A pack of their own Comments

Visitor
love the pace of the book
10/28/2025 04:32
Visitor
I’m loving this book so far
10/27/2025 02:24
Visitor
I have just started, have read about 10 chapters. it has gotten me hooked. although I am irritated with not being able to read continuously through
10/25/2025 23:23
Visitor
i am really enjoying it and its well written
10/24/2025 05:32
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love this book
10/24/2025 04:19
Visitor
I love this book. It keeps me interested and on the edge of my seat
10/23/2025 22:02
Visitor
love the book
10/20/2025 14:58Nikora Mckay
love this book
10/19/2025 05:36
Visitor
this book is really awesome there are so many amazing characters in this story that it keeps you wanting to keep reading
10/18/2025 14:30
Visitor
very good book can’t put it down. constantly keeping me on edge.
10/11/2025 07:55
Visitor
This is a very enjoyable story. I have it on several reading apps and have read it in each one using bonus points.
10/09/2025 04:34Anestacia Lyngh
I am in love with the main characters, and the plot! I am really excited to see what happens throw out the story, and how they each develop!!
09/28/2025 22:01Jeane Hanekom
I truly love this book...I just have one problem...... having the urge to slap someone when they are fictional.......is seriously a problem for me...... come on....
09/27/2025 20:54
Visitor
💓💓
09/27/2025 09:57
Visitor
very interesting different to other stories. it has a very unique time frame with twists and really nice scenes
09/23/2025 23:36
Visitor
A good story book. I have been enjoying reading this. and I could read over and over again.
09/23/2025 01:09
Visitor
A well written book. I have been immensely enjoying the plot. with the trist and turns it take all bringing the story forward. thank you
09/20/2025 10:48user2509049283
amazing book it’s one I could read several times over. I wish it had more chapters
09/18/2025 04:17
Cynthia
Some sentences in this chapter are cut off before the thought of the character is completed. Otherwise, I am loving the story.
09/16/2025 10:34
Visitor
loved this book!!
09/16/2025 08:09Lydia Katz
not sure if it’s the upload or not but missing some of the story. it crunches in on part of it and it loses what is being said. can’t follow very well because of it.
09/14/2025 18:07
Visitor
This is a very nice book.
09/12/2025 20:48
Visitor
great story
09/10/2025 00:43
Visitor
great story
09/06/2025 01:58
Visitor
I really enjoyed this book. I actually plan on reading it again
09/02/2025 11:35
Visitor
I’m really enjoying this book. it’s well written and I love the main character
08/26/2025 22:30Brynn Sapia
absolutely living it so far can’t put it down
08/23/2025 09:44
Visitor
Sounds like if Jessie’s mate is from Stone Claw she would fit in.
08/18/2025 17:02
Visitor
I like the story.
08/17/2025 13:47
Visitor
i loved the book. but you used a lot off time in the beginning to introduce everyone over and over agein.if its was the introduction to friends and family or ho was going against ho at the games. in the end it feeled like that ir was time to finish and get it done. That was a bit sad. But all in all was it an amazing book.
08/17/2025 10:38Kirren Raw
Only on chapter 10 but so far I'm loving. Though there are cut-offs in the chapters, it doesn't impact the flow of the story, treat it like minor cliffhangers and you'd still enjoy it
08/16/2025 12:32
Visitor
I am enjoying this book for the most part, but agree that some chapters are cut off, thoughts not completed, and they are shorter.
08/15/2025 10:40_02P1ck13z20_
Morning not Moring
08/12/2025 19:39
Visitor
I like the story development in this novel. Keshia is a character that most people can identify with. she part of a family don’t see her until it to late. I applaud her. great read
08/11/2025 07:00
Visitor
pretty interesting. however, it makes the main character seem strong and then weak.
08/10/2025 04:21
Visitor
liking this but tired of it getting cut off before the chapter ends and then get a bit unfocussed cuz of it leaving things out
08/09/2025 22:57Nandy smith
Wait, so she gets a sister stabbed almost to death and that’s it? crazy
08/08/2025 19:02
Visitor
really good book so far can’t wait to see how things progress
08/08/2025 05:35Hilary Menzies-Baldwin
repeat of info from Keska, please edit story
08/07/2025 16:40
Visitor
I'm enjoying this book
08/06/2025 13:31
Visitor
I’m enjoying the book
08/03/2025 19:39
Adrienne Passineau
I am loving this book. very exciting. I am about halfway I think and it’s great.
08/02/2025 15:53Savannah Henderson
Amazing book
07/29/2025 00:13Diann Klaren
still looking for next book
07/27/2025 14:59
Visitor
I'm really enjoying this book so far I just started it today
07/21/2025 16:19
Samantha Cook
I am liking this book a lot as it is only the first 10 chapters but it’s a bit different then a lot of other books in this genre so far
07/21/2025 15:00Francesca Delacruz
I am loving this book and unfortunately, I put it to audio, and I don’t know how to change the voice can somebody please tell me how to change the voice cause I would love to listen to this at work
07/20/2025 11:25Abigail Collis
love how keska puts people in their place lol
07/19/2025 15:27Rose Lyn
love
07/18/2025 20:30
Visitor
I am very much enjoying this book, wonderful storyline, great characters, and the plot is fascinating.
07/18/2025 17:52
Visitor
vey nice story. well written.
07/17/2025 22:40
Visitor
loving this book so far
07/17/2025 15:25Crystal Hippe
I absolutely love this book some parts of it make you think. I wonder if this is happening in real life to some families.
07/17/2025 05:44
Visitor
loving the book so far
07/16/2025 18:26
Reader-445034
i really enjoy this book so far. I was having issues with the chapters not finishing but once I changed it to scroll it was showing the full chapters
07/15/2025 03:57
Visitor
good book
07/15/2025 03:55
Visitor
been looking forward to read this book a long time now
07/13/2025 22:57
Visitor
I can’t stop reading. the story has me on the edge of my seat.
07/09/2025 22:59
Visitor
so far I am enjoying this book. some vocabulary errors occur that cause me to have to reread some sections but the story line is good.
07/09/2025 22:06Sara Bennett
You have done an excellent job on your first novel. I have enjoyed this story and hope to read more from you. The more you write the better your grasp of vocabulary, sentence structure etc. will grow. All the best👍
07/08/2025 23:08
Visitor
you name whose thinking every 5 seconds. if she’s texting someone you can label but we don’t need the name in front of every paragraph. it’s unreadable as is unfortunately, but your story premise is good!
07/08/2025 09:11
Visitor
I love Keska and her group and can’t wait to see their pack formed
07/08/2025 04:21
Visitor
Oh my, I am so enjoying this story. It’s costing me a fortune.
07/06/2025 18:18
Visitor
i really enjoy the book, tank you.
07/06/2025 10:46Sophie Saunders
it’s a fantastic book and I love the story
07/03/2025 20:43
Visitor
fantastic book brilliant story
07/03/2025 14:56
Visitor
I really enjoy the book it was not what I had expected. They are a great group
07/03/2025 10:26
Visitor
The book is starting off with a interesting story line. Can’t wait to see the twist and turns.
07/02/2025 11:44
Visitor
overall so far this book is a good read. over describing certain things that aren’t needed, and the commentary needs split instead of all in one paragraph. Storyline is good.
07/02/2025 03:28
Visitor
so far this book is interesting. a little slow on the uptake but other wise a great read.
06/30/2025 05:19
Visitor
I love it so far! I can’t wait to see how it ends.
06/28/2025 15:43
Visitor
i love this book
06/27/2025 14:01
Visitor
i like this book
06/26/2025 07:35
Visitor
I love this book I hove how you can see how special she is and how she does everything to better herself
06/25/2025 20:13
Visitor
I really like this book it showed how family’s really tread there kids they all have favorite ones
06/25/2025 16:56
Visitor
Awesome book! I love how she grows grows into who she is meant to be and has the support of a mate a the family the deserves, not just her given family who failed her.
06/22/2025 06:25
Visitor
Absolutely great book. Would love to see more of this series.
06/22/2025 02:49Melissa Larkin
I loved this book, I loved how her siblings redeemed themselves, well almost all of them.
06/21/2025 10:10Emerald Ketterman
I loved this book
06/19/2025 16:25
Visitor
loving the book but some of the chapters need fixed
06/16/2025 16:43
Visitor
great book
06/15/2025 01:23Reader-719537
good book
06/15/2025 00:35
Visitor
good book
06/14/2025 20:15
Visitor
good book
06/14/2025 19:00frosty fangs
hooked on this book!
06/14/2025 12:34
Visitor
good book so far
06/13/2025 03:49
Visitor
The book is good so far
06/12/2025 19:12
Visitor
Though there are parts that are redundant, I’m looking forward to seeing how this book ends!
06/11/2025 16:00
Visitor
heelo j j
06/11/2025 14:09Reader-871371
Great book so far! Can’t wait to see what happens.
06/10/2025 17:01
Visitor
so far it is a good story though I am not understanding the layout of how the book is written. luckily that is all that I find that is difficult for me to understand. the story line is good and different then other stories that I have read on the different apps out there.
06/10/2025 03:28Jennifer Wright
good story so far looking forward to seeing how things turn out
06/09/2025 20:31
KNB
very good read so far. hopefully it explains some of the family dynamics. wish the chapters weren’t so much.
06/08/2025 14:36Pam Phelps
love this book so far, great story
06/06/2025 12:13
Visitor
is this book completed
05/26/2025 16:10
Visitor
love this book but why some lines are missing and incomplete at end and of every page? thanks !
05/24/2025 23:21MajorVongames
this was an amazing book It was my absolute favorite book, it had me completely immersed and wanting even more!! You have created a beautiful piece!! I will be looking forward to see what more you write and come up with!! You have made me a permanent fan!!!!
05/09/2025 22:56Reader-348489
please please do a Secound book to this I would love to read more about all the characters from this one. by far one of my top favourites to read an would some more from you.
05/08/2025 01:53Diann Klaren
please think about writing a book two
05/06/2025 13:06
Visitor
when does the book update?
05/03/2025 05:18