My Brother's Bitch Comments

Diann Klaren

I really liked this book it worth a read

Visitor

loved the book. thanks for sharing!

Hilde Govaers

orgasms, not organisms 😉

Reader-579770

this is hott! 🔥🤤

Kristina

will we get more to the ending? I feel like we were left with a cliffhanger 😂

Sierra Kinney

I gotta say, after all the waiting and buildup, I'm pretty disappointed that we skipped over their first time. The book is tagged erotica... pretty vanilla if you ask me.

Reisha Campbell

OMG well I did not seeing that coming what a twist

Reisha Campbell

ok this is a great start starting to get hot

Ana Rivera

This book 📖 is interesting 🤔 👌 😳 👀

Reisha Campbell

this book is giving me chills down my spine how sexy

Reisha Campbell

OHHH the plot thickens

Reisha Campbell

ohh I do not think that is a good idea

Reisha Campbell

hey thT is not nice not nice at all

Sara Arfaei

Payton-AS I am not really into this type of story, and I also don’t like the name. I don’t mind reading hot romance and sexy scenes through the stories, but when the whole story plot turns around sex and dirty talk, then I wouldn’t like to read it.

Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

Payton-AS I tried really hard to like this story, but it is truly not for me. I had to shake myself awake several times ro read through a chapter. After a few chapters I just had to give up.

Nims karunarathne

Payton-AS this sounds incest and forbidden. but I can see how nicely it’s written and how perfectly the characters are developed. I think I’m gonna add story and give it a go. hopefully this will have an unexpected twist and ends in a good way.

Reader-231656

Payton-AS i don’t think i was prepared for that one for sure. It feels good and the erotic side of the book is definitely top notch. i need more books like that to get its own movie or series as it’s soooo addictive.

Reisha Campbell

I like it so far so good

Irma Beck

Payton-AS What an interesting story line so far. loving the characters and looking forward to see how they unfold as well as the story line. loving how Jake introduced himself to Payton it was definitely a different idea and absolutely loved it. makes me wonder how their relationship is going to pan out definitely adding this my library. can't wait to read further.

Brenda Kay

Payton-AS what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.

AngelaCCoelho

Payton-AS. But what an introduction is this OMG... with that alone you can see that the book must be very good, engaging and captivating. I haven't read anything by this author yet, but I can't wait to read this book. 🤩

TinyReader

Payton-AS Ignore the title, they are NOT related. The set up for the book does not even begin to describe the spice. Very mature content when it gets to it. And I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

icuovrthere

Payton-AS the summary didn't really capture my attention, but upon reading other reviews people said to read the first couple chapters - and they are right. The first chapter introduces the key characters but has an feeling of mystery and a little suspense. I look forward to reading more to see if the chapters continue the same feeling and buildup

Caroline Hubbard

Payton-AS Normally I don't read contemporary books book I find myself enjoying this story very much. Another to add to my reading list. Looking forward to reading the rest of the book

Leré Saunderson

Payton-AS Woah! Eroticism on steroids! I think we have all been at the place where we meet a guy and our best laid plans for our futures get placed aside to indulge in the affair. Who know, this could be love!

Terri Bonomelli

Payton-AS The characters in the book are well developed. I am really enjoying the chemistry between Payton and Jake and can't wait to see how it plays out. The hints of intrigue around Jake's mother's death add an interesting plot to the story.

Valkentina

Payton-AS The story is really keeping you reading and the characters are well written. Roland depicts the classic shady ass soon to be politician, but the hot point are the stepbrothers, somehow seems sick to think of something like that, but on the other hand I really wanna know what they will do, and I hope Jake will protect Payton and Laura from Roland.

Vicki usher

Payton-AS I already added this book to my library but am yet to read it. It looks like a very good read to me it's different and interesting, the introduction makes it intriguing its not a long introduction but it had me hooked. its definitely next on my list to read without a doubt.

aduke woolford

Payton-AS This book has me enthralled I read the introduction and added it to my library it seems interesting so far, I like the writer's style and the themes chosen looking forward to continuing with the book.

Tricia Freligh

Payton-AS So after reading a couple of chapters I am hooked. I am really liking the story. The intro wasn’t that catching but I am glad a gave it a chance. I have added it to the library.

Doobies

Payton-AS - Intro left me feeling rather “meh”, but the first couple chapters seem much better than I expected based on the synopsis. I guess I’ll need to read a bit more before I make up my mind on this story. x

Awurabena Afriyie Asare

Payton-AS I believe this story would be an interesting story because the intro gives an in depth information on what to expect. Relationship between family members can be something else. Like this one they are not related by blood but by marriage. Any sexual relationship between Payton and her step brother may be frowned upon including both parents.

JustBee

Payton-AS This book has a lot of potential to be phenomenal, the plot is there and the writer has something good going on with the profile of each character. The title, synopsis and cover of the book are the unfortunate elements of this book. I am also not a fan of Motorcycle Club books, I just don’t understand the concept of a Motorcycle Club. But this book is really interesting and would recommend it to anyone.

Ashley

Payton-AS The introduction did not really catch my attention however I started reading the first couple of chapters and I do not want to stop. It is a short story so that is a plus. I will continue to read this and see how everything turns out.

Traci Williams

Payton-AS Great start. The title is cringey, and I was fully prepared to be reading some raunchy story that bordered on incest. I’m pleasantly surprised that isn’t the case. I’m going to add this to my TBR list. The underlying story is really interesting, and I’m eager to see where it goes.

exty

Payton-AS this story has a good beginning when the female character wants to take a bold step but the introduction of the step brother makes it complicated.how I wish it was far distance cousin of her step father.but let me finish the book but I jump to conclusion.

Reader-981734

Payton-As: Another book to add to my reading list (which is growing fast). Only read the first few chapters, the story is entertaining so far. I like the writing and the story line. I already hate the step-father/father and feel bad for Payton’s mother….

Jacquelyn Leedy

Payton-AS I typically do not care for MC books. However, this one is good so far. I like the marine back story. I'm not a fan of the title. So far it's been mostly about Jake and his story. I'm curious when the author will begin to develop Payton more and the Payton/Jake relationship.

Fernanda Neto

Payton-AS Na minha lista de leitura. A introdução levou-me a ler os primeiros capítulos e gostei. Espero que a história não desenvolva para uma mistura de humilação/submissão mas sim para uma relação em que a atracção cresce para algo maior.

cutesnake

Payton-AS. Seems like it wouldn't be my choice of book to read as the genre doesn't match my taste. Looks like it's an easy to figure out story as well. So yup next story.

melalv28

Payton-AS Aside from a not so great title, the book is intriguing from the very beginning. The instant attraction of both characters is fire. The plot of the book flows and the clues for plot twists are what will keep you reading.

Sammy

Payton-AS I can't say no to a MC story and after reading a few chapters, I added straight to my library. Glad that the book is completed, however, I did come across inconsistencies with the timelines and hoping that the story gets proofread because it has great potential.

Bianca Bratu

Payton-AS I like this story even from the very first chapters. It seems to have a captivating plot so far, it got me hooked and I couldn’t stop reading. I added it to my libraru and I will surely finish it.

Payton-AS This was a great book! Well written and kept my interest throughout. Along with the romance and very hot steamy scenes there was danger and a twisty mystery that surprised me. I will definitely check out anything else written by this author... well done!

Kristen Lewis

Payton-AS The introduction just does not grab my attention. I can almost see the plot in my head, there is no pull, no mystery. Her step-brother moves in and they get together, there is no twist to intrigue you or distinguish this from any other forbidden love story.

Mirela

PaytonAS It seems to be a good story. I like the idea of a badboy in the story that fall inlove with the innocent girl, but I kind of dislike the fact they are stepbrother and stepsister. I know they are not blood related but it's kind of creepy.

Amal Samir

Payton-AS, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next. The story line seems interesting and fun to read. I would like to see how she will deal with him.

ATk

#winbonus

Paula Almeida

Payton-as. I have read a couple of books where the stepbrother or stepbrothers have been involved and I am super excited to read this book. I hope Payton and the stepbrother don’t have to jump over to many hurdles to be happy.

miss foodieeee😋😋😋

Payton-As this is something I would wanna read but just having the thought of step bro romance just gives me cringe. Not offending whosever likes to read them but this just ain't my type 😁😁 though would like to read other books of the writer with other contents 😊😊😅😅

Aisha Ali

Payton-AS I really love book bikers they are so possessive and obsessed with their lovers I hope this one is just the same as the few ones I've read will be reading it soon enough

Janaki Kollepalli

Payton-AS... the introduction is erotic but there is no mystery to attract you to say the story is unique or different... feels similar to incest or taboo relationships... but it really didn't feel exciting to grab my attention

Viking-Luna

Payton-AS Good first chapter and definitely has added mystery to it. Best get reading the second chapter and see what happened with Father and Son becoming estranged.

Helen M

Payton-AS I really like a good MC Romance book. The introduction has piqued my interest and has raised soooo many questions that I just need to find the answers to. I'm definitely adding to my library to read later. Payton-AS

Kobie Stroebel

Payton-AS love the first chapter

Alyssa

Payton-AS I really dislike it when titles of books are misleading. Her mom married his dad, that does not make them brother and sister. It’s painfully obvious from the first glance that Roland is an abusive, controlling jerk and her mom is thoroughly under his thumb. I’m just hoping he gets his comeuppance.

jules kc

Payton-AS I like the story idea and I would love to continue this book. The authors style is nice and I'm always here for a tabu-subject, so I like the stepsister-stepbrother thing as they're not blood related, it's absolutely okay :)

Alice Pinto

Payton-AS this genre of books isn’t normally the kind that I read. the synopsis isn’t very long, but it sets the mood of the story. I like the fact that there isn’t too much chapters.

Payton-AS. The introduction and the first couple of chapters had me hooked. I was a little skeptical at first with the title, but after I starting to read it, I could not stop.

Shzaqte

So far this is a good book, looking forward to the story. But have to ask, why in so many books is it said that "you have a new brother," or something along those lines. Imo they aren't siblings if they didn't grow up together or meet in adulthood. Don't ever force or have relationships expectations with people especially your kids

Efrat Katz

Payton-AS the intro had me interested and I am definitely saving this to my library to read later. I like the biker motif and I hope it is well written enough to not ruin the mood

Donna Pember

Payton-AS I love the first few chapters of this book. Great storyline and writing. I will definitely be reading the rest of this book. Can't wait to see where the story goes

Ledia Cela

Payton-AS I’m trying very hard to continued reading the story but I didn’t find myself on it… finally it’s not my type of book…

AmberLu

Payton-AS i really dont know if i like this one. i think its not for me

Karin Tuchman

Payton-AS the introduction is erotic but the lack of mystery to pull you in to the book to make is exotic to the reader ti make it impossible to pass By it . it just feels like another taboo book and that's a miss . hope the writer can see that and maybe take the book to the next level .I hope for the future that the book will get the spice it needs because it failed to grab my attention

KMKC11

Payton-AS I was a little iffy when I saw the title of this book but once I started reading, I couldn’t stop. Jake and Payton are so cute together and the secondary characters add so much to the story. I’m a little disappointed in the ending, I feel like some additional closure is needed for Jake and Payton (so, ahem sequel please!) but overall this is probably one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here.

Daisy Francisco

Payton-AS This is really a good book to read,it’s interesting and quite intriguing.I think I will add to my list,I love it

KKH

Payton-AS Great start. it really pulls you in. The father Roland is a real piece of work. I can already tell he had something to do with the mom’s death and I’m sure a lot of other underhanded things going on in that city. Plus the way he treats his son and his wife. Appalling!

Lisa Cuddeback

Payton-AS The start of the book makes you think it will be a slow read but as you get further in, you will be hooked. The book is one you will not want to put down. Hanging on the edge of your seat to see what unfolds.

Payton-AS I really don't like the title of this book but putting that aside I love contemporary story. So have started reading the beginning of this story and so far it's really well written and draws you in, looking forward to reading more.

Kitty-694016

Payton-AS. the title of this book leaves a lot to be desired. I am also not intrigued by the storyline. I like a good romance but this smacks of someone being taken advantage of. the first chapter has a great lead in for a person who enjoys this type of story. sadly this is way too close to home with the manipulations to be an enjoyable read for me

Joele G

Payton-AS This story is very intriguing; not my norm of books to read but the story plot has gotten my attention; the writing of the story and characters are very well develop. Enjoying it so far.

Lori Holden

Payton-AS. good intro, I have already added it. I am wondering why Payton has a bad feeling about Ronald. why didn't Ronald get along with his son and why be rude about how she dresses what is the mom's issue

Tonya S. Eaddy

Payton -AS. I was not going to read this story! But I am so glad that I did. It introduced me to a great author. After reading the first couple of chapters I was drawn in. I love the fact that there was follow through with the last chapter telling us what happened to Roland. I love a happily ever after with a realistic end. Payton and Jake seem like a couple I would love to hear about as they move on with life.

Kirsten Tooker

Payton-AS The introduction didn’t grab my attention but I still decided to read a couple chapters to give it fair chance. Unfortunately it still wasn’t grabbing me so I’m afraid this going to be a pass.

SpudFoxy22

Payton-AS definitely going to have to give this one a try like others have said the intro definitily got me interested 😍😍

Victoria Murray

Payton-AS I have gotten to the third chapter and it is interesting so far. It didn't take long for the author to introduce the mystery in. I can already that this is going to see that there will be some steamy scenes and added it to my library.

Caitlin Sullivan

Payton-AS ... so this book has caught my interest. I am a sucker for a good biker book, and though the step brother angle is a bit weird for me but I'll try it

SamVitto

partly cute .. but also creepy

Bonnie M

Are you still going to do a sequel

Megan Phillips

k8f6- do not like the title of the book, but so far the start of the book is good.

John Robinson

k8f6 Don't like the title but the beginning of the story is well written and makes me want to read more.

Gemma Butler

k8f6 Interesting book introduction, although I’m not a fan of the title. I’ve added it to my library. Any updates if there is going to be a sequel?

Terrin Garis

#k8f6# Interesting Story - I enjoyed the intrigue and taboo nature of the book. Interested in reading more!

Vicki usher

k8f6# I came across this book recently and it looks so good, I can't wait to start it. From the reviews I have seen looks like it will be a good one.

Trisha Sandhu

can’t wait to read it!!! love these types of books

k8f6 This whole challenge makes me add more books to my reading list, look forward to reading it. Does anybody know it it's finished? And if it has a happy ending? I'm a sucker for happy endings.

Stacey Stratton

k8f6 not sure about the title of the book, but the intro is super steamy! I’m definitely going to give it a try!

Emily

k8f6 absolutely loved the story. I didn’t think the title is fitting at all and I first hesitated to read it but the characters are lovely and worth the read

Lynda McCormick

Love this Story!!!♡♡

Jennifer Andrus

sequel????

Vicky Ilievska

Will there be a sequel?

Rosemary Mwikali

I love the book

astrea

SAUNTERING not santuring. Use spellcheck

Hi so does the story end at chapter 65? or is there going to be more to this story?

Theresa Robinson

love the story pls fix the timeliness tho.

How often are updates?

LBowers

cannot wait for the next updat

ish85

loving the book can't wait for more how fast do the the updates come

really enjoying this book. great work!