The Billionaires Desires Comments

Christina Koltoniak

you are a good writer. love the story line so far. only thing I noticed is that you keep going back and forth between Nathan and Travis being cousins and brothers; also the names you have called Hillary Bethany and you have called Nathan Damien and something else. other than that I think you are doing a great job!! keep writing your story, I know it can get hard. but please keep up the good work.