My New Life Comments
Visitor
it would be such a great read but it’s all over the place & the juicy parts have no bang to them. I think with some changes & not jumping around so much it will be one of my favorites. don’t give up! you have a great story here! ~from Alabama
05/20/2025 18:04user2505173105
really enjoy the story
05/18/2025 19:43Visitor
liked the story line but hard to read. Run on sentences and mistakes. sorry
05/12/2025 14:05