The Wrong Alpha - A Twist of Fate? Comments

  • Visitor

    it's good đź‘Ť

    09/17/2025 21:06

  • Visitor

    I really enjoy this book! I have to agree with others. She is a beta female, why doesn’t she share what she has been going through. I know she thinks it’s the future Luna and she will have to live with her. However she still needs to share at least with her parents.

    09/17/2025 13:32

  • Farrah Doble

    incredible story so far. heartbreaking start though. I hope she comes through this better, stronger and with more love than she could imagin

    09/14/2025 06:44

  • Visitor

    Great readig

    09/13/2025 21:10

  • Visitor

    So far, it’s pretty good

    09/01/2025 17:23

  • Visitor

    so far it’s pretty good. but I hate Anya and she should be telling people

    08/29/2025 19:52

  • Reader-811928

    I think it would help if the author went back and put whose POV at the top of each chapter. you think you’re reading from one person and after a lil reading figure out it’s not that person but someone else entirely.

    08/29/2025 10:31

  • Klara B. Fahnel

    chapter 217: just a suggestion author…it’s hard to know whose Point of View it’s from. maybe put character name at the top of each chapter? it takes a page or sometimes half the chapter to know who is telling the story.

    08/28/2025 21:27

  • Visitor

    FL is kinda annoying and chapters are short but I like the story

    08/27/2025 14:50

  • Klara B. Fahnel

    I’m not sure what a “vest top” is? is it like in the 80s, a tshirt with half a vest down on the front? or is it literally a vest?

    08/27/2025 08:53

  • Visitor

    it is driving me crazy that she doesn’t tell anyone about what Anya is doing!! her father is beta he should be able to help!!

    08/25/2025 17:58

  • Klara B. Fahnel

    may sound like a dumb question but are “grips” barettes?

    08/25/2025 14:13

  • Visitor

    why doesn’t she tell anyone what is going on with Anya and start recording the interactions and show the messages. so far the FL is not very smart, strong, or impressive

    08/24/2025 21:34

  • Visitor

    I’m not very far along but the story is so sad for her. and the Alpha forcing her to appear at the party to praise the gamma’s daughter who has done nothing but disrespect a beta’s daughter. she is not Luna yet.

    08/22/2025 19:16

  • Visitor

    so heartbreaking for her… the alpha is such a jerk making her go to the party..

    08/22/2025 05:24

  • Visitor

    I’m going to guess Knox and lilah don’t recognize they’re mates because of the wolfbane.. her wolf hasn’t been around since the hospital..

    08/21/2025 21:43

  • Visitor

    So far the story is riveting the characters are well described in the feelings that are portrayed are very true to life

    08/19/2025 11:22

  • Visitor

    I love this story, so far ver heartbreaking for Del . can’t wait till she meets her mate and puts Anya in her place.

    08/17/2025 15:14

  • Reader-462055

    are they mated ? del and Knox??

    07/23/2025 17:17

  • Reader-650950

    loved the book!! well written and kept me reading. I totally want to know the rest of the story for Jake, Manuel and Gabe. I definitely feel a story with Jake.

    09/17/2024 01:51

  • winterphoenix

    if I were here id prolly just tell them it was anya and leave. it’s not even worth it to stay in a pack like that

    04/20/2024 02:57

  • winterphoenix

    such a psycho.

    04/20/2024 02:08

  • Nadine Oliver

    loved it great book 🎊🎊

    09/12/2023 13:27

  • deb

    Will there be updates soon? Goid book!

    09/11/2023 22:16

  • deb

    Can you do another chapter please! Dis they find out why Logan was they he was? What happened to her friend Dey, Stu and the boys? And did Anya’s friends get in trouble too?

    09/06/2023 00:52