My New Life Comments

  • Visitor

    it would be such a great read but it’s all over the place & the juicy parts have no bang to them. I think with some changes & not jumping around so much it will be one of my favorites. don’t give up! you have a great story here! ~from Alabama

    05/20/2025 18:04
  • user2505173105

    really enjoy the story

    05/18/2025 19:43
  • Visitor

    liked the story line but hard to read. Run on sentences and mistakes. sorry

    05/12/2025 14:05