Lita's Love for the Alpha Comments

Neer Sanchez

@TheUnlikelyOptimist hi, just a quick question.. is lune in the limelight already been totally transferred in other flat form? coz im really itching to read it again.

April Borchers

wow wow awesome chapter Nyx and Lita powerful love it

Bri

did anyone else miss on the first read through of the newest chapter, that Lita’s Dad,Rafi, is there helping with Lita’s rescue?

Lynn Hojnacki Lajoie

you promised to have 1-2 chapters a week and that has not been the case. what’s going on?

April Borchers

Thank you TheUnlikelyOptimist I loved every moment You had me laughing you had me crying and you had my heart soaring chapter to chapter what’s the losses and Gaines That they all experienced I wish you could keep going with the story but I know everything comes to an end so I say again thank you for your brilliance and your imagination I hope to read more and more of your stories yours sincerely April

This book was really good. I really enjoy Lita's growth

Anybody know if the author is alright?

angela tinson

This has been such a. great story. I'm absolutely investigating with it. please update soon.

Jo Hall

I cant read any of the new chapters. nooooooo..... left on a cliff hanger

Emily von Pfahl

I want Maxim’s head literally ripped off

April Borchers

yes not a chance in hell

kg oh oh lhclh

loved the new update! glad you are taking time for your self!!! keep up the great writing!!! 💘

Nice plot twist. It explains so much.

April Borchers

omg so Max ,Coles dad has her what’s he going to do oh my

FOR LUNA IN LIMELIGHT: it’s moving to r3adict or amaz0n! I’m realizing they sensor comments and names of other apps. that’s why some comments never show up 😡😡 try to read the recent replies. send me a DM on IG for a detailed explanation.

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

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April Borchers

Very good chapter thanks for the information about Brian and her mother and the whole situation involving them in the scheme can’t wait for another update

such an amazing story! looking forward to reading the rest of the story 💙

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

Hey lovely readers! I see a lot of commenting about updates so I figured I should come chat for a second. I unfortunately have a chronic health condition that gives me trouble from time to time and right now I’m struggling with pretty bad fatigue so the chapters are a lot harder to get through. i haven’t even been able to keep up with replying to your comments 😩 I hope you’ll bear with me during this slow time as I really am trying hard to get chapters completed for you. I’ve mapped out that we’ve got about 15 chapters left until the story is complete. Hopefully you’ll all stick around until I’m feeling better! As always, much love and thanks so much for your support xoxoxoxo

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

ugh my comments aren’t showing up again 😩🥴

Lynn Hojnacki Lajoie

does this writer update?

Lady Rachael De Nova

The Chapter: 'Never F*ck With Nyx'?? Daaang, I loved it!!!💪🏿👸🏿👑

Bravo 👏👏👏 This was a great read!!! December can’t get here fast enough 🥰

April Borchers

wow what a a**hole

Hernandez Giuliana

any updates , no pressure but you said 1-2 chapters update a week so still waiting , thanks

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

plz be patient!

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

hey guys my comments are not showing up

Maureen Agnew

😍😍😍😍

hey guys! I’m planning on a triple update this week to make up for going M.I.A. last week. I had a last minute vacation to Ocean City, MD 😩 anyway I’ll be posting the triple update on Friday 🖤 TTYL

Gayle Root

I loved Luna in the limelight! I will be so sad if it’s gone forever...

well that was a twist

thank you for the update 😊. Come Nyx Lita needs you push forward and l can’t wait 🤣🤣

Alavina Lealiiee

this is taking so long between chapters 😤

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

I’m still here guys! Fatigue is kicking my brain but I’m still writing when I can! New chapter should be appearing any minute ❤️

can’t wait to see Cole l don’t think he will be able to control his anger and Nyx I’m waiting for her to kick in again too lol

April Borchers

where are you at my favorite writing girl I’m in need of a update please

Andrea Aludden

thank you for a great story! loved it! 🥰

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

hey guys just letting you know I’ve been trying to update you for days but my comments weren’t working! I have a health condition and suffer from chronic fatigue and it’s kicking my ass. I’m working as hard as I can to get new chapters up! be patient with me

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

hey guys just letting you know I’ve been trying to update you for days but my comments weren’t working! I have a health condition and suffer from chronic fatigue and it’s kicking my ass. I’m working as hard as I can to get new chapters up! be patient with me ❤️

April Borchers

I’m a little upset with that but I understand and respect your decision,you can’t rush perfection ,with that being said this was a good chapter but I’m still biting at the bit

Hey lovely readers! I see a lot of commenting about updates so I figured I should come chat for a second. I unfortunately have a chronic health condition that gives me trouble from time to time and right now I’m struggling with pretty bad fatigue so the chapters are a lot harder to get through. i haven’t even been able to keep up with replying to your comments 😩 I hope you’ll bear with me during this slow time as I really am trying hard to get chapters completed for you. I’ve mapped out that we’ve got about 15 chapters left until the story is complete. Hopefully you’ll all stick around until I’m feeling better! As always, much love and thanks so much for your support xoxoxoxo

Jessica Carr

utterly speechless!!!! loved every word

Nyx yes it’s about to go down 🤣🤣

nfau4714

Have tour fun girl! Lita deserves it right now and honestly Ace is a BROOOO right now!

Iani328

thank you so much for finishing the book. I was a bit disappointed at first because I wanted more in the sense of knowing who was Lita’s father as well as lita’s last confrontation with her mother, but then I thought the end was perfect. Lita ended up being happy in a place of light and leaving her past behind. that’s much more than a lot of people can hope for. thank you for in a sort of way using therapy as a beautiful way to let your forum know that it is ok to seek help and that it works. I can’t wait to see what else you have in the works for us.

Autumn Harvey

omg I love it so much!!!! when is the next update????

Nancy Hunter

omg that’s a horrible spot to stop ugh 🤦🏼‍♀️

April Borchers

yes this is getting good

Ashley Foster

That was some powerful imagery with those chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next. Nyx is brutal and I love it.

Tiffany Bryant

YESSSSSSSSSS FINALLY OMGGHG I CANT WSIT FOR HER TO END THAT BEECH

nfau4714

😱😱😱😱💀💀 Did I call it or did I call it??!!! It was nice to meet you Erica, but byeeeeee!!

Maureen Agnew

such a good update! I can’t wait for the next one!

Maureen Agnew

such a cliff hanger....

Andrea Aludden

oh no I am so sorry for Ace 😭💔

I love Nyx 🥰

nfau4714

"Bright red gleam" in who's eyes???!?!?! I FREAKING knew it!!!!! Get 'em girl!

Jaz

oh yes, she is shifting. i hope she kicks erica ass than drags her by the tail... and kicks maxim ass.. ohhhhh i can’t wait for more! i wanna know what happens next! love the book❤️

I seriously hope Lita bites Erica’s face off too!!!

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

I think that Erica let Brian know where Lit a is and who she is with

April Borchers

omg what is going on Luna in lime light has been removed please don’t remove this book too I love both of them what’s on 😢😢😢

KeKe

Aww poor Brody 😔 he deserves a mate too.

Bri

I can’t help but get this feeling that Jaz was sent by Cole’s father a long time ago to keep eyes on Cole , and Maxim used Jaz to get Lita in a vulnerable position so he could kidnap her. I am agonizing over this one chapter a week update, might just be driving me a little crazy, but I’m happy for any chapters!!

April Borchers

that was hot ,your mind is brilliant and I know you’ll come up with something great

Looking forward to an update!!! Really like this story so far!

THE WAZ FAM

thank you!!! ahhh I wanna know what happens!!!!!! so obvi she will shift when something major happens.

April Borchers

omg it’s so good

xaviera Ross

it is messed up how Cole didn’t defend her at all. Everyone else was defending her especially Brody

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

cannot wait until next update when is it

April Borchers

great update and nice getting to know each other scene your wonderful

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

There’s always a lag but the new chapters are posted ❤️ they should appear soon!

kg oh oh lhclh

Amazing book!❤

Melissa Asberry

I can't wait for the next update. I still would like for her to make out with someone so Cole will realize he really wants her. like she stated it is a chance for her to make a choice for herself not her mom or the mate bond.

I seriously hope Lita bites Brian’s face off ijs

when’s the next update????

Viki_Royale13

omg! I am so in love this story! ❤😘

April Borchers

holy frisky yeah just how I wanted when you deliver your story you don’t hold back , I can’t wait for more

April Borchers

OK dear thanks for the update

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

sorry about yesterday guys I was celebrating V-day at a haunted house and forgot to post before I left 😩 I’ll try to write an extra chapter today to make up for it! A little smut for the holiday 😈😉 I’ll be posting at 5pm EST ❤️❤️❤️ Happy Valentine’s Day everyone!

Reader-774910

loving the storyline. can’t wait to read more

Nichole83pa

no update?

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

what time are you doing your next update

Georgia

Erica seems so nice but I hate her 😂😂

April Borchers

love this and I’m glad you updated as fast as you did , excellent!!!!!!!

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

wow that was amazing only if cole and the rest could see

THE WAZ FAM

omg is Lita a born Alpha and they have her medicated so much that she has no idea she has a wolf?! I hate her mom!! I hope they stop her from going and he better not reject her. !! loving the story its keeping me on my toes!

Justmee

I read the whole book in one day 🥺! My heart dropped when I flipped the page and there wasn't another chapter 🤦🏽‍♀️! This book is delicious 🤤! More please 😅🤣😂

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

I think the pills keeps her from showing her wolf and I really think she has alpha blood

Jenna Bergman

I need more!!!!!!! please🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Reader-168203

I swear I’m checking for this update every 5 minutes! I’m trying to see what kinda drama Ace is about to stir up.

Melissa McWhorter-Asberry

when are you bringing lunain the limelight back I loved the storyplease

Nyx is about to have some fun w/Lita ☺️☺️

Wcha

I threshing read so far I wonder if she has any wolf in her genes since she takes those pills for her aggression

April Borchers

some of my comments are missing to

Maureen Agnew

can’t wait for the next update! Hope there is one soon😊

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

hey guys I’ll be doing my best to get back to daily updates by 6pm EST! I’ll let you know when I’m planning to take my vacation ❤️❤️❤️

Sarah Mutimer

loving the story so far!

April Borchers

good update on Litas love for the Alpha and I’m to hear about Luna in the limelight

Jaz

who did that to lita?!

Bri

I really hope Lita has a badass moment soon!!! she deserves some personal triumph, with everything that keeps happening to her. :)

Unlikely Optimist 🖤

if I write a long comment it doesn’t work 😩