PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

I love the nose nudging...my fella and me do this 😍🥰💖

Michele Nettles

Please just keep writing!!!!! I really enjoy the book just hate that we wait so long for more.

I needed her to ask him what the hell his problem is?! Ain’t no way you about to keep using me to help you release and you shooting me looks of disgust 🤬🤬👊🏽🔪🔫🏹

write as much as you want! worth every penny!

I’m in love with this story! please continue ASAP. I wish you could update sooner.

I’m in love with this story! please continue ASAP. I wish you could update sooner.

Tabitha Vickers

well I'm desperate to see them have a baby & with this see the king of beasts calm some what but the comment about him becoming even more cruel towards the end of this book makes me feel quite ill. He may love her in his beast way but I feel so desperate for Thiea. Will her life just be filled with the emotional roller coaster that he is? Will she ever have the love, peace & respect she deserves? I'm very conflicted with this last chapter.

I’m sorry but no…Phobos knows he’s wrong he told Theia no other male should be in her room when she was a pup! But he can go to another female’s house andddd eat her food?! It’s not if you don’t like it I won’t do it. You shouldn’t be doing it!

I love how we can now comment on paragraphs and chapters now! Can’t wait for the next update 😊.

WatUpG

I'm loving this read killing me waiting on updates 💜🙏

I think its a unanimous answer you just post away we will keep reading! We don't care we ALL luvs this book that much!!!! PLEASE post more I am struggling I need more!! 😂🤦🏼‍♀️ I keep reading the last chapters over and over till the new ones come out!!!

I love this story! Please continue!

I love to reread chapters. love the book. thank you so much

Carol Dionne

How to tell a good book? I haven’t inquired about an update since chapters were posted. I’m still trying to recover from the last chaps..I’m just SHOOK🥺

Rodleen Dalli

keep writing looking forward to the story. it's going to get hot! finally!! do we have to wait another week!!

Rodleen Dalli

keep writing looking forward to the story. it's going to get hot! finally!! do we have to wait another week!!

Reader-458723

lord what good reason can he possibly have for refusing to kiss her

BexyCL

such a breathtaking update!😭❤️

Rose Rodriguez

is this the end or is there more updates??

please keep writing Liz, I followed Deimos’ story all the way and will follow Phobos and can’t wait to see if you write 1 for Cronus!!!

Guurrlll feed your beast

run from him Theia let’s see how much attention he’ll give Moria then!

I will keep reading till the end!!! I get frustrated with the chapters that feel short, but love this story! will read it till the end, same as with Deimos’ story. love your writing Liz

I need more please do what you need to do but don't cut the book short I love when it shows this book has updated so please don't rush it x

yesss queen! love the update! can’t wait to see what happens.

Deanna Wilbur

loving this book, need to know how it ends, cant wait for future updates.

Inire

I’m here to support you! it’s an amazing story, keep writing the way you have!

Bonnie Lancaster

I'll keep reading if you keep writing. I love story

Rachel Moye

woo-hoo! Thank you!!! 😘 lesson is things aren't always as they seem 😁

I want to see them shift already. Are they freaking werewolves or not? Theia barely acknowledges her wolf and it is basically irrelevant to the story at this point.

🔥🔥🔥what an update! so glad that they argued and got everything out in the open... it was endearing to see phobos stop theia and explain why sex had to wait... i agree with the other readers - keep writing. the story is worth the $$

can't wait for this week's update...🥰

You saved us with an update!!!🥰

omg can’t wait for Theia to get it on with the beast! 😁😊

Well, I guess I’ll stop waiting for this week’s update. I love this book so I won’t complain as long as the book isn’t abandoned as several others I was reading. I hate investing into books to have the author leave them unfinished. Please don’t do that with this book!!!

I absolutely love the way Vudci reassured her insecurities of belonging. I said I wasn't going to read this update but I was like a kid peeking at their presents before Christmas lol

I love that there are so many parts to each update. Most do not update but a day or two each week and when they do it isn’t a very long chapter. it’s frustrating because the story does not feel like it is progressing. you updating with multiple long chapters are wonderful. keep it up and no shortcuts. you have a really good story here

Cassienka

MORE PLEASE MORE!!!! I'M DYING lol.

Hi Luna Liz, in response to your questions… I personally love the slow burn style of your writing as it builds sexual tension. The length of the story is not an issue for me. However, I have noticed some other author chapters seem to be longer than yours, so I’m unsure why you’re required to break yours down into smaller ones - if I’m understanding that correctly. Love the new update!

ahhhh Phobos makes me so mad! ugh just when things were getting better 😭😭💔

y’all crying over rape for fiction, and I’m here asking for updates

Phobos was such a beautiful soul when he was a juvenile - so aware, intelligent, kind and in touch with his emotions. I feel so sorry for what he has become and how withdrawn he is. Makes my heart bleed!

oh Lizzy I truly adore you too and what a great start of the week it means so much to us thank you my precious author you are one of a kind. So happy that they talked and sorted the virtue issue but I still worry with if he stayed true to her after demanding the same of her in a way lets hope so. I agree she needs to address his closeness with Moira. and I loved seeing their side of Kal’s Bday ❤️ wouldnt be nice if they mated by their 🌲😂😂 I think I recall Deimos marking Lumina when they were away from the pack so why not hahha but I know its too soon for them ….I can’t wait for more I know there will still be struggles but hoping for some loving and 🔥🔥 moments too hahaha again thank you ❤️❤️❤️

don’t change anything, I’m loving the book

I love that there are so many parts to each update. Most do not update but a day or two each week and when they do it isn’t a very long chapter. it’s frustrating because the story does not feel like it is progressing. you updating with multiple long chapters are wonderful. keep it up and no shortcuts. you have a really good story here

don’t change anything, I’m loving the book

sorry my tablet kept stating comments were not sending si I just kept pushing 🤣🤣🤣🤣

not gonna lie though...I wish that super steamy intro was still there at the beginning...it got us all hooked! 😂

Trisha Reynolds

don’t stray from your story be true to the book. we have followed this far. I’m loving this book. keep true

I really hope Phobos doesn’t retreat back from what they have accomplished. yes I know the beast is wild and he thinks he did good. but with Theia as his mate there has to be a reason. she had to be able to help him!?? I really hope the chapters to come don’t reverse and break my heart again

Awan you little sweethearted man! Theia, the sweethearted Luna will surely teach all the children to sign (and hopefully the adult wolves) so Awan feels included. 💖 XXX This quote comes to mind: For the strength of the Pack is the Wolf, and the strength of the Wolf is the Pack. - Rudyard Kipling, The Jungle Book

this book is just wonderful so please keep writing and continue this book!

Vanessa White

omg I can’t with this weekly update lol jk thank you for the surprise much thanks

WatUpG

They need to talk be truthful get it on

Katie Whitmore

absolutely loving this, please update x

Not her going in heat while he’s gone 😩💔.I hope they didn’t give her something that can cause problems with her getting pregnant later on down the line. They already don’t like her. Does Phobos feel the pain she’s going through? And Moria and the wicked lady are close, wondering if she wanted Phobos and Moria to mate? Is this why she gives my Thiea a hard time?

this book is just wonderful so please keep writing and continue this book!

Paula Lewis

ok loving Phobos! I need more updates…… yeah I know I’m not very patient 😕

I was kind of hoping that Vudce would see her being a virgin, even though embarrassing to be found out that she wasn't mated yet, at least it would kick Phobos in the groin once Vudce told him. I was also really really afraid that another scenario would play out with Theia telling Phobos once he returned "So I lost my viriginity... to Vudce's fingers when she was helping me... during my heat... that you missed knowingly..."

Now that they’ve settled *that* little detail, can they have an honest discussion about Moira? I understand that Phobos is close to her and that even Moira and Theia get along well, but they need to have a conversation about his relationship with her and the impact it’s having on his relationship with his mate.

keep going! I love it! one of my favorite stories! also loved the new update 😍😍

Billie Petersen

please keep writing this book. I love this book.❤

We want the the whole story, not a cut down version! Write as much as needed please!!! Don’t deprive us of the full story. Your writing is fantastic!

we want the whole story. not a cut down version! Write as much as needed please!!! Don’t deprive us of the full story. Your writing is fantastic!

Shona Collins

oh god I'm dieing for an update

im not pushing but when will we get an update I keep looking n hoping 🙏

Rachel Moye

💖 Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

Rachel Moye

💖 Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

Oh what a tender hearted chapter! it is so beautifully written. (as always) but the heart of Theia and the journal entries of Phobos make me feel for both of them. I can’t wait for Phobos’ return.

Bonib2

Soooo basically it is okey for the males to sleep with the pack's village bicycles before they met their fated ones but the female should be pure and untouched? Isn't that a bit prejudiced and archaic?

YASSSS! I am so excited 🔥 😍

Yalita Jezája - Makaio

instead of walking away i would demand answers from him..

please please keep writing. I don’t not care how many chapters it is!!!

I want more….keep writing and I will keep reading

Great book. Does not matter how many chapters.Teell the story how you want. please just keep writing. don't make us wait.

I was so excited to see the new update for “Me”, I had just finished rereading a bunch of it and was thrilled. I’m ready for Phobos to return and things to progress for them.

dr.penguin

this is the highlight of my week

sara moore

I am doing my best to leave this book alone so I can read chapters at a time but as soon as I see it has been updated I cannot help it. ❤️

Weird thought, why not just shift and allow their wolves to go for it? Then she and Phobos can have their own time together.

Helena Darovaná

Czech is such harf language. I speak it and I hate it. I know more things about english then czech.

WatUpG

Yes keep writing I hate waiting for next update love your writing thank you

Carol Dionne

No update 😤😭

thank you so much

love it! it’s worth it. keep doing what you are doing

Katie Harrison

I hope when Phobo’s comes back Theia has changed into a kick ass Luna who makes him work to woo her back! his attitude towards her is upsetting! I’m thinking Vudce will test her a lot making her really prove her worth

Thank you for finding the time to update for us 😍! I had a feeling Phobos had heard the rumors. I hate he believed them without even asking her or his brother. We know he cared for her because of some of the little things he did (not sexual) like taking her to the trade, getting the spices, eating with and feeding her, and him making that ring just to name a few. He cared for her but was struggling to except her because of what he thought to be true. He has some making up to do. I feel like Phobos is probably more emotional than we think and he had his guard up with her 🤔.

spoazzy1

please keep writing!!!

Rachel Moye

Your work reads like poetry, bleeding heart, I can feel everything you pour into it! I love that you break it down into multiple parts, it gives us more. And a depth I just can't get anywhere else!! You're my favorite writer!! New age Anne Rice and I just can't get enough!! 👀

Lucy Xiong

I love the part where he kiss her wrist where her pulse is at. so meaningful! it so cute.Phobos is kissing up to me.

Theia needs to bloody say something - she is a Luna after all and it’s about time she bites back. Love her gentle and playful nature but want to see more of that 🔥 in her! Maybe his reason is genuine, if not kick him in the balls 😂. Phobos 🤦🏽‍♀️…he also needs to communicate with her. Bit sad how he is ok to use her for sexual pleasure but hah when it comes to a more intimate action he pushes her away. What is he waiting for…Hmm wonder if he thought something of when he saw Aegeus comfort Theia..but he must know she is innocent and inexperienced especially after this last chapter her shyness and questions. Aah can’t wait to read more my favourite story 💗

I like to see their growing bond, just wish the communication was more clear for the both of them. I think a lot of Theia’s overreacting would be calmed down if Phobos expressed himself more. Also a little concerned about this 7 month leave and Theia not being marked. Doesnt a females heat happen sooner if they find their mate and don’t get marked soon. what would happen if she went into heat during his 7 months away. I wonder if he will mark her before he departs.

Jordan Retzer

we got ANOTHER UPDATE😱😱😱 my day is made!!!!!! love u Luna

more! more! I love how you gift us with so many chapters at once, but it’s never enough! thank you for your amazing writing!! 😻😻😻

I think its a unanimous answer you just post away we will keep reading! We don't care we ALL luvs this book that much!!!! PLEASE post more I am struggling I need more!! 😂🤦🏼‍♀️ I keep reading the last chapters over and over till the new ones come out!!!

Thank you for the update! Loved it!!

I still do not understand why phobos did not tell her he was leaving when all of the other women knew??? he did not explain it well...also why was he behaving weird around her giving her the silent treatment????

Reader-254912

yessss your the best 🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼🙌🏼I love it finally I’m so happy he could love her like he should have from the start 😊😊😊

Rodleen Dalli

We have to wait another week! 😭

Susan Pearson

OMG... when is the next update!!! I can't wait.

Carol Dionne

I wonder if Theia now understands why Lumina felt that way about her as she feels that way about Moira.. 🤔 then again we do t know Moira like we know Theia..