A pack of their own Comments

  • Cynthia

    Some sentences in this chapter are cut off before the thought of the character is completed. Otherwise, I am loving the story.

    09/16/2025 10:34

  • Visitor

    loved this book!!

    09/16/2025 08:09

  • Lydia Katz

    not sure if it’s the upload or not but missing some of the story. it crunches in on part of it and it loses what is being said. can’t follow very well because of it.

    09/14/2025 18:07

  • Visitor

    This is a very nice book.

    09/12/2025 20:48

  • Visitor

    great story

    09/10/2025 00:43

  • Visitor

    great story

    09/06/2025 01:58

  • Visitor

    I really enjoyed this book. I actually plan on reading it again

    09/02/2025 11:35

  • Visitor

    I’m really enjoying this book. it’s well written and I love the main character

    08/26/2025 22:30

  • Brynn Sapia

    absolutely living it so far can’t put it down

    08/23/2025 09:44

  • Visitor

    Sounds like if Jessie’s mate is from Stone Claw she would fit in.

    08/18/2025 17:02

  • Visitor

    I like the story.

    08/17/2025 13:47

  • Visitor

    i loved the book. but you used a lot off time in the beginning to introduce everyone over and over agein.if its was the introduction to friends and family or ho was going against ho at the games. in the end it feeled like that ir was time to finish and get it done. That was a bit sad. But all in all was it an amazing book.

    08/17/2025 10:38

  • Kirren Raw

    Only on chapter 10 but so far I'm loving. Though there are cut-offs in the chapters, it doesn't impact the flow of the story, treat it like minor cliffhangers and you'd still enjoy it

    08/16/2025 12:32

  • Visitor

    I am enjoying this book for the most part, but agree that some chapters are cut off, thoughts not completed, and they are shorter.

    08/15/2025 10:40

  • _02P1ck13z20_

    Morning not Moring

    08/12/2025 19:39

  • Visitor

    I like the story development in this novel. Keshia is a character that most people can identify with. she part of a family don’t see her until it to late. I applaud her. great read

    08/11/2025 07:00

  • Visitor

    pretty interesting. however, it makes the main character seem strong and then weak.

    08/10/2025 04:21

  • Visitor

    liking this but tired of it getting cut off before the chapter ends and then get a bit unfocussed cuz of it leaving things out

    08/09/2025 22:57

  • Nandy smith

    Wait, so she gets a sister stabbed almost to death and that’s it? crazy

    08/08/2025 19:02

  • Visitor

    really good book so far can’t wait to see how things progress

    08/08/2025 05:35

  • Hilary Menzies-Baldwin

    repeat of info from Keska, please edit story

    08/07/2025 16:40

  • Visitor

    I'm enjoying this book

    08/06/2025 13:31

  • Visitor

    I’m enjoying the book

    08/03/2025 19:39

  • Adrienne Passineau

    I am loving this book. very exciting. I am about halfway I think and it’s great.

    08/02/2025 15:53

  • Savannah Henderson

    Amazing book

    07/29/2025 00:13

  • Diann Klaren

    still looking for next book

    07/27/2025 14:59

  • Visitor

    I'm really enjoying this book so far I just started it today

    07/21/2025 16:19

  • Samantha Cook

    I am liking this book a lot as it is only the first 10 chapters but it’s a bit different then a lot of other books in this genre so far

    07/21/2025 15:00

  • Francesca Delacruz

    I am loving this book and unfortunately, I put it to audio, and I don’t know how to change the voice can somebody please tell me how to change the voice cause I would love to listen to this at work

    07/20/2025 11:25

  • Abigail Collis

    love how keska puts people in their place lol

    07/19/2025 15:27

  • Rose Lyn

    love

    07/18/2025 20:30

  • Visitor

    I am very much enjoying this book, wonderful storyline, great characters, and the plot is fascinating.

    07/18/2025 17:52

  • Visitor

    vey nice story. well written.

    07/17/2025 22:40

  • Visitor

    loving this book so far

    07/17/2025 15:25

  • Crystal Hippe

    I absolutely love this book some parts of it make you think. I wonder if this is happening in real life to some families.

    07/17/2025 05:44

  • Visitor

    loving the book so far

    07/16/2025 18:26

  • Reader-445034

    i really enjoy this book so far. I was having issues with the chapters not finishing but once I changed it to scroll it was showing the full chapters

    07/15/2025 03:57

  • Visitor

    good book

    07/15/2025 03:55

  • Visitor

    been looking forward to read this book a long time now

    07/13/2025 22:57

  • Visitor

    I can’t stop reading. the story has me on the edge of my seat.

    07/09/2025 22:59

  • Visitor

    so far I am enjoying this book. some vocabulary errors occur that cause me to have to reread some sections but the story line is good.

    07/09/2025 22:06

  • Sara Bennett

    You have done an excellent job on your first novel. I have enjoyed this story and hope to read more from you. The more you write the better your grasp of vocabulary, sentence structure etc. will grow. All the best👍

    07/08/2025 23:08

  • Visitor

    you name whose thinking every 5 seconds. if she’s texting someone you can label but we don’t need the name in front of every paragraph. it’s unreadable as is unfortunately, but your story premise is good!

    07/08/2025 09:11

  • Visitor

    I love Keska and her group and can’t wait to see their pack formed

    07/08/2025 04:21

  • Visitor

    Oh my, I am so enjoying this story. It’s costing me a fortune.

    07/06/2025 18:18

  • Visitor

    i really enjoy the book, tank you.

    07/06/2025 10:46

  • Sophie Saunders

    it’s a fantastic book and I love the story

    07/03/2025 20:43

  • Visitor

    fantastic book brilliant story

    07/03/2025 14:56

  • Visitor

    I really enjoy the book it was not what I had expected. They are a great group

    07/03/2025 10:26

  • Visitor

    The book is starting off with a interesting story line. Can’t wait to see the twist and turns.

    07/02/2025 11:44

  • Visitor

    overall so far this book is a good read. over describing certain things that aren’t needed, and the commentary needs split instead of all in one paragraph. Storyline is good.

    07/02/2025 03:28

  • Visitor

    so far this book is interesting. a little slow on the uptake but other wise a great read.

    06/30/2025 05:19

  • Visitor

    I love it so far! I can’t wait to see how it ends.

    06/28/2025 15:43

  • Visitor

    i love this book

    06/27/2025 14:01

  • Visitor

    i like this book

    06/26/2025 07:35

  • Visitor

    I love this book I hove how you can see how special she is and how she does everything to better herself

    06/25/2025 20:13

  • Visitor

    I really like this book it showed how family’s really tread there kids they all have favorite ones

    06/25/2025 16:56

  • Visitor

    Awesome book! I love how she grows grows into who she is meant to be and has the support of a mate a the family the deserves, not just her given family who failed her.

    06/22/2025 06:25

  • Visitor

    Absolutely great book. Would love to see more of this series.

    06/22/2025 02:49

  • Melissa Larkin

    I loved this book, I loved how her siblings redeemed themselves, well almost all of them.

    06/21/2025 10:10

  • Emerald Ketterman

    I loved this book

    06/19/2025 16:25

  • Visitor

    loving the book but some of the chapters need fixed

    06/16/2025 16:43

  • Visitor

    great book

    06/15/2025 01:23

  • Reader-719537

    good book

    06/15/2025 00:35

  • Visitor

    good book

    06/14/2025 20:15

  • Visitor

    good book

    06/14/2025 19:00

  • frosty fangs

    hooked on this book!

    06/14/2025 12:34

  • Visitor

    good book so far

    06/13/2025 03:49

  • Visitor

    The book is good so far

    06/12/2025 19:12

  • Visitor

    Though there are parts that are redundant, I’m looking forward to seeing how this book ends!

    06/11/2025 16:00

  • Visitor

    heelo j j

    06/11/2025 14:09

  • Reader-871371

    Great book so far! Can’t wait to see what happens.

    06/10/2025 17:01

  • Visitor

    so far it is a good story though I am not understanding the layout of how the book is written. luckily that is all that I find that is difficult for me to understand. the story line is good and different then other stories that I have read on the different apps out there.

    06/10/2025 03:28

  • Jennifer Wright

    good story so far looking forward to seeing how things turn out

    06/09/2025 20:31

  • KNB

    very good read so far. hopefully it explains some of the family dynamics. wish the chapters weren’t so much.

    06/08/2025 14:36

  • Pam Phelps

    love this book so far, great story

    06/06/2025 12:13

  • Visitor

    is this book completed

    05/26/2025 16:10

  • Visitor

    love this book but why some lines are missing and incomplete at end and of every page? thanks !

    05/24/2025 23:21

  • MajorVongames

    this was an amazing book It was my absolute favorite book, it had me completely immersed and wanting even more!! You have created a beautiful piece!! I will be looking forward to see what more you write and come up with!! You have made me a permanent fan!!!!

    05/09/2025 22:56

  • Reader-348489

    please please do a Secound book to this I would love to read more about all the characters from this one. by far one of my top favourites to read an would some more from you.

    05/08/2025 01:53

  • Diann Klaren

    please think about writing a book two

    05/06/2025 13:06

  • Visitor

    when does the book update?

    05/03/2025 05:18

  • Visitor

    When is this going to be updated again? It has been at least a week since it was last updated. Impatiently waiting. 😔

    05/02/2025 02:05

  • Visitor

    I hope Jessie mate see her for the scum she is and rejects her in front of everyone

    04/30/2025 21:32

  • Diann Klaren

    if you need a really good story to read this is one of the best

    04/29/2025 22:00

  • Visitor

    I think it was that grandmother sutter who set her up

    04/29/2025 15:54

  • Nikki Hobbs

    love this book hope for more chapters please

    04/28/2025 13:24

  • Visitor

    The repetition is mind numbing! 63 chapters in and it’s getting worse not better.

    04/27/2025 11:15

  • Visitor

    love this book!!!! love the reference to my hometown! ❤️

    04/23/2025 20:22

  • IliyJali JalieIli RiverayRamos

    Refuges are more loving than her own pack. That means she will be a great leader.

    04/22/2025 16:19

  • Visitor

    really enjoying this book

    04/18/2025 21:16

  • Racheal A

    💜💜💜ty for this story n please don’t give up on it n hope you are in good health 💜💜I have truly enjoyed the aspects of your mind in this n hope you continue

    04/17/2025 01:50

  • Visitor

    it's accept not except.

    04/15/2025 17:02

  • Visitor

    I agree! it is a great story and am looking forward to reading more!

    04/15/2025 13:35

  • Ronnette Robinson-Warren

    can’t wait for more, great story

    04/13/2025 13:11

  • Visitor

    why is it taking so long to publish more chapters?

    04/13/2025 00:23

  • Nikki Hobbs

    more please I am craving to now what happens next

    04/12/2025 10:53

  • Visitor

    why is half the paragraphs missing all of a sudden????

    04/08/2025 15:30

  • Reader-797056

    how much longer for updates????

    04/06/2025 01:14

  • Elizabeth Beaton

    why is this story taking forever to update. I wish these apps wouldn’t post books until they are completely finished. it is not fun waiting.

    04/05/2025 12:08
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