not give her another. She deserves that type of love with another

love this story tho wish I could follow

Reader-357800

please please let them both fight together and not let Jonathan mess with Neron

Cynthia Nicole Duvall

love love love!!!! can’t wait for an update when you are rested!!!

3 guesses that Odessa is Darien's mate

At least there are people who care about her but can't do much about her current situation

Ta1sha

neron

Shebee1614

So much for that wish

Well that was a steamy chapter!!!😮😮

Sharda Sietaram

This is a good book, so far!

Ta1sha

heron definitely earned forgivenesses

Fale

Oh goddess the female lead gets more and more fascinating. Girl you’re so lucky I’m not Nuria 🤣 Uff and I also need a hand fan every time I see Neron’s name too lol 😩

Ta1sha

wow so much has happened and now her life couldn’t be anymore easy. going to keep reading hoping for her to find happiness. fingers crossed. I wonder if the bad guy is related to neron

IzzyB302

You are a wonderful author. I can’t wait to see what the future has in store for you! This series is phenomenal. ❤️

Fale

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 again… Onyx hahaha love it!

Kristi Baker

my heart breaks every time I read how she was abused.......

Lena James

the "Never get poisoned." line.. Good advice! really broke up the tension, I wasnt expecting it. Laughed so hard for no reason 🤣

Pklj Ghj

nub tycoon game but I have a lot

Ta1sha

I’m so nervous for kiya and how things will go when Nero sees her

Ta1sha

I love halimas attitude towards getting better. I hope this is good coming her way finally

Reader-983354

I have forgiven Neron he has changed and I want them together. He is doing his best to show that he’s changed and he is a better person and he loves her. There will be no one else for Kiya the mood goddess herself handpicked him for her. I hope they get together real soon. Kiya needs some real loving to erase the past from her mind.

oh my goddess!!!! It’s about that time for Kiya and Neron to solidify their bond!!!! I wonder if Aloha Johnathan will be brought back as their undoing by Apophis? just a thought

Rose

hmmm I am a bit suspicious of Allha Johnathan. something tells me that at least 1 of those “omegas” is actually his daughter. but he doesn’t have high views of women and see them as weak. and he probably punishes Liberty for not bearing a male.

Ta1sha

wait no warning on the name change or did I miss something halima= kiya now

Ta1sha

wow I’m glad Nero is sorry and others to but I still don’t think he has earned her respect or forgiveness. can’t wait to read on

Ta1sha

aww I was wondering what happened to Diana.

Ta1sha

yay thank you for the info of how she changed her name Awsome. I got inpatient I should have known you got this

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

im excited to read your next book. the first two were great! it was a great ending for the 2and book.

Ta1sha

wow that was a powerful chapter I’m even in more tears than the previous chapters.

Selene Murf

Great chapter, finally after 3 yrs they can hold and smell each other. Gave me warm fuzzies. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Cant wait for more.

I hated Neron at first, as I'm sure everyone did. however now he's changed so much and I stg I will be entirely heart broken for months to come if this book closes without them together in the end

pushing wet strands of my hair behind his ear.? I think that would be difficult if not, painful to do...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

Sabrina Surillo

is kiya the same person as halima

Fale

😂 here goes Onyx again 🤣

mercy A

finally!!

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

Loving the updates!

Mavis Gugumi

love the book. but hate the app..it does not work.

Kaelan McLaren

yay I can finally get a chance to do some theorising while not being on catch up. so my theory based on the last chapter - the nightmare- Nerons mother is about to reveal that they are related to a seer (or this world similar version) and the dreams they have been having real late prophetic.

Victoria DeCuir Stewart

so no resolutions or aswers for a whole book. not even anything on the owl, was she marked, did they find out she was assaulted… all those chapters and I can’t figure out what can to an actual ending point.

Sara Rastellini

already 100xs better than the alphas virgin tribute!!!

Victoria McCormick

this is haha down one of the best stories I have read since twilight! such a good story! such an amazing author!

Antoinette Robinson

now she knows she should not have went to the bathroom and by herself at that. it’s an emergency go home right away!!😫

Selene Murf

Unbreakable... Yusssssssss. 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 ❤️ 🤠 Thanx can't wait for more!!! 😁

XcaosxX

wonderful story thank you 😊

Nina072

if you dont understand trauma and its effects on an individual that's fine but do not make cold and callused comments and think nothing of it. just goes to show how little some people know about trauma. cold, callused and so unbelievably rude fictional character or not. person who made that comment, you deserve a knock upside the heard for that comment. and I'm being nice. "it's been eight years.....blah blah blah". unfrackingbelievable.

Suspiro Vega

very good book cant put it down

this is one of the best storys I have ever read . hope you let these two have a love together and peace soon . I don't know why but I feel their pain as if it is my own . very emotional.

Jenny Fox 🦊

Wishing you the best for your new Story Marii!! 💕

Antoinette Robinson

keeping her friends in the dark is putting everyone in danger

Nicole Fisher

After reading this, I am speechless. I'd like to read more.

Toya Spalding

What is the update time-line please?

can someone pleaseee help me understand the order of the books for the storyline. I know there two books in unbreakable and another one being starred but does unhinged come before or after the new one being started?

Sara Rastellini

goddess this story tugs at the heart strings bravo 👏

Amy Krohn

thank you for you author's note.

Carla McGuire

Am really enjoying your writing.

Sharon Taylor

when is the new book

Prudin Bernier

hoping new chapters are added soon. love this story.

mercy A

I really enjoyed the chapter. I hope something happens between them at the hotel. they both need the release before the war ahead of them...

Katie Frew

I'm still finding it hard to believe a whole pack of people believe a 9 year old killed a massive luna wolf and child. I understand you saying they just wanted someone to blame. But still that part to me is a little far fetch, a 9 year old child that can't turn into a wolf so has no strength. You get where I'm going with this...

thank you for standing up and supporting the survivors. it means the world.

is this the end of the story or will there be more..?? I wanted Kiya n Neron to be mates so badly..

Abigail Ross

why does her name suddenly change??

Michelle F. Rivera

whose kiya??? last couple chapters are titled that. but no name in story matches

Sintia

This book had me crying!!!! 😭

mercy A

how often are new chapters released? can’t wait to know what will happen at the alphas gathering...

Latoya Doctor

this book hart breaking

Lori Platz

I hope she doesn't go to Neron, what they did is unforgivable, mates or not

Alexus Winder

what is the update period?

I take that back, there’s 2 orisha mentions!!! 🥰🥰🥰

Catherine Thompson

loving this so far

Novalore

chapter 52 made me lmao oh no he took off his shirt. oh hell

Blue Eyes

how long before unbreakable comes out

HNW TK

can't wait for book 3

Heather P

Do do you think pigeons have feelings? hahaha 🤣🤣🤣 I literally laughed out loud

Ta1sha

already on chapter 31 so nervous