I Am His Wolfless Luna Comments
A M
In whole, it’s a near solid story/plot, kudos. Unfortunately there’s also a lot of inconsistencies, like the author can’t remember small details from earlier chapters and mixes things up. When I mentioned chapter 24, it was like there were two different writers writing the story; it legitimately started off strong, until that point, and the first actual spice scene between the two lead characters read as if it were written by someone posting their first piece of unedited fanfiction.
08/07/2025 23:18A M
By chapter 24, the main female lead takes a really weird and uncharacteristic turn. No way would anyone in their right mind accept a drink from someone again after being drugged and r*ped from their first experience, so why? And then the main male lead just willy nilly climbs into her hospital bed where they then proceed to have sex? He does this knowing she was drugged? This novel started off REALLY strong and good, but by chapter 24 it went downhill so fast. Really disappointing :(
08/06/2025 04:25
Visitor
loved the writing! the way the author has managed to give everyone a part and to see and feel things from the side characters POV - really builds the story
07/27/2025 03:33Visitor
I love this book so far. Especially the part where she takes on 3 wolves in her human form!
07/26/2025 02:12Rachel Draher
love the chapters
07/15/2025 21:10Visitor
love this book so far
07/15/2025 16:46Natalie O'Halloran
love this story line. The son is so good
07/13/2025 01:48Visitor
good book
06/28/2025 21:12Visitor
liking it so far
06/28/2025 15:59Visitor
so far I’m liking this I like that she is owning her own
06/28/2025 15:51Visitor
this book is amazing
06/28/2025 06:50Visitor
Overall, the story was good. There were some redundant areas that added chapters that felt forced. I enjoyed the story and the epilogues. Looks like a good start to new stories.
06/24/2025 10:34Visitor
I have a love and hate this book ok at the same time. I love the story. it has a great story line….. but the repetitiveness and the way the story drags is so frustrating. Overall good read though.
06/22/2025 02:37Visitor
I love the plot so far. I do wish the chapters were longer though
06/18/2025 08:06Visitor
this is a good book 🤩
06/15/2025 15:57Visitor
I’m loving this book so far. just started can’t wait to see how it goes!
06/15/2025 02:06Kendra 3883 Media
I love the story and the characters. Loved how it challenges the characters.
06/12/2025 11:14Melissa R
this is a h good book it’s awesome
06/12/2025 00:12Visitor
I am loving this book so far. can not wait for more updates. 💙 keep reading it keeps getting better. 💙
06/11/2025 16:54Visitor
the story is good and keeps you going. have stayed up many nights reading.
06/10/2025 20:36Visitor
Good story
06/10/2025 16:35Aneesha Dutta
The story is pretty interesting and keeps you engaged. Hopefully it doesn’t drag the story unnecessarily.
06/09/2025 07:15Visitor
how did she end up in the bathroom, I thought she went to the balcony??
06/02/2025 13:46Kristine Mae Paler
nice story
05/30/2025 14:41Trish Hawbaker
why no DNA tests. 🤦🏻♀️
05/15/2025 00:47
yann ann
good read❤️
05/08/2025 17:31Visitor
I’m confused when you make comments like they know Ethan is the father of Lucas, when neither have figured it out yet
05/01/2025 14:28Visitor
Brilliant! Excellent author.
05/01/2025 12:55Visitor
love this book. with lots of twists and turns. needs some editing at times but I just focus mainly on the story. hoping there’s going to be a book 2 for Leo or Lucas and the twins.
04/28/2025 01:49
Purple Halo
@heidi are you still updating this book?
04/24/2025 05:06Silke Adamson
epidural has no intubation tube. utter nonsense
04/23/2025 08:48Silke Adamson
pregnant?
04/22/2025 07:59Silke Adamson
and again a full day. awake at 4 driving to mansion, breakfast, no lunch but dinner, driving home. where was the son Lucas?
04/22/2025 07:49Silke Adamson
this is really getting bad. school, lunch, meeting was at 3 but quick home before going, but then thunderstorm und now Lucas is in bed sleeping and it is dark. All just jumbled together
04/22/2025 07:23Silke Adamson
after a shower they eat in the cafe/ after showering they stand outside???????
04/22/2025 06:30Visitor
loving the story so far. there are times that you think you know what’s gonna happen and gets frustrated. But then there are a lot of plot twists and something unexpected happens. As with any other books, the villains and lead characters will make you so frustrated and say”I’m done”, but I keep going back to it because I want to know what happens next.
04/18/2025 22:24
Reader-480918
I’m on chapter 113 … it’s all over the place and nowhere at the same time .. I’m done with it
04/18/2025 21:26Reader-480918
this book so annoying.. but for some reason I keep reading it to see if it going to get better ❤️🩹
04/18/2025 16:15Visitor
I was reading chapter 100 and something when the page went blank and couldn’t get back to the story.
04/12/2025 12:45Visitor
How often is it updated? I didn’t realize it wasn’t finished before I started reading it.
04/12/2025 00:20Visitor
like the book so far but should she not have an idea
04/07/2025 11:20Visitor
boring, why so repetitive? the more I read the more the book gets confusing 🤦🏽♀️
04/07/2025 06:34Franklin Tejeda
one chapter she remembers being with ethan the other she doesnt
04/06/2025 18:19Visitor
Will there be another book? or is this one not finished?
04/04/2025 22:57Visitor
they were played by two bimbos how original
04/04/2025 04:06Visitor
nothing is happening… the IQ of the characters are surprisingly dismal. quite disappointing.
04/04/2025 03:25Visitor
she has such a victim mindset it’s so annoying
04/04/2025 02:59Visitor
If nothing happens I will quit reading
04/04/2025 01:43Visitor
what is it about her and drinks? when will she learn?!!
04/03/2025 22:37Visitor
Heidi I need you to come back and give me more chapters. This book is soo good!!
04/03/2025 19:10Visitor
today is 4/2/25 there were 4 chapters updated today. when is the next update???
04/03/2025 01:38Visitor
so again how often do you update???
04/03/2025 01:36Visitor
I am so tired of these stories half finished!!!! this is so frustrating!!
03/31/2025 11:05Shelly Balderas
I hope the writer continues this book
03/29/2025 07:33user2501106525
can’t wait for the next update! hopefully it’s soon!!
03/29/2025 01:04Visitor
I thought alphas could sense their own pups. even in the womb..
03/28/2025 15:42Visitor
how often are chapters released ? and do we have an idea of how much longer the book will be
03/27/2025 15:37Visitor
I liked the book so far. I don’t like reading villain characters’ pov :(
03/27/2025 13:00Visitor
if one more chapter starts with the midday sun filters through I swear 🤣
03/26/2025 02:17Ellen Arias
so far the story is good hopefully the author don’t drag to long. and make her end up a weak FL like most stories
03/24/2025 03:58Visitor
anymore updates?
03/04/2025 19:14Visitor
love the story so far but no update yet. is it abandoned? hope not...
01/22/2025 03:36Rachel Kullman
i love this book so far! literally read all of it today lol. when will your next update be and how often do you do your updates??
01/01/2025 06:04
