Fates Hands Comments

  • Leah Minnucci

    do not start reading if you have plans or need to clean or have a job you need to get to. I am so addicted I can’t put it down. I made my husband order take out because I refused to stop reading to cook. This book is amazing!!!!!! I love it!!!!!! thank you for this amazing story.

    09/04/2023 12:17
  • K A Mears-Kolesnikoff Carter

    Artemis and Apollo?? Really? The twin Greek deities; Apollo the Sun god and Artemis the moon goddess, goddess of the hunt, aka Diana 😁😄😃

    09/04/2023 12:17
  • TGI GISH

    be easy using the name Winchester in vain...

    09/04/2023 12:16
  • Elissa J Martinez

    Hi, Lori!...🙋🏻‍♀️. In what book does Jack, 'The Teddy Bear ', find his mate? I read this book first and now I am reading The Elixir, which talks about her. Is that book on here?...🤔

    09/04/2023 12:16
  • Cath Lufc Hopkins

    great read looking forward to book three

    09/04/2023 12:16
  • Louise Shaw

    am loving the story so far. cant put it down x

    09/04/2023 12:16
  • Chyril Hollins

    getting good

    09/04/2023 12:15
  • Nicole Anne Cracknell

    loving this so far !

    09/04/2023 12:15
  • Charleen Jones

    fantastic story. totally enjoyed it. and rather than letting it go on forever you ended it and started a new book, which I can't wait to read. I'm so looking forward to it. thank you so very much.

    09/04/2023 12:13
  • Reader-583350

    enjoying the story

    09/04/2023 12:12
  • Reader-535539

    starting out great

    09/04/2023 12:12
  • Phenon Tingle

    I love the trigger warnings thanks

    09/04/2023 12:11
  • Angelica Nicole Johnson

    What a Fruit loop!! Her stepfather has only ever went after humans. Not another bear let alone a clan of them. He really is stupid as he is sadistic.

    09/04/2023 12:10
  • Patricia Phillips

    I am loving this story very much

    09/04/2023 12:10
  • stanchy

    Is this a single story book?

    09/04/2023 12:09
  • Ashtynne Davis

    I really like Duncan!

    09/04/2023 12:07
  • Dawn Williams

    An absolutely awesome read.

    09/04/2023 12:07
  • Kat Ellen

    oh wow!!

    09/04/2023 12:07
  • Ana Afton

    very good so far

    09/04/2023 12:06
  • Julia Woolard

    how come I can’t find the 2nd book on here? and there’s a 3rd? yay! I’m so excited!! some one tell me where I can read the other books please!!!

    09/04/2023 12:05
  • Lisa Ramsey

    it won't let me continue after it shows to scroll and tap here?? it's stupid that I can't get past that

    09/04/2023 12:03
  • Patryce Stillettos Critz

    this book was amazing please tell me there will be more!

    09/04/2023 12:03
  • Mel Smith

    ❤️

    09/04/2023 12:03
  • Libby Greenham

    what talent!!

    09/04/2023 12:02
  • Amanda Kotab

    loved all the books, looking forward to seeing what the author has in store for the future characters. I do which that the stories were a bit longer chapter wise (love it so much I didn’t want it to end)

    09/04/2023 12:02
  • I love that he is not a black wolf - as per the usual Alpha!!

    09/04/2023 12:01
  • Kathy Bailey

    great book so far

    09/04/2023 12:00
  • Lisa Dunagan

    this was amazing book and I hope there will be more like them

    09/04/2023 11:59
  • chad anderson

    books are fated hands, hidden, elixir

    09/04/2023 11:59
  • chad anderson

    this needs to actually come out in book form so I can own it

    09/04/2023 11:58
  • Angie G. de Muñoz

    STALKER! How romantic tho. 😆 😺 💘 ❤ 💋

    09/04/2023 11:58
  • omggg I’m dying 🤣🤣🤣

    09/04/2023 11:56
  • Linda Croft

    what is book 2?

    09/04/2023 11:55
  • BookDragon

    So happy for them!!

    09/04/2023 11:55
  • Crystal McNeil Nelson

    who do you complain to when your double billed and it won’t unlock?

    09/04/2023 11:55
  • Jenniffer Martin

    it says this book is complete but it looks like it is multiple books. is the full story finished? or just the first two books?

    09/04/2023 11:55
  • Freda Truitt

    It is very good. It is keeping me glued to this book.

    09/04/2023 11:55
  • Kitty Lindberg

    I need this in audiobook so I can clean house and know what happens.

    09/04/2023 11:55
  • Patryce Stillettos Critz

    this book is amazing! I can’t put it down.

    09/04/2023 11:54
  • Lisa Clarke

    I liked that you put the series in one.

    09/04/2023 11:53
  • is her name Adira or Adair??? it keeps changing.

    09/04/2023 11:52
  • ramona hall

    loved this book

    09/04/2023 11:52
  • ashlei schwendinger

    love the story. can't wait to finish reading

    09/04/2023 11:52
  • refreshing Alpha 💜 i love him already

    09/04/2023 11:51
  • Marshalee Hinds

    i really love this book

    09/04/2023 11:49
  • Samantha Davidson

    what happen to Anna & Auston, and how did Salena act when she learned who her true mate really was?

    09/04/2023 11:49
  • Ms. Stephie Davis

    is there anyway I can buy the entire book and skip the scrolling issue!!! I’m invested and been thinking about this book all day.

    09/04/2023 11:48
  • bernice ajayi

    interesting

    09/04/2023 11:48
  • Tonia Grundhauser

    Lori, do you have any other books? I love your stories. I would like to but the whole book at one time. great books. thank you for an awesome read

    09/04/2023 11:46
  • Supreme Goddess

    omg little kids smfh

    09/04/2023 11:46
  • Marie L Dank

    i am loving your books I can’t put them down. I look forward to reading them.

    09/04/2023 11:46
  • Reader-885727

    love!!!

    09/04/2023 11:45
  • ChairtyJune

    omg this made me cry…. the poor king!!! my heart breaks for him!

    09/04/2023 11:44
  • Stacey Musterman

    yeah no I don’t like the fact lily and the king being mates

    09/04/2023 11:43
  • Reader-191809

    how do you buy the whole book? instead of buying by chapter?

    09/04/2023 11:43
  • Pauline Hicks Bourke

    I have loved the 3 books thankyou so much cannot wait for the next books from you 💕

    09/04/2023 11:42
  • Elexis Craig

    is Jack's name inspired from Titanic? lol because it just dawned on me that that was literally his name 😂😂

    09/04/2023 11:41
  • Rayia Lorraine

    this is getting good

    09/04/2023 11:41
  • Sabrina Loray

    hi Lori . I lov this book but can’t find the rest of it . is there a book 2

    09/04/2023 11:40
  • Donna Iceton

    I’m loving this book

    09/04/2023 11:40
  • Basma Shamas

    i loved reading this book. i still have around 13 chapters to finish the third book. i see you have a part 2 of 2. are you going to be updating this series with part 2 and when would be expect the update?

    09/04/2023 11:40
  • Jacqueline Johnson

    love the book

    09/04/2023 11:39
  • Reader-165424

    wish it was like a you get a key every hour to unlock the next chapter can’t wait I need to skip to chapter 12 I’ve red them all on another site don’t know what it was called but now I’m stuck at chapter 6 😭

    09/04/2023 11:39
  • Reader-846239

    does anybody know what are the other two titles names. I would like to read them all from the first one to the last one

    09/04/2023 11:38
  • Jenna Smith

    only comment I have about this chapter is explain what they look like in wolf form. it got a bit lost in transition here

    09/04/2023 11:38
  • Kassiopia Clark

    love this story so far!

    09/04/2023 11:38
  • Laura Walters

    I love how this book is turning out. I can't wait to finish reading it to see if she stays with them!

    09/04/2023 11:37
  • Eve Egüez

    Are you going to add another story?

    09/04/2023 11:36
  • jade vargas

    love it keep writing ✍ books like this

    09/04/2023 11:36
  • Charlie Biggs

    can some one tell me what the first book is

    09/04/2023 11:34
  • Chantal White

    wow these people are vile

    09/04/2023 11:34
  • Love Kayy

    there are three books if you are reading spare story that is book one if you are reading jacks story that is book two and I believe it’s acher story that is book 3

    09/04/2023 11:33
  • Fallon Clouatre

    Fate can fickle

    09/04/2023 11:33
  • Reader-887459

    I really enjoyed this story/adventure definitely going to follow the author.

    09/04/2023 11:31
  • Reader-569284

    good

    09/04/2023 11:31
  • Giselle Simone

    Is this story complete?

    09/04/2023 11:31
  • Jen Gaudiello

    😝more description of yummy duncan

    09/04/2023 11:30
  • Reader-703008

    great story. hooked.

    09/04/2023 11:29
  • Susan Smith-Elmore Kinder

    great story you do a wonderful job writing

    09/04/2023 11:29
  • Christina Bones

    this book has got me on my toes

    09/04/2023 11:29
  • Lorinda Cartwright

    I loved that you tied it all together and it was great! but I did want to know about Serena torture in hell.

    09/04/2023 11:27
  • Hayley Chiblow

    what happened with Alpha assholes wolf and the warning from the moon goddess? surely the full moon has happened, what was the consequence !?!?!

    09/04/2023 11:27
  • Ariel Kayea

    what is the name of the second and third book?

    09/04/2023 11:25
  • Reader-086139

    wish chapters longer

    09/04/2023 11:25
  • Reader-136721

    new to this

    09/04/2023 11:25
  • Reader-735271

    Too many run on sentences. sometimes idk who’s talking or what’s happening

    09/04/2023 11:24
  • Elisa Reid

    when is the next chapters being released?

    09/04/2023 11:23
  • Nicole Loray

    love both book 1 & 2. I do have one note about book 2 to consider. In the beginning Jack talks about the 3 boys that he seems to have adopted, but then after he meets Nora he never speaks about them again.

    09/04/2023 11:23
  • kaykay garcia

    amazing!!!!!!

    09/04/2023 11:22
  • Vickie c

    when is the next update please

    09/04/2023 11:21
  • Deanna

    I really loved the stories. I personally much preferred the first books because you wrote them from the point of view of the characters. I tend to end up loving those types of books. when you changed to the point of view of a narrator I didn’t enjoy the story as much. Possibly because I didn’t feel as connected to the story with that style. I still think you have done an awesome job though and I do hope you continue to write 💜 Thanks for all your hard work.

    09/04/2023 11:21
  • Brittany Nicol Trippler

    so this is for everyone Including the author. she posts up to 3 chapters daily but let's all remember that she does have a life to live it's amazing so many people love the book but let's remember that even authors need time to think about the new chapters and to relax to be able too for us your doing great Lori can't wait for the new chapter

    09/04/2023 11:21
  • Mary T Caston

    this is a fantastic book

    09/04/2023 11:21
  • Cheryl Motter

    no update yesterday?? hope all is well.

    09/04/2023 11:20
  • Kaitlyn Short

    🥲

    09/04/2023 11:20
  • 🤣🤣take that Alpha Asshole

    09/04/2023 11:19
  • faithjenkins

    I’m still in book one. Are all three about Adria and Duncan?

    09/04/2023 11:19
  • Daniel Jimenez

    awe no update yet?

    09/04/2023 11:18
  • Benaifer Bagli

    my points some times don't add ...

    09/04/2023 11:18
  • Te Koingo Acton

    when does this update??

    09/04/2023 11:18