You Are Mine, Omega Comments
Visitor
I love this story and how the characters are portrayed is great for the plot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter.
07/26/2025 09:09Visitor
only on chapter 35 but it’s not bad. some of the dialogue is written weirdly but it’s still good. I’m looking forward to getting deeper into the story
07/16/2025 20:58Visitor
This story has a good plot. I can’t wait to see how this story ends.
06/30/2025 06:48Visitor
it’s not a bad story kind of slow. I’m not sure English is the writer’s first language by the way the story is written.
06/29/2025 05:15Visitor
it’s good so far totally recommend it
06/25/2025 19:27Visitor
good story. it could be better written. almost like it’s the rough draft instead of the polished finished version. I like the story line though.
06/09/2025 23:13