The Alpha's Unknown Heir Comments

J C

I'm gonna try this story, I hope im not disappointed by her returning to that asshole that rejected her, I hate when people are that weak.

Minnie Mouse

OMG! smh and he fell for the trap and left the child outside like what?! I’m so excited for the next update I hope she ends up with Jax. Also just want to say really like the book and always looking forward to the updates 😊

Snowflake

I ship Brea and Jax!! I love how he has to work for it n that she doesnt give in as soon as she starts getting attention Love it when the protagonists can hold their ground! Oh and I love this book! Can't wait for the next update!

hcarp

This story is so good! I can't wait to see how it pans out. I think that Brennan had a good run, but he completely lost me when he left Asher outside by himself to play hide the sausage. I have a feeling both Jax and Brea are going to have words with him in the next few chapters.

Jazmin Conn

when will next update be out

Zuleika Boekhoudt

5 years no sex. That's a bit too much. If he's not getting it from you he's getting from somewhere else

Eiyah

This chapter was a heavy hitter for a co parent like myself. it’s not always easy to share custody.

Reader-671139

it looks like Jax might be a decent father but I really don’t like him!!!

Minnie Mouse

Omg things are starting to take a turn 🤔 such a great job can’t wait to get more updates ☺️

RaeRae Farris

when will the next update be?

love this book

Eiyah

This is sweet. I hope you continue it.

Alyssa

I am anxious to see what will happen when she meets up with the pack members, her former tormentors 😱😱

Amanda Caruana

wow!!! this is SO good

Reader-671139

I love my girl Brea!!!

edisamc2

I’m happy the ya re get to along. hope the parents don’t give her too much trouble ... but glad Jax doesn’t care about their opinion

josie toparea

Brea is being batch right now, she makes it out Brennons being unreasonable,she's selfish. She's the one who's changed. The love and patience that Brennon is showing her is true, and he's willing to wait for her.But she's pushing him away more and more. I feel so sad 😥 fri Brennon 😢

Jasmine Hazelbaker

thanks for the update

Ellie K

Now Brennon blew it 😤 men.. When the story goes back to Brea's POV it says that she left Asher with Jax, but I guess that's suppose to say Brennon?!? 😉

Brittney Allen

this book is not very realistic who is with someone for 5 yes without doing the do...🙄😳

RaeRae Farris

when's the next update

Brea Cheadle

it's my name being in a story for me but it's a good story tho😂🖤💕

edisamc2

did Jax smell Bree before she turned of age? don’t remember? I hope they do have happy ending and she is his mate

Ellie K

I believe this is the point I'd smack Brennon in the face 😅 Jeez.. grow up man! This is not how you fight for your woman!

Minnie Mouse

just started it and omg so good

Eiyah

I want so badly for her to be with Brennon

Ellie K

Now I really want the next chapter!! 😱😂

Really enjoying the book... Jax is right in saying you think weak u will be weak change Brea's mind set and they will work it out, glad to see her training keep it up 😀and then to see the fight between her and Katlyn 👍 👏 please update soon

Rainz World

that was short lol

edisamc2

please let them find him and let her and Jax go back to his pack

Ellie K

So stubborn!! She's going to get in trouble 😓😅

Tabitha Nichols

🤦🏼‍♀️

Zuleika Boekhoudt

Ugh BRENNON you're such a B****

Dayummmm. 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Reader-671139

Maybe she gets Asher back and then leaves both Jax and Brennon???

anaj13

Ugh Brennan! I was rooting for your ass, but you had to go and ruin it!! Seriously, at it took was for a girl to smile at you to make you break! Brea is not going to forgive now especially because of his illict activities Asher is missing. Bet you anything they sent her as a distraction. I wonder who took Asher... Jax is going to be mad! Can’t wait for the next update!

Giu Castellano

i mean, their kid are still disappeared and their playing couple?!?! Im just confused, where is Asher??

EMC

don’t give up on her Jax. fight for her and don’t leave her sight

Reader-870190

am loving this story but so fustaratrd that it’s a tiny chapter update a few times a week

edisamc2

I hope Jax comes out of this unharmed ....

Alyssa

How often does the author update? This looks like a great story but I don’t want to get all hooked on the story and be left hanging lol

Minnie Mouse

omg so good!!!!

Tabitha Nichols

easy way out. kill brennon. she still needs to grow a spine

Reader-671139

Thank you for the chapter. Happy New Year!! Excited for what happens next. I hope Brea rejects Jax officially and shows how much she wants to be with Brennon.

anaj13

Noooo!! Jax can’t be dead!!! Not now when they working on things and Brea is going to need him the most!! I’m glad Asher is safe!! Why you gotta leave us hanging like that?!

Reader-671139

Men suck!!! Thank you for the update although I wanted to scream knowing Brennon was going to show his weakness and screw up!!! Seems a little convenient hmm...

Reader-671139

You go girl!!! Don’t let Jax off too easy!!!

Curious

go get yo son girl i got yo back!!!!!

Gabby van der Westhuizen

please don't kill Jax she needs him and the kids make him service please I can't stand it 😢 somehow please

Ellie K

Thanks for the new chapter! Always happy to see one 😁😁

Eiyah

So good. just caught up and thoroughly loving it

Curious

daaaaaaamnnnnnnn

Tammy Hertz

when is the next update to be released

Elizabeth Edmondson

I was wondering if the Beta's sister would have any consequences. Seems suspicious she showed up at that moment to distract him from the child.

hcarp

This story is so good! I can't wait to see how it pans out. I think that Brennan had a good run, but he completely lost me when he left Asher outside by himself to play hide the sausage. I have a feeling both Jax and Brea are going to have words with him in the next few chapters.

sooo.. I get it. she’s tortured and kind- but real kindness, would definitely not have let her hang onto the man for 5 years. 5. giving him hope with her “I love you” and make-out sessions but never anything more. she gets more benefits out of their relationship and still is stringing him along. she may not have asked him to admit he liked her, and yeah he could’ve broke it off sooner (seeing as he is a man and clearly neither of them are asexual) but he obvi held on because she gave him hope. and the whole time. the whole time. she gave him only a part of herself because she didn’t want to hurt her mate? and that makes her kind? she deserves Jax. they’re both assholes. if a guy did that to a woman he’s all kinds of messed up & owed a few slaps- but she’s... kind? foh. I hope Brennan finds his second chance mate and is happy. I hope Asher is able to maintain at least a good friend/second father figure/mentor relationship with Brennan. he’ll need the balance- seeing how both his parents are assholes and cowards. that’s my opinion on the characters- not the story. obvi the story is good, seeing as how it managed to rile up an opinion as if the people are real.

Chassielashes D

the book sounds good so far but I'm very curious will we get more than one chapter update to actually see what really happens

Ellie K

Well, he is not that bad after all 😁 Love how is all shifts, the one I liked is an idiot, and the idiot is just a lovely idiot 🤣🤣