Werewolf's Heartsong Comments
Samantha Hauschildt
I'd love to have this as a physical book.
05/23/2024 19:46Lana Gray
I have mixed feelings about this new version. I think there are too many details and it drags too much. Not sure I like the lupine (wolf) looks as their normal forms. The heights of everyone is nuts- seems like they are all 7’8 except Andrew, who is 8’10? Odd. This makes me think of cartoon characters and it’s hard to feel the characters are attractive or invision them the way we could in the first draft. I liked the original draft and how Alora found some things out and discovered herself. I understand cleaning up the story in some ways but at this point it’s completely changing and isn’t the same at all. It’s like watching a movie based on a novel and noticing nothing is the same… naturally can’t help but compare things. The writer obviously has an amazing imagination and can think of every single detail of every character. I love that about the writing. I just wished we could keep the authenticity of the first version. Don’t stray so much from the original. It is amazing.
05/23/2024 16:59
Visitor
why is the rewards page down for so long?
05/18/2024 10:53Deborah Baker
I love this book she is doing a great job, will read more of her stories if there are more
05/15/2024 01:03Sheri Betts
I prefer the draft version werewolf’s heartsong, this revamped version wastes too many paragraphs on describing events, people, etc. I’ve read the draft twice, I’ve tried to read revamped version twice and still can’t get into it like the draft, maybe merging the two? Alora was so much stronger in the draft from the beginning, the revamped just feels watered down.
05/07/2024 06:57Elaine Murphy-Vernon
waste of a payment for a chapter. may delete. was expecting more.
05/04/2024 00:27
Reader-199728
I like the draft better, to be honest. being able to fill in some of the character details in my own head allows me to be more invested in the story. I hope there will be more storyline updates soon.
05/01/2024 21:47Donna Brown
Why must every person be described with 3 or 4 paragraphs? So unnecessary. and makes the book way longer than it needs to be. Otherwise, I love this book.
04/17/2024 17:47Visitor
very well written. Thank you for that
03/09/2024 23:15
Amanda L B
#HerPower Alora is a very strong women. She went from feeling an bein like a chewed gum on the bottom of her so called parents an that vile sister Sarah’s shoes to being the Alpha of all Alphas. She took control of her life in the best ways possible. She has so many ppl who love her and that back each play she makes. She has the life long love she so deserves she’s finally met her true father the Vampire King she went from the lowest of lows and she rose to the top with Grace. Alora is everything powerful and she as a character can teach us something I believe
03/08/2024 19:12Reader-275895
unfortunately I also found it under FicWorld as Werewolf Heartsong
03/02/2024 21:05Reader-275895
I also reported it to them.
03/02/2024 19:52Reader-275895
I wanted you to know that your story was stolen from you and I found it today on Mo books but titled as Alpha Mate Unleashed Fury
03/02/2024 19:49Ashley
I started reading this book and I am in love with it. The storyline is amazing and it is very well written. I love the characters.
02/29/2024 04:15eryck hanson
I'm looking forward to seeing how this book goes. I like strong female leads. so far this is a pretty good book.
02/28/2024 02:08
Katie Silva
loved this book so much. kept me on my toes throughout. though it is quite long it stays interesting and captivating.
02/23/2024 18:40Visitor
I really enjoy reading this book 👍👍👍
02/23/2024 16:55Visitor
interesting book that can reveal how someone mistreated can act like nothing happened to them when other people are around. however, I’m pleased to see that the truth always shines and that she ends up as someone well surrounded. the only thing bothering me though is how someone with so much power such as the alpha would allow her to stay for so long in a family that is mistreating her
02/22/2024 13:16Reader-276046
i started with the book and am in the school with Sarah and the parents. sorry but for me are there some logical issues like why is alpha allowing child abuse over years and not just exiling or killing the parents and Sarah? what for a weak alpha and luna they are not even able to protect the pack pups properly??? sorry, i really like Alora but i am not sure if i wanna invest more points in a story with such issues…
02/19/2024 21:29Kirstie Glasow
I absolutely love this book. I’ve read the original book, the second book called: Witch’s Heartsong and the remastered version of the first book called: The Song in the Alpha’s Heart. Now I’m just waiting for the author to write more chapters and bring out more books that are centred around Alora and Damien
02/19/2024 18:00Rinney Frye
fantastic story wish it was a movie!!!
02/11/2024 15:58Visitor
why won’t these damn chapters open
02/10/2024 19:55Miranda Gallman
I swear this book would make a great movie if it’s not ruined in the filming!
02/04/2024 13:14Reader-199728
this book is a draft, I wish I had known that at the beginning, as reading the revised version would have been my preference.
01/23/2024 20:17Reader-543929
can not find dragon’s heartsong
01/23/2024 01:28Lucy McDowell
Didn’t care for the ending as it wasn’t One. Leaves you hanging is there a sequel?
01/22/2024 01:54
willkay0424
love the book & can’t wait for the Finish rewrite when do you think that will be I have read everything going crazy for the next pages
01/21/2024 04:43Visitor
what is the name of the author?
01/19/2024 20:15Rinney Frye
love this book! so well written!!
01/17/2024 14:59
Visitor
I loved the story, Best book I have read on line,and I have read 10 books already this year. When will you be writing ✍️ more on the second book, you have me hook, line and sinker. You are a very good writer, I would like to read more of your stuff.
01/17/2024 12:27
saturnalia
how can i find this as book
01/17/2024 10:53Visitor
I'm really enjoying this book so far. Looking forward to the rest.
01/16/2024 23:11Visitor
what's the name of the book after this?
01/16/2024 09:37Visitor
very good book so far
01/16/2024 01:38Sara Wilson-Dean
these prices are freaking outrageous
01/13/2024 17:15Julie Brown
all I can say is Damn! it's about time you found each other girl! come on Damien go get your mate, don't keep her waiting any longer than you already have!!!!
01/13/2024 15:49Visitor
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01/11/2024 10:21Kim Petith
I love this book, but does anyone know what's happened to the author .. there's been no updates for months and the story is just hanging there in limbo .. I will never again start to read a story that's not complete .. I hate not having the ending 🤪
01/10/2024 08:26Carmen Koralewski
If only there were other ways to describe a voice other than husky. I found this story to be a bit too repetitive and descriptions of things took up too much of the story.
01/09/2024 08:18Visitor
such a great book.
01/07/2024 14:17Kate Vanhook
I love this book so much. I also love your author notes. they make me laugh because it is so relatable. my animals would mess things up or distract me and I'm constantly adulting
01/07/2024 03:04Visitor
This book is phenomenal. Ethereal. Can't put it down
01/07/2024 02:01Visitor
So far, so good.
01/07/2024 01:05Jennifer Kaltz
so than since Alora's the oldest daughter of the king of vampires. she should be on the council too
01/06/2024 21:08Visitor
It's a great book so far I am enjoying very much thank you.
01/06/2024 18:13Visitor
It's sad that they have to endure so much pain when they're little. For appearance to be that way, so cruelty to children. Treating one different than the other is so wrong. But she has her day. And they will regret it. Especially her sister and are so called friends
01/06/2024 17:25Claire Vowles
I,m enjoying this so far
01/06/2024 09:59Ashley Abner
love this so far
01/06/2024 02:54Visitor
can't wait for her family to be banded or something
01/05/2024 11:48Visitor
cotton candy, we call fairy floss in Australia 🇦🇺
01/05/2024 01:18Visitor
I love the fact that I already knew the Alpha's first son would be in live with Alora. Thank you Matt😂
01/04/2024 23:35Visitor
love it
01/04/2024 13:29Mary Beckman
love the book so far
01/04/2024 09:20Vanessa Arcita
good story
01/04/2024 05:44Visitor
Great story so far. Now if I could just get the pages to come up, it would be nice.
01/03/2024 04:12Visitor
it's an amazing story so far, but it's a shame that we have to unlock chapters so far in just when we get hooked the story
01/03/2024 01:51Visitor
good book thank you
01/03/2024 00:17Visitor
You are an incredible writer, I have not been on a journey of emotion and fascination in a long time. Thank you so much for sharing your world!
01/02/2024 18:13Visitor
I am really enjoying this story it is very good
01/02/2024 15:39Cheryl Metzener
need rest of story!
01/02/2024 14:08Sarah Loach
beautifully written amazing story
01/01/2024 22:52Visitor
a very good story
01/01/2024 03:48Nadya Garay-Thompson
Beautiful love stories but also a reminder that family is not always blood related. Those who love us, they give us wings to accomplish our dearest dreams. Also, being different is not equivalent of being bad or defective or unworthy. We must embrace that which makes us different for others to embrace those differencesas well.
12/31/2023 06:49Visitor
this story is powerful!!!
12/31/2023 02:05Cam Wa
Riveting, can't stop reading! Heartsong, love rhe Name change and knowledge of family lineage. I want all the good guys to be safe and win.
12/30/2023 01:19Visitor
would love to know if the author intends to finish this story or not
12/27/2023 23:51Visitor
I felt lost with the style changes I like the other way.
12/27/2023 16:20Visitor
I hate how the second part of this book is written? why rewrite the book?
12/23/2023 01:11Visitor
when will the book be done for good?
12/23/2023 00:59Visitor
The hits just keep coming and getting juicier by the minute
12/22/2023 19:57Visitor
I’m confused is this the official writing for this story? I’ve been reading Heartsong with a glowing purple wolf on the cover 🤔
12/22/2023 00:03Visitor
I love that Aurora is standing up for herself! this is getting really interesting !
12/14/2023 19:11TheBlackSafire
is this book going to be updated?
12/13/2023 06:26Brenda Jannenga
Love this book
12/12/2023 08:01Visitor
I’m eager to find out what’s next!
12/12/2023 06:10Tracey Wolfendale
no matter how many times I read this series I always laugh at the same points especially the Halloween prank
12/07/2023 12:36Tracey Wolfendale
I’m waiting for updates love this series, I’ve read 1st version and what there is of 2nd version, I’ve read The song in the Alphas heart as well as witches heartsong, sat here hoping updates come soon
12/07/2023 12:34jayymiimii
anybody else laughed when Bella said she was mutant?? no?? just me?? alright then cool 😂
12/06/2023 22:03Visitor
waiting for updates on the second book absolutely love this book please update soon
12/06/2023 03:01TheBlackSafire
when is the next update its been stuck on chapter 82 of the second half?
12/05/2023 00:39Ditzydondoe
I have read this book b4. Actually I think it's my 3rd or 4th time. It flows very well. Not alot of cracks or bumpy feeling with it. Definitely there is decent Segway to the plot points. You don't have channel surfing to fine whether (DID THEY......HUG, KISS,SLAPS?,SEX,&/OR BFF!!!!!) God job Author! Thank-you for letting me have an adventure. Ditzydondoe.
12/04/2023 14:07Mary Ross
I'm having a hard time putting this story down it's that good
12/04/2023 05:20Reader-405703
this book is ok
12/03/2023 10:00Mary Ross
I am really loving this story I'm glad that she has people looking out for her. not everyone is that lucky
12/03/2023 00:30Visitor
waiting for more
12/02/2023 03:32Jen Murphy
I love this story. having a hard time putting it down to go to sleep. love that she living her life to her full potential which brings the downfall to her abusive family.
12/01/2023 05:14Visitor
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11/29/2023 12:14Donna Beth Feagins
I love her voicing! Author great story!
11/27/2023 02:58Visitor
I am sad for what has happened to her but I love how much love she is getting now and that she has found her true mate!
11/25/2023 17:34AVA
I was hoping kass was mated to both Kian and Galen. booo
11/24/2023 16:25Visitor
nice
11/23/2023 07:56Visitor
awesome story!
11/21/2023 18:17Visitor
just lovet it
11/20/2023 23:54Visitor
#HalloweenVibe
11/20/2023 05:32Reader-416051
the sad part is there are people who go through this every single day
11/19/2023 05:19Ras Panther
will Matt get a second chance?
11/18/2023 00:56Reader-516877
great book so far, but the chapters are not worth the funds
11/16/2023 21:43
Ghostface
The whole blight and wretch name calling in almost each chapter so far (ik im not that far along) is really annoying. like we get it they hate her to doom and beyond. otherwise love the story so far! I hope she kills her family at some point or they deal w imprisonment
11/16/2023 02:35Visitor
nice!
11/16/2023 00:02Visitor
good read
11/15/2023 20:51
