Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

Nurul Nismawati Sudewo

hiii. . . i'm here. it's amazing story. i like so much. . thank you for inviting me here. i'll be back again after my work finish

I'm a Bandito

I loove this story!! It's amazing!

nur hidayah

amazing story..

Miumey Yuki

wow, good job! you're son talented with writing

Melanie Mcpeek

Love the story so far! I can’t wait to really dive into this crazy cool world!💕

Николета Д.

such a nice story! am very grateful to the author for sharing it with me. it is exactly the kind of story I like with long lost relatives, long lost love, fighting for love, a lot of characters a lot of stuff going on at the same time, by far the most interesting I've read in a quite a while! thanks again!

Verencia Euginia

AMAZING !!! 🔥🔥

Stan BTS because they are AMAZING

I think it's great so far! can't wait for the next chapters

lemon

Omg I really love this story! Its so amazing, thanks for recommend me

Ava sonita

I really like this very well written :)

Yudimesy2002

I love this story ❤️

Dyee Diana

love the book 💗

ie ie

AAAAAA CAME FROM WP I AM GONNA FINISH IT

Maria Shaikh

I m WP reader actually, someone recomend me this story.... i just love it♥️ i m glad my time of reading this story is worth it the plot line , the sequence is just really nice.

Sarah Rouxlee

amazing story.am in love with the story ever since someone recommended it to me

Nikobom

This is amazing book, the story interesting.

Abigail Zerraras

this story is really good!

DvA_SaNiTaRa _

It's awesome!

Judie Omega

the introduction of the story is interesting and intriguing.

Ma. Desiree Dianne Acosta

Its very interesting! I love it💖

jaileny chanci

i love 😍💓

anlaS0

There are mistakes such as punctuation and other more but overall it is a good plot. Keep up the good work^^

Dr , Zero

I enjoy this story ❤

Rabbie

Very good story, thank you ♥ ️

narrator

Its awesome

nisa ramdhani

it's so interesting!!! you did well ❤❤❤❤ .

Killernuel 1308

This story is amazing I can not stop reading this such an amazing history

Lovesick2142

Hello!!! I just wanted to say that you’re an amazing writer! I’m glad you contacted me and allowed me to read this fantastic story! I hope you continue to write!

j3551g1rl98

Hey, I am from WP. I actually love this story. I am more of a reader than a writer and I have to say this story is now one of my favorites. I hope to see more and hopefully see it on WP too. Keep writing, because this is phenomenal. ❤❤

Larissa Pinto

No why Alec 💔

Jearlie Basergo

you have a goodwork. I hope to read more of your work. ❤❤

Katii Noromor

it’s amazing spectacular

snezana trtica

i like it!

jassy green

i loved how the plot of the story was made. keep it up

Killer smile

I loved it

shada fedriga

first chapter so good🔝

Phantom_Lullaby

I love, love, LOVE the direction this chapter took. I’m so happy it didn’t take the usual story route, I’m actually really excited for the next upcoming chapters. I’m wondering what her California home will look like :)!

Di W

Hi, I came here because the author told me on WP. I really like how the writer wrote the narrative that was happening, so detailed.

Alicia Portillo

mucho inglés

Yololo Lolo

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ZT NIME

wahh that story is amazing

Its jelyn

Thankyouuu editor to asked me to review the story it's niceeeeeeee and amazing 💖

_Fammelia✨

Thank you for inviting me to read this awesome book. I really enjoy reading it and I really love this story! Keep fighting!

Reader-531638

This story is awesome! I has good details and. after storyline too!

Valarie Thompson

so far so good. creative thus far

Mary Ann Samonte Jumao-as

❤️❤️❤️

Angel Mae Teves Sastre

very nice storyy!

IT'S Shinu-Devil

I just read the first chapter and already gave that suspension and anxiety of what may happen later

Aracely Arango

i love this uwu♡

An:.:.:.

I couldn't stop reading, it's great, thanks for recommending this story to me

AAna-Maria Dumitru

Very cool💜

Sugeiry

I was hooked in the beginning, but towards the middle you sorta lost me. I just feel as though to many things are going on. That It kinda just makes you lose track of the main focus of the story. I also felt as though situations in the story could have been used better, including the characters. But of course that's just my opinion. Other than that I don't think I can read this story anymore. I just sorta lost interest in it completely, sorry but keep writing. You're doing well.

liarliau

I came from WP and I need to say i really like the story, i’m going to read more of this book. I love the way you use the words, you’re very talented!!

Blue Knight

Me too! I LOVE THIS! ❤️❤️

Nanamie Haruie

I started reading the first chapter and if I title by chance it is one of those stories that catch me where there is from an alpha and omega added that I see that open vamiros yaiii is really beautiful and the story has something that since you start you already want to reach the end and know what else will happen⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💫

Sarah Black

I loved the story the plot is on point and I looked forward to reading more of it. It is an awesome story thanks for the privilege to read a great story

tyu- fghu

Beautiful..

Recs_gaddi

You did a great job! i love it!

Micah Ella

I love it a round of applause, what a nice plot, congratulations Ms. North Rose!

Reader-908839

am I the only one crying ??

Alexandra Papadie

I really like this story...Keep writing🥰🥰

Sarah Kopecky

This is an interesting and compelling story so far. Not really my thing but still a good story

Nataly

I like this story.

jnafnts

❤️❤️❤️

Judith_Sanchez_17

omg! i love the story! it's so interesting. thank you, misterious editor, for invite me to read this wonderful story.

Foodie

This is by far one of the best stories I’ve read so far. I needed a good book for these stressful times. Thank you so much for feeding my brain😊

Ms.Maerens May

I love this omg💕

Kuroi_ ino

Nice

Celina

Cant wait to read it out! Got a snip of it and it’s very addictive.

joanna van kirk

I love it so much 100/100

bintang biru

this is enjoyable!! keep going ^^9

Erika Luna

I Love the story,Thanks to the editor that asked me to review the story.

Gracely Faz

Love the plot, amazing story.

Leigh Isles Young

I’ve enjoyed the story so far. thank you

MsTasha09

First thank you for your invite to read this story.. I just finished chapter 1 and all I have to say is that I really really love your writing style. The way you describe is easy to imagine and makes it esay to follow... Keep going with your work.. I read the other chapters when I have a little more time...

Fiona

this book is amazingg!! I am so glad the editor reached out to me and asked me to review it. I’m addicted to it already, the writing is amazing and I’m loving the plot so far

rikaannazila 21

Thank you to the editor who invited me to read this story. So far I still only read 3 chapters and I think this story started to get interesting in chapter 3, although actually in the first part I was a bit bored because the words were quite verbose for me. But it looks like this story is quite interesting to read, even though I seem to have guessed how the storyline will be. But I don't know whether my guess is correct or not.

the indigenous ry bread

this is amazing!!

Júlia Cavalcante Chaves

I am liking it :)

LittleWisteria

Love this ❣️ excelent job

Vivi Sakali

they contacted me and only one paragraph was enough to make me read the fabulous book

loved the chapter, I have a feeling that the mystery person is her dad.

Tiphani Daniels

This is really great. I love how it is so far and I can’t wait for more

Cleiarra Zynophus Iya Noctichore

I wish when he returned to get back his mate, Parker will not be broken... :<

LoneAuthoress I

amazing!!

Kristine Karyll Cambaya Quilapio

this story is sooooo interesting.. awesome👍

Suga Lover

Great detail in the chapters it's like I'm there, I'm in love with da fantasy

Po Pom

Your story is really good

Special Agent Bam

I usually don't like English stories but this one is really amazing and I'll finish reading it. Good work and thanks for writing me ❤️🤗

Cindy Permatasari

💖💖💖

Thurgashini Selvasingam

love it !!!

Lovesick2142

I’m gonna cry I just got to the part where Alec dies💔😭

Larisa Maria Serdean

I just finished to read the second chapter *-* this book have exactly what I wanted from a book🥰🥰🥰 i saw that some chapters are locked:<<<

Jordan

review at the request of the editor; I’d like to start off and say that this book from what I’ve read in the first three chapters could be seen as very predictable. you’re given the basic outline of how the book will generally unfold in the first couple paragraphs as well as a lot of background information on the main character a little too early. the general delivery of this book in form of its descriptive language is very good, but also quite common in the way that the author will describe everything about a character in one paragraph whereas it could be divided into multiple. one of the two major issues I have with this book (from what I’ve read) is the sexualisation of seventeen year olds. technically speaking all of the characters that have been presented - from what information has been provided surrounding thier age - are minors, this is illegal where I come from (I don’t know about you) and should be visited/edited promptly (including the sex scene under the stairs). the last issue I present with this book is the lack of body/figure diversity. so far all the women have been described as “curvy” with “tight fitted clothing, nothing left for the imagination” (again, heavy hinting on minor sexualisation). same with the men, all described as tall and muscular. are there any thin women/men? any plus sized characters? the use of body diversity in stories can be very helpful with real world body positivity in readers and can also attract a larger audience.

Yvette Jara Peña

I loved your story!♡

Daniela Ruiz Cabilin

Thank you for inviting me 😊 to read your story,this is amazing and I love it I must say , hopefully I'll read your other stories.💜

tifa💜fleur✿

The narration is beautiful and even the narration method is wonderful

Gruffinfuck

i really like it.

Jana Haríňová

😱

Meee

I love the story so far I can’t wait to finish reading❤️❤️