Balance of Light and Shadow Comments
Daleil
Chapter 11 2nd line from the top “I see an obedience” not a obedience
05/29/2025 08:20Daleil
chapter 7 . six lines from the top you’re… ie the short version of you are so therefore … definitely not ‘your’. still loving this book. woohoo.
05/29/2025 07:56Daleil
I am really into this book and am so glad I started reading it. Author.. if this beginning is anything to go by; this old girl reckons you are a winner winner chicken dinner! Bless you.
05/29/2025 07:51Daleil
I wish I could be normal like them ( missing word here)
05/29/2025 07:23Daleil
You’re just jealous not your
05/29/2025 07:21Daleil
Chapter 2. Michelle comes down next or Michelle came down next.
05/29/2025 07:20Daleil
Paragraph 5. we’re going out not we’re going out.
05/29/2025 07:18