Balance of Light and Shadow Comments

  • Daleil

    Chapter 11 2nd line from the top “I see an obedience” not a obedience

    05/29/2025 08:20
  • Daleil

    chapter 7 . six lines from the top you’re… ie the short version of you are so therefore … definitely not ‘your’. still loving this book. woohoo.

    05/29/2025 07:56
  • Daleil

    I am really into this book and am so glad I started reading it. Author.. if this beginning is anything to go by; this old girl reckons you are a winner winner chicken dinner! Bless you.

    05/29/2025 07:51
  • Daleil

    I wish I could be normal like them ( missing word here)

    05/29/2025 07:23
  • Daleil

    You’re just jealous not your

    05/29/2025 07:21
  • Daleil

    Chapter 2. Michelle comes down next or Michelle came down next.

    05/29/2025 07:20
  • Daleil

    Paragraph 5. we’re going out not we’re going out.

    05/29/2025 07:18