Emma, abused by her Alpha father, then sold to another pack. Finds herself rescued by a kind and gentle Alpha and Luna who take her as their own. But their is something different about Emma and her wolf.  
TRIGGER: child abuse is mentioned in the first part of the book. what was done, not it being done. this is important to understand Emma and Dawn her wolf.  


Emma and the wolf in me

I really like this story but sometimes it’s hard to follow. Some punctuation or sometimes none at all plus mispellings. Again I am willing to read through it because I really do like the story line. I am not saying this to be critical of your work. Just thought you would like some feedback. thanks! (also don’t let that get you down, my punctuation is not that good either lol)

I have been writing the rest of the story at night and getting it up as fast as i can, I do apologize for any thing missing, wrong names etc. I appreciate each and every reader and their feed back.  Especially if I have messed up  so I can go back and fix it. 


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