Alpha Asher's Hidden Mate Comments
Visitor
needs a lot of editing, not well written, the story is good, but lack explanation on who the characters are...
10/05/2025 12:04Visitor
great read
10/03/2025 14:18Visitor
I tried so hard but gave up like 30 chapt before the end. The potential for a really great story is here but the number of times that the details and past events change just got my head spinning to the point where I couldn’t get through it. One min he shifts into a wolf, the next he’s riding his wolf? One min she watched something happen, the next she did it, one min the didn’t talk about something, the next they did. Someone needs to edit and republish. Once that happens, it will be a nice read
09/28/2025 22:21