Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

Visitor

so he really is Parker’s brother…but he’s a piece of sh**!

Visitor

is Parker’s hair red or black one page said red and then another saying it was black

MoxyByProxy

I’m not through the series yet, but I wanted to get this thought out before I forget. This is a really good story, don’t get me wrong, it needs editing, nothing that will stop me from reading but this will sum it up as to why this is a good book, if you read as many of these webnovels as I do, when readers notice a book needs edits, in the Comments, every one becomes a an English Professor, and they are brutal and mean but in this book, there is some serious editing to be done, but maybe 1 or 2 comments on it because everyone is talking about the theories and the plot twist, at least where book 1 ends. This book has an ending you don’t see and don’t expect for these genre, which is why I assume readers are not even concerned about the edits, it’s that good! I could even see this as a series, I’d be invested so hard 🤘

Iris Georgia

#HalloweenVibe

Rebecca Wheland

This was a great story with all the awesome twists. I love things that can keep me wanting more with mind engaging changes. I can't wait to dive into book 2, Thank you for all your awesome works!!!

Suzanne Thompson

j5c3. Great story, I love the twists and turns of events that go on. Truely enjoyed being introduced to other shifters other than werewolves.

Reader-731248

j5c3 I think this plot seems very interesting. I am looking forward to see how it goes.

Tre Lim

j5c3 I am so torn between the leads on who I feel for the most hahha I love the story. the plot is really good. a lot of twists. a lot of mystery. great all in all

Sumriti Singh

j5c3 it's a great story i read the complete series and it's well written with the twist of many weres in it

Kitty-694016

j5c3. An amazing story! I read the sequel as fast as I could. I love that there are all kinds if shifters in the story line. I want more!

Francesca Delacruz

I wish I could find the Next book, Sebastian’s story

Bella Jersey 2

I hope rejection is coming

Bella Jersey 2

let try to get this friends don’t like them. sibling doesn’t like them and wolf HATES them. sure get involved in relationship with them great idea

Racquel Mcknight

what do guys think about Sebastián should she go back to him after he rejected her for that slut

Reader-026484

what kind of woman would accept her husband and mate having a mistress!! what an asshole!!!

Fale

Well he deserved it. I would do the same. why keeping someone’s leftover uff. Dare to come back for her? he can go eff himself uff. Now he knows what it feels like to be unwanted 🤨 what was the moon goddess thinking pairing them up pft 🤦‍♀️ he’s an idiot and he called himself an Alpha baaah! 😓

Deborah Mcdonald

interested but for the moment will continue looking.

Deena Bidiman

Sebastian is a liar he didn’t think about his mate for5 years. he only thought about his. Sebastian only thought his mate when he caught gia charting on him

wow!! that was aaaa bombshell?!! lol… tmi love it!!!

Jozzette Vaughn Hagemann

what book comes after this? I can't find any description or list

Sonia McLeod

well I was not expecting this what a bombshell love it 🥰

BookDragon

What a great chapter!!! I loved it!!

Sonia McLeod

thank God it needed to be done or else Nathaniel would not stop thank you for the update 😘😘🇬🇧

Laurisha Richmond

is it he her dad

Beautiful ❤️

Fale

Oh! I love the story so far. Breaking a mate bond due to another stupid alpha, I couldn’t agree more. Seriously, why most alphas in stories are idiots. Dare to call their mates weak/not good enough uff 🙄 the nerve of this man to come back after 5yrs and to think she will accept a child of another woman he left her (his fated mate for) with open arms, he must be delusion! 🙄🤦‍♀️ I’m glad she has a very strong personality and I hope she would make his life hell uff! 🤨

Sonia McLeod

😭😭joy full such a wonderful chapter

Orifha Mbedzi

amazing book with a great structure😍

Rhonda S Lane Dugan

what is a whelp?

Willa Reed

I haven’t finished the book yet but it has some interesting and unexpected turns. sometimes the POVs can get a bit much but it’s a part of the world building. Worth at least checking it out but don’t expect the 18+ content to be explicit because it’s not. I’d classify it as one chilli pepper 🌶 on the spice scale. Just to keep thag in mind when going into it!

this is my thing and I’m sorry if it comes off any other way than opinions of a fan w/ respect; I’ve read most or your responses to comments on the story and it’s a bit contradicting bc in true werewolf writing rayne would’ve healed and been with Sab as fate trumps all, Sab forced to move on but Edmund has to work it out???? This is more of a “shifter” world book where the main character is a part of the wolf world in a non traditional way and so when you claim it a were story it confuses folks a bit (((fan or not in all senses, looking for a werewolf story))) b/c of the serious, contradictory unusual parts written about the werewolf community.

Sonia McLeod

love the changed cover 🎉

wow! so much in one chapter and we’ll written. thank you for the update.

one crazy enemy down and CRAZY DARK WARLOCK left to go. okay we know what his weakness is..

Aryan Verma

awesome🙌🙌

what an ending to that crazy warlock. but so sad.

Reader-320185

I think the mystery guy on the beach is her brother, that she doesn’t remember. 🙀

Andrea Gower

haha got me next chapeter had it

Cassarndra Skarratt

thank you so much for another amazing chapter

North Rose 🌹

Here is my new update schedule. I will be updating this book and my other two books on Friday afternoons. If my time allows it, I may add more during the week, but please don't take that as I will. Have a great day.

Donna DeNardo Grogan

Hope all is well . Glad you are updating.

Parker is easily my favorite character thus far! Such a good guy.

BookDragon

Nice update! Closer together would be great!! Well, at least things are looking up for them!!

Jessica Graves

love this book so far 😍

Ellen Leibfrid

chapter 75. I really admire writers when they take the time to comment on the readers comments. It shows that you appreciate your readers. thank you.

Noelle Justine Parra Bertram

sending positive vibes your way! your books stay in my library and will wait as long as needed because I love your books! hope all is going well and take all the time you need! the true fans will be waiting patiently! 💓💓💓

BookDragon

HO Boy 😮!! That was brutal 😣🙈!! Poor Arabella 😢!! I would love to know why he is being the way he is?How is he going to be Alpha of the re-born Jade Moon pack if he had no Luna? I think there’s a reason why he got her as a second chance mate(and that’s it)!! And yeah with Nathaniel even though he has no powers he can find someone who can help him! So Rayne and Parker have to be very careful!

Lisa Galindo

does this book continue or should I go to his redemption?

Lisa Galindo

does this book continue or should I go to his redemption?

love the updates!! hope you feel better.

Angélica Edmondson Díaz

I’m so glad she had her true love ❤️‍🩹❤️❤️

Giselle Simone

Is this story complete?

Jennifer L. Giambrone

Hi Ms.Rose!! Hope all is well with you! Just wondering when you were planning to give an update (Redemption or Returned)? Really missing my NorthRose fix!! 😁 As always, sending positive vibes from #northrosefangirl ✌️💖

Camie Michelle Smallwood

I was really hoping Rayne and Sebbie would work things out! Not happy! The Moon Goddess doesn't make mistakes!! People deserve a second chance and Seb needed a chance to proof he was the mate Rayne needed and deserved after what he did to her 5 years ago!

Reader-208959

is this book complete? I want to read it but I have the suspense of waiting

Reader-208959

is this book complete? I want to read it but I have the suspense of waiting

this is an awesome book.. loving it

Liz Martinez

I started this book a few years ago and its always been stuck in the back of my mind, I'm so glad I found it again

Lyn

I just started reading this book and I love it already

Ayla Benson

goddess Sebastian is a complete idiot. he's incapable of using his brain..! every choice he makes proves it

Jennifer L. Giambrone

thank Godess you're back!! ✌️❤️

Jessica Sevin

I am glad this story does not follow the traditional werewolf story line. I like how creative it is

katherine lopez

it would’ve been a great twist i

Julie Jirovsky

This has been a great story line. I love how you are showing the loopholes in Arabella's spells to the subject of second chance mates including urger super naturals. I can't wait for more.

Lisa Galindo

does this book continue or should I go to his redemption?

Lisa Galindo

does this book continue or should I go to his redemption?

Very glad you are back and praying for a speedy recovery. This is an awesome book and loving the storyline. Thank you!

thank you for the updated!! I can barely contain my excitement!!!

Hope Harvey

I like this book

Angela R

I eyerolled so hard when I read that Sebastian wanted to find Ryan’s right after he cut his slut cheating why did it take you 5 years to realize how much of a fool you are omg he doesn’t deserve her idc

dr.penguin

that second stranger better not be her previous alpha

Alexis Gonzales

great so far... absolutely amazing

North Rose 🌹

I am so sorry everyone. I know the lack of updates can be frustrating. I will try to get these updates for all three books out next week. Pain and tiredness have taken their toll on my entire life. Thank you to everyone who has stuck by me during this time.

This book is very good and appears to be well written. I think that the strange man could be her father. I hope she doesn't forgive Sebastian to quickly and that she makes him work hard to earn her trust. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. 😀💖

Reader-983890

is part of series

love this book I’ve added the others to my library already. patiently waiting on an update 😊😊❤️

Elimontana9

finally got the chance to read it... and love it!

Erika Brewer-Brimmer

I found a new author love how you write love your story you handled a very hard seen with dignity and grace letting the the readers deductions take them there with out being to graphic

jessica burgess

Thank you for the update I hope you continue to get well (:

Pam Beasley

thank you for the updates! didn’t expect the crossover to happen but it totally makes sense!

Amanda Hamilton

I am so sorry, however when are the updates?

so thankful you are back. praying for a speedy recovery. I love both theses books!!

katherine lopez

it would’ve been a great twist if Parker’s mate ended up being arianna

Shannon Roberts

I hope you are getting better every day. poor arabella. so what book will their story be in? and I must say that I’m totally in love with Monroe!! what book will his story be in? Also just so you know I would totally be down for being a character in one of your books! (a good one) LoL especially if I could be a mate to one of the characters!!! just saying!

nicg20

I absolutely love your writing style, the stories are very original and refreshing. I find myself to be very invested in tour characters when I read. thank you so much for the update. hope you are feeling well.

Joy Moran

Seriously, a FIVE year leap? Not sure about this.

Taneesha Harmony'Jimmie Hawkins

I finished this book when I thought it was done and started reading His Redemption but this book ended up continuing. How should I read the books from now? I know there is a crossover and I dont want it to ruin the other book for me.

Taina Iosefo

Omg I’m finally caught up with this book. love it so much!! Can’t wait for the next update. Hope you’re doing well.

Dhyan 💙

ahhh I love the new chapter!! excited to see what arabella has to say! keep up the great work!

Elaine Pierce

I just started reading this book and it's awesome!

Glemmett Maylor

I hope you are well. I'm just sitting, calmly sitting my tea and awaiting your next update. dwl

Wcha

I dont like sebastian

Anita Mara

Hi! just added this book to my library. I was wondering is the story is ending? because i like starting books once they are finished. I’m not very patient with waiting on updates. thanks!

Hope Harvey

I like this book 📖

Ifeoluwa Adeniyi

Do I just started this book and I find it funny that less than an hour after finding his ‘love’ in the arena of another, he is demanding for maybe to come back and be his mate. Personally if I wasn’t Ryan’s and I found that out, I’ll want to kill him. So she’s only good enough if the other one’s a whore.

Lena Sanders

how is ms. north rose?! I'm missing this story something fierce! get better, love.

hmmm good begenning

Dhyan 💙

love the suspense in the update! wonder why Owen is gonna do! keep up the great work!!

Reader-343252

I absolutely love Rayne and Parker and their relationship that’s how it’s supposed to be!!..true mates!!

Betty Mae Sanford

bash cant die