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Diann Klaren
this is a reindent read
05/26/2025 17:09
can the apostrophe be removed from the title?? it's incorrect....
09/05/2023 06:09John Robinson
#bookmegasale I like this story very much. The writing style of the author makes it very easy to read and the beginning isn't too drawn out. It says it's complete so no waiting for updates which I like, will definitely be reading more.
09/05/2023 04:23Marie Gilkey
decent book starting here. keep up with new chapters.
09/05/2023 04:03Helen DeVore-Hill
#bookmegasale This is the kind of book that I like to read. Just from reading the introduction you can tell that it is going to be an interesting book. Two alphas purchasing a single "slave" that is their mate. You can tell that there is going to be trouble somewhere along the way.
09/05/2023 04:01Lile Goderdzishvili
characters are dumb af and everything is too predictable come on. writing isn't even edited go look for better stories to read
09/05/2023 03:22Diane Talbot
rather juvenile so far. Pair of hypocrites for Alphas, poorly edited.
09/05/2023 01:25karen durfee
when is there going to be more chapters
09/05/2023 01:10Ade Nanette
Thé characters are shallow, they seem dumb. The writing is not edited, go look for better stories…
09/05/2023 01:02yes sir
s7e2 I read this book long time ago I like it but the dramatic change is to much
09/05/2023 00:59Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
s7e2 Sounds a bit too juvenile for me. This story is not as badly written as other stories, but would greatly improve with good editing.
09/05/2023 00:13Reader-529162
#s7e2# New to this book but based on reading the first chapter, seems like an easily digestible book.
09/05/2023 00:05Linda Strandquist
#s7e2 love the concept. too bad that she was just about to escape. but hope the twins pull it together and support her as she's needs to be.
09/05/2023 00:04Rachel Moore
while the writing isn’t complete the story line is good. however, the inconsistency that happens a lot does need help. I still want to know what the writer envisions with plot maybe she can clarify some of these faults. this book has potential.
09/05/2023 00:02Carol Baker
Ya know... teenagers use contractions usually. i.e., less "I am" and more "I'm."
09/04/2023 23:55Jody Purple
s7e2 I have been enjoying this story, I agree that the ideas are there and could you a little polishing I have looked forward to continuing each chapter and the character development
09/04/2023 23:37
Bethany Seiley
Childish. Incomplete ideas and facts that don’t match.
09/04/2023 23:20Princess Arielle
I can't read past chapter 8 the skipping around, incomplete sentences... it's more like you gave us the main idea of a book and we should plug in the main pieces.
09/04/2023 22:51
Mirela
#s7e2 I really like the love story between the human girl and the alpha twins. Hope they will pass all the chalenges in their life.
09/04/2023 22:38Phoenix14
This story is to fast and not well thought out.
09/04/2023 22:32
Alex
very immature fast paced written story, lost interest after few chapters
09/04/2023 22:27Becky Grymes
please up date your other book too please!!! love both of them.
09/04/2023 22:20chapter 84 2-20-23
09/04/2023 22:18Thetruealphaof allteenwolfsandwolfbloods
keep it up
09/04/2023 22:17why is it every time one of these council member come Ariel doesn’t read their minds… it’s just odd that she has this “gift” that she blocks out and never ever uses
09/04/2023 22:13
Robyn Valdez
Already, I won't read it because the boys names rhyme. Haven't even started it.
09/04/2023 22:11agnes
wow. sweet!
09/04/2023 20:34does this author update regularly
09/04/2023 20:12when is more of this story coming enjoying it so far
09/04/2023 20:07Robin
Hold up. So they tell him to teach her a lesson and then punish him for doing their bidding? Nope 👎🏻
09/04/2023 18:35
