The Alpha's Unknown Heir Comments

Essie Morgan

when will this book be done I’ve waited 2 months for an update…I understand that you aren’t feeling well but geesh

Kayla Bobo

I think it’s extremely selfish of Asher and Imogen to have made that promise, they didn’t even think about the poor people who would be mated to them who would have to live life rejected because of them. Rejection kills.

Ellen Leibfrid

thank you for your update!

Omayra Gomez

she slept with him because she knew her sister was his mate. what a b****. when is the update. it's been forever

Honesly where’s Levi’s and Liam’s story? I here conjuring it up and they’re so fun!!! They sure tell Asher like it is.

Asher might be physically strong but he’s mentally weak - he needs help. Imogen is just an enabler. He and Imogen are both so selfish it hurts. I’m glad Darian woke her up a little. I was hoping Jax could get through to his son a bit. That Beta didn’t accept the rejection right? I hope he gives her a little taste of what rejection can really feel like. Can’t wait to see her sister really be the badass she was initially portrayed to be while still hoping that evil aunt doesn’t get under her skin. As always, can’t wait to read more!

Ellen Leibfrid

I just noticed the story was updated. Thank you. your story is the only reason I keep this app. I didn't know you have been ill. I hope you get better in your own time. Do what your doctors tell you to do to recover.

Marlene

I can’t stand Asher and Imogen. They are so selfish that it makes them annoying. I can’t understand why Asher would do that to his mate after what his mother went through. And how can Imogen treat her sister the way she does? That’s wrong.

brandi hogg

I hope your feeling better

I’m kind of disappointed with how these 2 are, i don’t know if I’m looking forward to reading about them! Jax & Breas story was great maybe I was thinking it would be just as good!

Ladi Lee

I hate every bit of this so far. I'm deleting this book.

l hope they find there way back to each other. I like Imogen and Ash together so what if they have mates they have wanted each other since they were kids when there parents put them together

EMC

let’s see how she fights it off? will she reject him or will he reject her? will she be able to resist at all?

Trisha Reynolds

oh boy hurry with next chapter can’t wait to see if she rejects him

please update

finally things moving somewhere!!!! can’t wait for next chapter !!

Anthony

Is the Beta going to be Imogen's mate?

hopefully she’s run to her mate!

I like how he reminisced about his childhood with Imogen, but boy it was a short chapter!

I hope you are doing better. I appreciate the update.

Ravinder Thandi

the female lead(s) are so demeaning. who does that and who wants someone who treats them like that. this story is so repetitive as well. you get updates that don't mean anything, just re-hashing the same thing over and over

I’m glad Imogen’s mate has appeared! teach Asher a lesson!

is this the last chapter or will there be more?

I love this book but am also getting frustrated with the updates maybe write when you can and then update them together....

ah hahahahahhaaaaaaaa!!!! oh man! how hilarious!!!

Wcha

I'm not liking Brea right now she has Brennan who's been amazing to her and it's like she forgets it once Jax shows up it makes her look weak especially after everything Jax done to her

Mrs.Hyde

That's ridiculous what was the the point of giving Imogen a mate other than Asher if she was going to regret him anyway to be with Asher?

Allison Kerpash

I have a question. I notice that the writer uses "would" instead of "will". Is this just a quirk?

I don’t understand why Asher hates viola so much, he doesn’t even know her for a fact. I understand that he loves Imogen, but Viola is his mate, there’s supposed to be mates pull between them right? wasnt he supposed to feel something for her, at least a bit, especially after he felt sparks from their touch. it’s so confusing...

Am I the only one who sees Brea as ungrateful. I feel bad for Brennon - he was nothing but kind to her and all he is getting now is attitude from her. The man’s a Saint! Been with her and gave her space and love for 5 years. Damn! I believe he loves her but I don’t think she ever really loved him. poor guy! …so far anyway.

Diana Silburn

I just can’t stand Imogen. they both annoyed me how much they fight to be together and they aren’t even meant to be I don’t think she will be able to fight the pull with her mate. why can’t they just accepted it and be with who they really want to be with

Jess Renee

oh snap. I have a feeling Imogenes mate is about to show up! muhuhahaha hoping I’m right. I feel like all this is going to blow up in Ashers face. Or.... we’re setting up for a double rejection and V and the beta can be second chance mates and the other two can get on with playing house 🤷🏼‍♀️ I hate that I can’t like those two. They remind me of spoiled kids always getting their way not caring about anything else.

Karla Carlos

I can't stand Asher and Imogen anymore😤 they're acting like victims when the truth is the opposite! they're selfish and Asher ughh I hate him even more now that he is aknowledging what his mothet went through when his dad slept with others women and still want to act like that against Viola 😤😤😤😤. they deserve whatever comes to them. dear author I'm so confused cause you're writing Viola's characters in the way to make us hate her which I don't understand and we are hating Asher and Imogen more. I hope you do some justice to Viola and the twins, cause clearly they don't deserve what they've been put through their whole lives. the lack of love from their parents and family.

argg!! stupid Asher and Immy. they deserve every downfall. you can't fix everything with loving each other. He has a pack to run and is doing nothing. and whats up with Brea?! Viola should just reject stupid Asher. At least she could get a second chanch

Jenny Fritsch

it started out good...but now it's just disgusting and I hate this f*cken alpha!! I mean who takes a pup away from there mother just to make her come back??

Stacy Butler

hmm why has he never rejected viola then? why keep her hamging if he loves immy SO BADLY??

update?

Tabitha Nichols

if your into a weak female character this is so your story! anyone looking for a character with strength and not willing to play dead and let people abuse and degrade her (it’s the entire story) move on.

yessssd! I knew it! beta ... Imogen we will see howbit turns out. but I am voting Imogen can't handle the mate pull and Asher looks like a fool because he basically reject Viola.

Jasmine Hazelbaker

I want Asher to move on n be happy

I can’t wait for Imogen to find her mate!

I think Asher needs to know Viola before he actually has an impression about her she maybe nicer then what we are actually know just very hurt!

Jess Renee

I knew it!!

ha! yessss I knew it. I hope tho blows up for them big time

I feel like I need more chapters. Impatiently waiting for more

Its been ages, but Asher didn't even reject his mate, because his mother wouldn't let him. Now Imogen has rejected hers. Hopefully, Xavier gets a better mate then Imogen!!

nicg20

I hope viola doesn’t stay an awful person because of this. I hope she rejects him and moves on. using her for an heir is worse than what his father did to his mother. His brother should be Imogens mate and end up with viola instead. just waiting for some karma to kick in

brie pare

I wish it was a little cheaper

does anyone know how often updates are?

EMC

when will the next update be up

so he was Jenkins to Imogen?! and had been off the radar because he secretly doesn't want to be Alpha, he just wants to be happy and have babies with Imogen?! oh who cares! I'd he really felt so strongly for Imogen it wouldn't matter about having an heir. one of his brothers could become alpha there, and he could resign and be beta. but he needs to reject Viola before it hurts Imogen and Viola any further.

EMC

fell like he will start having and imagine Viola more ... time to come clean with Imogen . if truly loves her tell her truth anc come up with plan how to reject Viola and be fair to both sisters.. less heartbreak

So So

Is there a Chapter 87 coming or another book to continue?

LBP

I'm loving the book thus far but would like to inquire when we can expect the next chapters to be uploaded. I get so caught up in the things I read that I just want to read it all the way through until the end. I genuinely love how you show both sides... the strength of the mate bond between Brea and Jax... and the strength to fight for true love between Asher and Imogen. Can't wait to read the rest. 🥰

nicg20

I am new to your books and I am hooked! the story progression and character building is amazing! on another note.

first I hope Asher eventually realise he’s meant to be with viola and will chose her, that Imogen will find her happiness . Noe I hope viola will find here happiness and those two will suffer from their actions. I can’t believe that Imogen knowing that he’s her sisters mate is behaving like this, like he belongs to her... he doesn’t!!! how can you do something like this to your sister... ughh, can’t wait to see what’s coming next, would be nice to finally know more about viola , what’s her actual thoughts about all this, does she care about Asher or only power..

THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

Hello readers, as you all may have noticed, I haven’t updated in a while. that’s because I am battling with a lot of things right now that a 19 year old shouldn’t have to go through. As some of you might’ve remembered, I’ve been in and out of the hospital and as it turns out, it’s much more serious than I thought. I don’t feel comfortable discussing the details but I promise that once I’m better and stable, I will be updating. thank you for understanding

I wonder if Viola ends up with her sisters mate! how the tables would change then!

Trisha Reynolds

please when is the next update

Jasmine Hazelbaker

ok I hope this starts moving with a good plot now...

MirahLove

thank you for the updates! despite what others are saying and being unhappy I’m just glad to get regular updates as I love this book 🥰 keep up the good work, I always look forward to the updates 😊

cmcrobb

Can't wait for the next update!

the more I read the more I get pissed off with Asher and Imogen

Diana Silburn

They got to be the stupidest of them all. they are so selfish V needs to reject ashers ass he deserves the pain . he is not even happy with Imogen because if he was he wouldn’t be cutting like he does

Reader-323329

I’m shocked at breas behavior after what she went though to be so cruel?! viola is Imogens sister and grew up with her other sons how can she be so evil? honestly viola had been treated so horribly I don’t get it she still really just a kid it’s sad and so messed up

EMC

when is the next update

finally this story plot is gonna go somewhere! patiently waiting for another update, I hope you can update a bit more frequently or at least post a couple chapters at a time, it is an agonizing long wait between chapters. But I do appreciate you and the story yiu have been building!

ok so love scorned viola is going to be soooo bad and I can’t wait. at this point, I don’t care if both packs go to hell.

Zabrina L Pesqueira

Omg, when is the next update???

Sniderin

Muah ha ha!!! Bye Imogen!!!!

the selfishness is astounding 😒 I hope absolutely everything falls apart for Imogen and Asher and they do not get a happy ending

with each chapter I hate Imogen and Asher more and more… where is karma!?! why their mates has to suffer from their selfishness?! beta is right!! he deserves someone much better than Imogen!! I hope he will end up with Viola!! they deserved to be happy

EMC

was he with someone else or just pleasuring hinself

Great job author. I’m actually a fan of Imogen and Asher. I hope they can stay together. There parents put them together as children in hopes they were mates. so what they aren’t mates but love each other deeply. they have been together since childhood leave them alone and let them be happy those people who are bashing the author you can always stop reading no need to be rude. this is the authors story and she can tell how she see it.

Reader-953780

omg is Jax dead☹️

Hope he doesn’t reject his mate Viola

Great read looking forward to the next chapters, would be great to hear about the twins aswell!

anaj13

Oh Asher, what are you doing? You’re only hurting yourself, Imogen & your real mate Viola! Ugh, I blame the moon goddess for putting them in this predicament!

Jasmine Hazelbaker

be great if viola n the beta get together ! then Asher n imogen can keep each other bc neither is really happy... why would Asher be a cutter if so? n imogen... well she is a whiny lil Karen

Trisha Reynolds

this book is amazing. looking forward to the next update hopefully it’s soon

EMC

so did Imogen know?

i don't think viola will be a villain I bet she will save all them dumb s.o.b's who seam to have their heads in the clouds.....

I hope the visiting Beta is Imogen’s mate

Amy Sabatino

when is there going to be an update

Really Asher, that's so messed up! He knew this was gonna end up hurting Imogen and Viola and yet he still thought with only his member. He has to end up with his mate or he will never have his own Heir! I bet he he is gonna be super jealous and possessive if Viola starts dating let alone mating with someone else. I hope she does just to put him in his place!!

is update coming any time soon? I’am dying to know what happened next, and tyres of checking everyday for update ☘️

I'm confused... I thought she turned 18 when she met her mate... now she's 16 and pregnant?

Reader-312060

okay I’m done with waiting for the author to release another chapter!

Ellen Leibfrid

chapter 77 (spoiler alert). Author. you are doing an excellent job regarding Asher and his cutting. I hope this develops into him getting professional help and cutting frequently is thought of as a female disorder whereas this is happening to a male. Thanks.

MirahLove

omg I love this!

Simone Kitzinger

I hope Viola gets her happy end and asher and imogen really Hit the rock bottom.

when the next update?

Jessica Carr

I can’t believe it😭😭😭😭

anaj13

I’m rooting for Asher & Imogen!! Hopefully once Imogen comes of age they find out that they are indeed mates!

EMC

is history going to repeat itself ????

Ajax is an A hole!

okey we all are eager to get updates faster, but let’s have a bit of understanding that written have health issues and not feeling well!! She no need more pressure from here, her health is more important than this! I’am sure she will update as often as she can, let’s be supportive and not bombing her with comments about updates. hope you feel better soon, take care of yourself! x

what’s going on with this story? any timeline on updates? Perhaps an estimate?

teamviola!!! how cruel of her sister, she knew this whole time, seems absolutely no one cares about violas feelings, feel sorry for her..

anaj13

Damn, Jax & Brea after all this time, ya’ll still reproducing?! 😂 I feel for Asher & Imogen! Imogen is going to be heartbroken when she finds out that her sister is mated to Asher! The Moon Goddess is really cruel for making that happen!