Lita's Love for the Alpha Comments
Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey to all my new readers! 💕 thanks so much for giving me a chance. I’m editing this book so plz comment any plot holes you notice or thoughts you have because they help me fix mistakes/oversights!
09/04/2023 10:16
Bella Jersey 2
Ace is looking like a fine mate
09/04/2023 10:15Unlikely Optimist 🖤
thank you for all the comments! all of your observations are extremely helpful as I edit! I expect the updated version to go live on here around the first and the pap3rback should be available on amaz0n on the 1st as well. though it’ll depend on time zone 💕
09/04/2023 10:15Bella Jersey 2
Lita needs some real counseling. in so many in supernatural book the mental health or illness are ignored. all of people are dealing with. maybe some books can show it’s okay to get help
09/04/2023 10:12Bella Jersey 2
could you imagine every day waiting to being told you are not good enough? Cole been doing that to Lita. he’s evilest of all
09/04/2023 10:12Bella Jersey 2
Cole you couldn’t make this meal a little more easier. what dickless loser
09/04/2023 10:09Bella Jersey 2
yep she didn’t ask for your help
09/04/2023 10:08Bella Jersey 2
Stace be an excellent person to go to movies with
09/04/2023 10:08Bella Jersey 2
that mother is disgusting no SO doesn’t hurt you cause you back talk and such. they hurt you cause they are the most useless and lowest form on the earth
09/04/2023 10:08Tracey Larkings
who.is the author please?
09/04/2023 10:07Bella Jersey 2
yeah Cole why are you here?
09/04/2023 10:06Bella Jersey 2
is Brian a werewolf?
09/04/2023 10:06Bella Jersey 2
if the goddess is around make her lose those pills. if she is a werewolf that medicine might be messing with her smell
09/04/2023 10:06Bella Jersey 2
he supposed to be with alpha. I hope he gets a stuck up alpha female
09/04/2023 10:06Bella Jersey 2
uh um hello doesn’t he still have a Erica? I think Lita would be able to heal better if Cole grew some balls. hoe can Cole’s wolf think this is good for Lita. for a month now Cole and his wolf has been holding Lita hostage
09/04/2023 10:06Bella Jersey 2
some catch or hold Cole up he’s gonna need it
09/04/2023 10:05Bella Jersey 2
hope the guy right brings his own Utensils
09/04/2023 10:05Bella Jersey 2
if Brian and his pack are no nothing what is there to gain?
09/04/2023 10:05Bella Jersey 2
oh goody mom calling that’s like getting a call from irs for back taxes
09/04/2023 10:05Bella Jersey 2
the doctor has to be Susan
09/04/2023 10:05Bella Jersey 2
thank you tell the doctor about the wonderful pills mommy gave. it be safer taking them from a s snake
09/04/2023 10:04Amy Tribou
I got to bonus chapter "Miss Me?" is that the end? Is there a sequel I'm unaware of? If it's the end, it ended abruptly and as a cliffhanger.
09/04/2023 10:02Bella Jersey 2
this world they don’t look or wait for mates
09/04/2023 10:01Bella Jersey 2
you know Cole is is guilty of abusing Lita too. his is emotional and mental abuse
09/04/2023 10:00Bella Jersey 2
triple D that a lot boob to be carrying around
09/04/2023 09:59Bella Jersey 2
like Stace she’s type of woman like. they keep it real
09/04/2023 09:59Bella Jersey 2
In what world is this helpful
09/04/2023 09:57Bella Jersey 2
where’s that bottle of vodka we’re gonna need it
09/04/2023 09:57Bella Jersey 2
go ahead Mark get the bucket of water but you dump it on those cats be prepared. because instead of those cats fight each other they are fighting you and they have claws. I don’t care if he is werewolf
09/04/2023 09:54Bella Jersey 2
you can feel she’s not meant to be weak willed
09/04/2023 09:53Bella Jersey 2
oh Ace is so smooth I want some of that
09/04/2023 09:53Bella Jersey 2
hey red eye I gotta a new chew toy for you
09/04/2023 09:48Bella Jersey 2
is he gonna rape her?
09/04/2023 09:47Bella Jersey 2
hello dumb people check those pills
09/04/2023 09:47Bella Jersey 2
I don’t know somebody distract her with chocolate cake or something
09/04/2023 09:47Bella Jersey 2
I’d she in trouble?
09/04/2023 09:47Bella Jersey 2
maybe Cole likes the movies we can go as friends
09/04/2023 09:46Bella Jersey 2
as a parent it disgusted me when a parent doesn’t protect their child
09/04/2023 09:46Bella Jersey 2
is the doc a traitor or is working for somebody against her parents
09/04/2023 09:46Bella Jersey 2
Cole is absolutely the selfishest man in the planet
09/04/2023 09:45
love the book💙💙
09/04/2023 09:43so is this over now? kinda just left it
09/04/2023 09:42Bella Jersey 2
he still doesn’t deserve her
09/04/2023 09:41Chapter "Rise and Shine" I just realized that with Lita's shift and recovery no one has mentioned what her wolf looks like?
09/04/2023 09:39Reader-257836
is there other books like this one that are good?
09/04/2023 09:39Brenda Ford
I did not receive my 20 points after reading for 30 minutes. its upsetting
09/04/2023 09:38
AmaTay
finally finished the whole book. and I’m so happy I read it! it’s actually a really good story to read. i love werewolve/dragon shifter romances, and this one has become one of my favorites. also the book is completed, so those of you who start to read it, should just read through the whole book before you start saying cole is bad or whatever else I’ve seen in the comments.
09/04/2023 09:38what happened to Jaz????
09/04/2023 09:36Bella Jersey 2
he died when going to get this asshole?
09/04/2023 09:36Bella Jersey 2
was her brother targeted?
09/04/2023 09:36Bella Jersey 2
oh boy wait till mommy finds out her piggy bank is closed
09/04/2023 09:36Alice Freeman
I want to know what happens to lita and Cole…if she find out what Cole did to Brian, kids and or any other issue/conflict that may happen
09/04/2023 09:36Bella Jersey 2
basically you are suffering so Lita has to suffer to LOSER
09/04/2023 09:34Bella Jersey 2
what did James do for Colt to win loyalty?
09/04/2023 09:34Bella Jersey 2
eat it loser
09/04/2023 09:34I'm hoping for more than one chapter a day, please! There's no way I can STOP reading now!
09/04/2023 09:34Lita's sense of smell is due to the werewolf genes and maybe the meds have worn off! I want to know how Lita smells to Cole and why he can't tell she is a wolf???
09/04/2023 09:33Unlikely Optimist 🖤
new bonus chapters coming this week guys 🖤
09/04/2023 09:33Sucks to be you, Brian! Cole needs to be with her, and Soo let her know what he is to her. I want Cole and Alex to find out what and who she is to James!
09/04/2023 09:33I truly enjoyed this book. It wasn't the traditional mate bond experience that I'm used to in these types of stories. I'm so happy to hear that there will be a story about Alpha Ace eventually. I really liked that guy!!
09/04/2023 09:28Reader-305189
Loved the book! Thanks for a great read. ☺️
09/04/2023 09:27
Linda Fuhrman
Great story loved it
09/04/2023 09:20im gonna ask, is it happy ending or not?
09/04/2023 09:16
Bonib2
sigh, going out to get plastered abd make Cole jealous is not a great idea. sigh, there's still Brian to tbink of but hey, her funeral. Adds drama to the story I supposed.
09/04/2023 09:15Brenda Ford
I didn't receive my 20 points after I read for 30 min.its upsetting
09/04/2023 09:14ummmmmmmmmm
09/04/2023 09:13Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey everyone! just letting you all know that I’m currently editing Lita in anticipation of a pap3rback release on Amaz0n this winter. I’ll only be editing not rewriting so no worries there!
09/04/2023 09:09Brenda Ford
I been reading a lot of warewolf books.i never thought I would because Lisa gardener is my favorite writer.this book is definitely one of my new favorites. I was in a relationship like Lita. I am glad to see you writing about something that no one seems to want to acknowledge. I can't wait to read more chapters
09/04/2023 09:05❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 09:03I’d love a story on Alpha Ace and him finding his true mate!!!
09/04/2023 09:02Loving the book ❤️
09/04/2023 08:53
Bonnie Lancaster
I love this book so much I read it in a day. it's refreshing and not the normal wolf story. I would love the story to continue from where you are, but maybe get some background and past of ace and Jaz. It would be nice to hear about the ranked and main members of the packs' history and loves too. thank you for sharing your creativity with us.
09/04/2023 08:50Rose SB
“Knight” in shining armor
09/04/2023 08:50Bonib2
And Lita should know better to accept drinks from people she does not know😏
09/04/2023 08:50Bonib2
Isn't that **Calacatta** marble, and not *Calcutta?*.
09/04/2023 08:49I would love an epilogue with a few years passing to see how the pack has grown if they have kids, quick update on the main characters maybe a few of the new women get good enough to fight in tournaments. I enjoyed this story very different from the typical warewolf story
09/04/2023 08:47I love this story and it's definitely a favorite. Had to fight myself a few times to put it down and get some sleep. Best compliment I can give ❤
09/04/2023 08:47
Bonnie
I loved this book so much. it had me right from the start.
09/04/2023 08:46
CuriousT
I know it's almost nothing BUT from Chapter 82 upward, I miss seeing the titles of the chapters!!!🤷🏿♀️ What happened??💁🏿♀️
09/04/2023 08:43Very nice story. very well written. Applause to u. enjoyed it immensely. Bravo Bravo. 👏
09/04/2023 08:42CuriousT
I'm left with only three chapters and it's now that I'm wondering 🤔, is the book finished??
09/04/2023 08:42Nikki Holz
is this book on any other reading apps
09/04/2023 08:42
CuriousTt
The Chapter titled: The First Shift Is The Worst Shift...I loved it. FINALLY!!!❤💪🏿
09/04/2023 08:41
Dani Udelhofen
Legacies- how had Cole escaped this place
09/04/2023 08:41Great story! Question for "I promise not to hold back": How are Nyx and Midnight speaking directly to each other?
09/04/2023 08:41Welp you've done it again, another great book.
09/04/2023 08:38really enjoyed this!!
09/04/2023 08:36nope you should have said it, how don't they know???,? being a beta in the alpha being his best friend everybody came to the crime scene or they would have been told there were two people in the car she didn't just walk away from that
09/04/2023 08:34good
09/04/2023 08:33Laura James
I was hoping for more. you mentioned a trilogy... is it to this book?
09/04/2023 08:33Unlikely Optimist 🖤
to all my new readers, this book is complete! the ongoing marker just hasn’t been updated.
09/04/2023 08:32Yana Nikolova
Can't waaait, can't waaait! I love the story and your writing, the characters, the passion... Thanks!
09/04/2023 08:32c'est cool . really good.
09/04/2023 08:32
Wcha
can't wait for Cole to get rid of brian
09/04/2023 08:32Dani Udelhofen
Great story so far
09/04/2023 08:32Unlikely Optimist 🖤
for the 4th time… 😭 check out my other stories in the un-limited section
09/04/2023 08:32
Nicole Johnson
well i am bummed that the story ended like it did ☹i was hopeing for a epilogue. but i understand your reasons.
09/04/2023 08:32I do enjoy ace 🤣🤣
09/04/2023 08:31Unlikely Optimist 🖤
hey everyone! all 9 chapters are dropping tomorrow as soon as I wake up EST lol so be on the look out! 😈😈 🖤🖤🖤 thanks to everyone who was patient, and I’m super grateful for all the support!
09/04/2023 08:31Debbie Adams
really love this story, sorry you won't be ready no more on anystory but I hope soon I will be able to follow you to another
09/04/2023 08:30
