Untouchable (The Moonlight Avatar Series Collection) Comments

Visitor

Good book so far.

Visitor

I was a little hesitant to start reading, but the minute I did i could not put it down!

Nani Alecia

reading it and seeing where it goes.

Visitor

really good so far

Gabrielle White

Love the story ❤️

Shae Bremer

I really liked this however the pacing and pricing where too little for too much so I stopped reading it. story was pretty good

user2502074812

ok this book is really boring and just drawn out about things over kill

user2412283821

nice

Visitor

really nice

Visitor

I'm really enjoying this book. I like that they show trauma doesn't just go away but takes some work.

Visitor

I’m really enjoying the book a lot seems really good

Visitor

enjoying it so far hope it has a great end I also hope she stays strong and doesn’t forget what they did

Visitor

the story is really good and I am hoping for a good ending.

Visitor

so far it’s okay I am hoping this is not a predictable book like many others and I hope she doesn’t go back to that alpha after what they did and let happen

Visitor

this book is amazing so far, but it’s such a sad story. I feel for halima

Visitor

I am really enjoying this book

Visitor

this book has become one of my favorites in just a few chapters. I can't wait to read the rest!

Visitor

I am enjoying this book, and I can't wait to see what happens

Visitor

very good I like it

Visitor

it’s good so far

Visitor

I’m loving the book so far, especially the longer chapters. can’t wait to find out what happens next.

Visitor

love this book

Visitor

loving this book so far!

Visitor

i actually love reading stories about the underdogs it gives a sense of hope, no matter what is endured, we can truly live a life of peace and serene

Visitor

this is an amazing book. I really really really love it

Visitor

very fun ngl

Visitor

so far it’s really good

Visitor

I’m really enjoying the book so far!

Visitor

great storyline. need an update of last book to complete the series. hopefully it will be available soon.

Visitor

I am enjoying the book so far. I just cannot stop reading.

Visitor

love the book so far

Visitor

Great book, I love it so far. Thank you.

Visitor

I'm liking this book so far

Visitor

I like this book, nice story line

Chasity Rhodes

so far it’s very good. I hope she continues to prove how much stronger and powerful she really is.

Visitor

so far so good, let’s hope it continues well and has a happy ending

Visitor

love this book so far, different and more exciting to read than the other novels I have read thus far

Visitor

love the book, the story plot is amazing, love the author

Visitor

pretty good story so far. it’s getting a bit long though.

Visitor

I’ve read this series under a different platform. I won’t spoil it for ya’ll but it is excellent, however, at the time the author had stopped writing for personal reasons. I have hope she would complete the series because as I said it is EXCELLENT! I want to unlock the last chapter to see if she has continued to the end of the series.

Visitor

why only 53 chapters, it has to be 241

Reader-003718

I love this book so far!

user2503097848

Dear Readers, Know that she gets back with her abuser. She could have stayed alone or with some she chosen. Heck fated didn’t have to be involved but it is a no for me. Heck I would be find if she forgave him but not this. Dear Author, This book is well written book. I love the imagery tone and the build. I just could bring myself to continue. I would love to read some of your other book. Please give a notice when you’re doing a dark romance.

Visitor

not sure why her family wasn’t called as soon as she outed Tristan???

Visitor

if they are so all powerful then how can they be taken and controlled so easily? very confusing. And why does she “freeze” everytime an attack happens?

Visitor

oh yeah

Visitor

great story, and it is really lovely to see such diverse characters.

Isabel Gaines

how did unlocking chapter go from 30 to 132 for the next chapter

TheHighPriestess9742

oh yeah, you still abused her knowing she has a white wolf and she is Selene’s avatar. gee whiz

Visitor

I sure hope the jerk and his family live to regret what they did to her.

Stella Moon

I’m not sure I like this book, I wanted to and the writing isn’t bad but I’m not sure I like where it’s heading. being mated still to the person that abused her so much and how the family and everyone want to forget what they did to her makes it seem like the story isn’t going to following its path of her not being connected to them. not sure I want to finish because I can’t see how someone could go back and have feelings for and be with someone who has abused them so much. with the amount of pain in how she feels it just seems really unlikely for her to be ok with it. kinda disappointing because I made it far in the story to not want to finish it

Visitor

will it unlock chapters

Visitor

we not addressing the rape? the starvation? it wasn’t just physical abuse. he has not earned any sort of forgiveness.

Visitor

the reason i feel was not good enough for everyone to hate a 9 yr old girl and i did not understand the rogue king marking her with blood? how would that make her guilty? found that a loise end in the plot

Visitor

i have been reading all the comments across all the chapters I have read, but none of you seem to grasp the fact that Neron was a child as well when the abuse started and he was raised and manipulated by his father into becoming the monster he was when he abused her. nobody can seem to understand that he too had mental health issues, and that is not an excuse for what he did, but it should make you understand that he was also not in the best place mentally. her parents are to blame as well. i “like” the fact that women see only the abuse she endured, they don’t believe in second chances for the males, they can’t see past the abuse she endured, regardless of how much he might change, own up to his mistakes, no matter what he does, he doesn’t deserve a second chance. but if the roles were reversed, you all expect her to be forgiven and given a second chance… i have read a few books recently, and the old “toxic masculinity” looks like nothing compared to the “toxic femininity” nowadays…

rotisha davis

I hope this is not one of these story that she goes back to her abusive mate, I hate books like this

Visitor

she better not go back to him

Visitor

I cried with her. that really hurt my heart

Visitor

you did a great job portraying her hurt and anger- it had me upset as well

Visitor

when will she tell him about the guard that raped her

XxKarnaxX

I can already see where this is going and it’s pissing me off

Bernice Bell

someone has taken this story and pretending its theirs

Mei Hellstormm

really wish this story would appar elsewhere or an update from the author

Lonnie Bronco

#bingeread This story is unbelievably good. The storyline is engaging and the plots are off the chart dramatic, evil, frustrating, sweet, hot, etc... The FL and supporting characters are well developed and grow and evolve with the story. Expect the unexpected!

I can't finish this series as it appear she goes back to her abusive mate

Allison Kerpash

to adorn something means to decorate it, not to wear it. You adorn a shawl with a brooch. You adorn a dress with jewelry. You don a dress.

Selli Dang

z8b3 love love loveeeee this book and the books in this series! they are very well written and I will urge you to give this book a go

Reader-731248

z8b3 I love this kind of stories. I am looking forward to giving it a try.

Irma Beck

z8b3 it seems like an interesting read thus far. Will definitely need to read further. boy my library is just growing with these challenges.

Vicki usher

z8b3# OMG that introduction grabs you and pulls you right in. How have I missed this book before. This book my ruin my marriage because I may just have to binge this bad boy.

z8b3 another great story from an awesome author I can't wait to read it woohoo! this is good

Emily

z8b3 I loved the entire series. she’s a great author and deserves all the recognition.! definitely recommend her also u might wanna check pat re on for her

John Robinson

k4u5 The beginning of this story is heartbreaking, the poor Halima she's treated so badly by everyone so unfair.

Athomas15

z8b3 this series is so good! the author develops the story well. can’t wait to finish

k4u6 Wow, once again I bypassed this book a few times, what a mistake. The first chapter grabbed me and I found myself immersed into the story. I can't wait to see how she gets revenge.

Sue Flaherty

z8b3 Ohhh sounds so good, definitely adding to my library. Have so many fantastic books added already.

Jasmine Hurley

z8b3 Such a good start!! I wasn’t quite sure based on the title and even the description had me hesitating, but after reading the prologue I’m hooked! definitely adding to my library and can’t wait to read more!

John Robinson

z8b3 So this looks like it's going to be an interesting story. I was a bit reluctant to read at first due to the length however it looks to be 3 books in 1, Untouchable then Unhinged and Unbreakable. Just started to read the beginning and I won't lie it's hard just hoping for better things to come for Halima.

Donna Pember

#k4u6# I can't wait to read this book. Looks like it will be a very interesting book.

Julie Schmitt

k4u6 Love the introduction to Untouchable (Moonlight Avatar Series Collection). I have added to my library for a future read, but I now am working on 20+ books to read and growing for a list.

Rafael

#k4u6# I love the introduction. it seems very interesting supernatural story. is going to be fun read it. the character is seems more interesting every time I read the intro again.

Sharon Dsouza

#z8b3# i just love this book... it is an amazing book with an amazing storyline... it has made me cry, get angry and happy seeing the bonds and her strength just loved it. it is a must read book!

Karin Hancard

not bad

Noneyab

I hate the lack of communication. obviously the bite means something. especially if it keeps making itself known

Noneyab

hello, he sounds like Odessa

Tania K

This book was beautifully written the writer is very talented. Keep up the good work!

Marii Solaria

Dear Readers, updates are SUSPENDED until further notice.

Sam Murray

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Beegee Eliotte

I love this book although I would habe like it if Klya did not get with Neron. To me that is

I love the diversity of the characters. I haven’t been able to put this book down! ❤️

Mandy Mundy

any idea when the book will be continued. I'm dying to get to the end and find out what happens. this is by far one of my fav books now

zara mughal

love the way the story is told. really enjoyable read. also, a humble request, can someone please take a little time and check out A Place Unlike Home. Thankyou♥︎

Dana Harley

I am loving this story so far ❤❤❤

Ashley

🥺 when is the next book coming?

Sheila Searcy

love your book. hard to put down. I find myself reading late into the night

Samantha Merrill

I can’t read it. very well written. too well written

Kimberly Buchanan

too bad Darian and Kira couldn't be mates, they would understand the pain of rejection and cherish their bond.

Marii Solaria

1/29/2022 Hello my readers! Quick update. Due to exams next week for both my Pharmacology and Intergrated Health Care classes (both on the same day 😵), updates will be pushed until next weekend. Writing is the last thing on my mind right now 😅

Sherry Armstrong

what is the name of the 2nd book I really want to read more. thank you for the great book.

Cata Catalins

I really hope book 3 is the last one! And I love the way they evolved during the journey they went. Congrats, Marii!