PHOBOS (King of Beasts) Comments

Susan Pearson

OoooMmmGgg!!! Luna!!! I thought they were getting better 😪😪 The struggle is hurting me and giving me anxiety. Phobos needs the silent treatment, no homemade food and a knife thrown at his face again. I'm about ready to say live with Moira. Plus, why can't we get poor Awan a mate 😕

Elsa Rodarte

thank you my Luna.

Trisha Reynolds

wow what a cliffhanger.

Viki_Royale13

I love it! 💘

oh my! so Phobos stayed pure and of course Theia did to, but why doesn’t anyone believe her? I truly love this story, but I am also afraid that this will be stretched out and torturously slow to him finally accepting her 🙁

I loved the chapter!! It was refreshing to see Phobos say more than one single word during a "conversation". It was nice to see him being affectionate with Theia. It's like he wants to be like he used to be with her, but the pack history is stopping him from being completely how he wants to be. I don't like the leader. 😒 She knows that Theia grew up differently. I get that Theia has to be a certain way to survive that area, the leader still doesn't have to be a nasty witch to Theia. She just comes off as disrespectful. But I also feel that she will show Theia great respect when Theia learns their ways because Theia is a pampered princess and her getting dirty is completely different from what she's v used to. Moira? The jury is still out on her. Like, she would be a nice friend for Theia to have, yet I'm still drawn back to TAVT and at Kal's party, Theia says that Phobos shows emotions to another and he's warm with her like no one else. So that makes me think that Phobos still treats Moira as more than a friend, but definitely not like a sister! So yeah, I want to know about that further. I also want Theia to talk to Phobos about her virginity. Yes it's great she finally talked to him about how he feels about her as far as her protection and all but that virginity conversation needed to be talked about like yesterday! And apparently he doesn't mark her for QUITE some time so that bothers me too. I know that markings happen when they mate and all, which goes back to the virginity thing. Ugh!! Like I know it takes time, but my fangirl side of me wants it to hurry, lol. I love the progression though Luna Liz. Continue doing a great job!!

oh my goodness luna liz!!! can things get any worse for Theia!!!! it seems to be going from bad to worse....I feel soo bad for her!! when phobos accused her of sleeping around I was furious, I wished she would have done more than given him a slap!! I feel like she is completely shattered!!

Excellent work, Luna Liz. I am in love with this book. And very mush in love with Phobos!

I'm so mad at Phobos right now!! Why would he assume that she has been with other men? Just because she's pretty and has huge boobs? He is an a**!! The sad thing is it seems like he only rubbed against her so she's STILL a virgin(and so is he) and even a year later at Kal's party she's STILL a virgin! In that year's time, does he take another like a breeder just to sleep with someone? When will he find out the fact that he's seriously misjudged her? Will be apologize to her whenever he finds out? Is this why he didn't talk to her because he thinks that she's a whore and he's punishing her to be miserable because if what he assumes? So many questions!!

how old is theia now? also darn even cronus does not think her and phobos are a good match that is sad :'(

I like Drakho! He might just be the Cronus of this book. Damn Phobos at least explain what the hell is going on. As far as him lying about the sheep and why she’s crying, I feel it’s to protect her. Because had she spoke up it would have went 0 to 100 real quick. Argus is to cute! ❤️

Tina

hoping we get an update soon 🙏

Aah the wait love the story praying for another chapter this week 😂, nervous to see what awaits beautiful gentle Theia at her new home and the challenges to come my heart hurts for her already (and to think I never liked her in TAVT, she has grown to be one of my favourite characters). TAVT was my fav but this is right up there with it amazing author.

Carol Dionne

Waiting for updates is killer 😩

Paula Lewis

❤️❤️

Hello my little wolves ❤️ So a few readers have sent feedback about my writing saying that certain words seem forced and it could be written in simpler terms. I am somehow unable to reply to these comments weirdly no matter how hard I try 🤦🏽‍♀️ I just wanted to say thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it. From next chappy onwards, I will make it as simple as I can so you can all have a better reading experience. Next chappy, Theia shall journey to Phobos’s pack. I will update soon, stay tuned 💕 Thank you for your love and support! Happy reading, Liz

are deimos and their going to become a couple soon, because in your first book they were definitely lovers and she felt that phobois would be unforgiving about knowing the truth about her and deimos' past.

I’m really enjoying Phobos so far! I also like the 2-3 chapter updates! I love your method of storytelling a lot too.

what days do u typically update? I'm trying to set up my schedule so ik what days to expect updates for each of the books im reading

Bria Kanuho

how old is theia in this.?.

Mintyjoon

omg I can’t wait!! I love this book! 😫

Carol Dionne

Still no update 😰

Elsa Rodarte

I can feel Theia’s emotions and sadness as I was once treated like this. single now! Beautiful writing my Luna!

Misty Sweat

luv it so far. can't wait for updates

Thank you so much for the update!

Lizzy ❤️❤️❤️ I am so anxious for his return … love this update and his affection but extremely worried as in what will happen to make his return a sad one when they have departed in such good terms 🤔🤔🥺🥺 I can only think that she will find out something about him ( maybe that he did not save himself for her ? although I truly hope this is the first where the male saves himself for his female as it seems to always be a female duty to be pure ) or another secret… ir maybe she thinks they will mate once he is back but he holds back again ? urghh I know I shouldn’t try to predict and just enjoy the journey but it is arduous doing so when you love something so much as I love your story …. as Theia I am trying to be strong while I wait 😂❤️

I find the contrast amusing, the differences between lumina and deimos relationship vs phobos and thei...phobos seems to be obsessed with having sex with thei like he is starving whereas lumina had to work hard to get deimos to do the deed! these brothers are soo different yet they cause frustration due to their lack in communication skills

I screamed when Cronus called her and said her male is here for her 💀. Ok, so how does the mate bond work? Because when Lumina and Deimos they felt the mate bond off bat. But with them it’s different, even when she was 18 and he came to visit she didn’t feel it. But now that he’s come to get her years later, they look at each other and she feel at home.

oh gosh again I couldn’t resist saving for the weekend 🙄 damm please he knows he needs to prepare he and they both want it so … what ia the wait for ? 😂😂🔥🔥 lets get down to business soon I am sure there will be different dramas and twists ahead ❤️❤️❤️ loving Phobos now but Theia on this last update was quite childish I hope she stops with this soon 🙏🏻🥰 dying for more.

Katie Harrison

please update tomorrow 😄😄😍😍

Lucy Xiong

OMG thank you Luna! it was such a nice surprise. love you!!! l forgot kal’s bday was held in theia and Phobos garden. gosh how heart wrenching is that? their memories flowing in. omg this update is what I been waiting for. I love it. ahhhh I can’t wait for next update

what's the language used in PHOBOS' pack? I speak Russian and some Ukrainian and can recognize the slavic language but not sure.

Love how it has improved! the style is the same (old-worldly with words like ‘whilst’ and ‘beckons’) but with less unnecessary adjective words. I would suggest working on fewer run on sentences - keeping a sentence to a line or two by breaking it up (possibly even with a semicolon). It is also moving so much better! It was more ‘glacial’ pace than a slow burn before but now it really feels like stuff is happening and there is that ‘aw’ factor. 😄

I LOVE this book and cannot wait to read more!!

Katie Harrison

finally!!! ❤️ Thank you

Seems like the writing style has changed a bit and some of the word choices feel forced in this newest chapter.

I blame streaming services. I've been spoiled with the binge-watching phenomenon, so the wait for chapters is reteaching me the virtue of patience. After all, I am old enough to remember a time when we had to wait for episodes. 😆

Stacey Burrows

im loving these books will you also be doing one on cronus??

I said I was going to wait a week to read so I could read 2 updates… that so didn’t happen. 😂 Excited to see what happens next!

are there updates to this story im not getting getting them so want to read more

Queen M

Luna Liz I lost the battle. I was trying to hold out and read the next update and this one together. I lasted a day SMH. thank you for another beautiful chapter. I actually am starting to see P’s care for him to plan the building of the cabin in advance and the making of her clothes. I wonder why he didn’t just warn her like “I am coming to get you on this date be ready” she could have learned there lanauage and prepared herself. Also, I am still wondering how they will make it a year with out mating because this interaction are hot and heavy for real. I worry for Theia, she is going to suffer so much, she has such low thoughts of herself and of Phobos. I wonder if she will remember his beast trying to mark her when she was a child. I am excited for the next chappy. Thank you for your hard work.

Carol Dionne

only one update this week..I’m dying here 😩…

Mellie NewMe Perez

Please update soon

Cassandra Smith

I am so hooked on this story! I feel sorry for Phobos, I think he is misunderstood. he is trying to give Theia time to accept him but I think he struggles to communicate with her he also has the pressure of his pack accepting someone so different from themselves as their Luna, can't wait for the update 😁

I can’t take the suspense!! you have me waking up at 4 am 5 am 6 am checking for updates!!! 😩😅

I’m glad Phobos and Theia are progressing in their communication. I feel like a good deal was addressed here and they resolved it quickly (faster than Deimos & Lumina 😂). I’m so glad Theia was able to not only showcase her cooking skills but also show she knows her way around a fish. They probably didn’t expect her to be able to gut it. And the dance 🙂! All I could think was you better throw that knife! I’m sure if she could get past the blood and everything she probably could hunt some small things if someone showed her. The beta just wants his Queen and Luna to feel as comfortable as possible. He knows her transition hasn’t been smooth. I’m still on the fence with Moira. From what we’ve seen even with them growing up together she’s a little 2 comfortable. Its a lot of smiles, laughs, and she gets pretty close to someone who doesn’t like being touched. I just hope we’re reading this wrong because she is the only female being nice to Theia.

Queen M

I so thirsty for a new Chapter…I am have to go back a read TAVT but I think we are in the present timeline now…great work Luna Liz…the story is developing beautiful and with the right pace…I appreciate you not rushing and sweating the small details and deep character insight. I understand Theia so much more now and understand why she did what she did.

Luna liz could you please update a chappy tommrow..please please. n yup Phoby baby is too much at times😈😈😉

Thanks Luna for these wonderful books, I love the way you write and develop the characters. I loved the first book, but now I really very very intrigued by Phobos, I can't wait for the next chapter. Big hug

oh my Gosh !!!! so thrilled you gave us another chapter this quick thank you!!! I am just confused on the age is it Theia who is 18 now or Chronus and Deimos ? because they are a few years older than her right ? If that is the case and she is 18 and they are like 20 I thought Deimos had returned to his pack before that….like 18… also if she is 18 and had some sort of “blind” contact with Phobos she would know whoever that person was is her mate so why would she then go and make an arrangement with Deimos …. hahaha sorry I just super excited and trying to make sure I get all right… looking forward to a bit of heat too thank you Liz ❤️❤️

urghhh !!! Phobos is killing me ! also why Theia doesn’t say “hey the females treat me bad because I am not marked so they think you dont want me ok if you need time but put them on their place or something “ ! she doesn’t say enough! I am just wondering why seven months … they are hunting for the winter so its needs to be before the winter comes ? and if takes 18 days to get to Deimos why they need to go so far for food for winter ? and they keep bringing food during this period? I🤔🤔 is he not worried about her heat while he is away ? or she ? and yes rush back so we can have some heat between them 🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️❤️

yay finally…I’ve been waiting patiently lol It was heartbreaking. Poor Theia and Phobos too

Gigi

I really enjoyed the book with Deimos I was frustrated but I stayed with it and finished the book and truly loved it. thank you for bringing this book and I look forward to this one and Cronus book. I hope he finally finds his mate. keep up the good work you keep me on my toes. I feel all the emotions.

Trisha Reynolds

I can’t handle that he basically raped her and accused her of sleeping or fooling around with other men. she needs to leave or heaven forbid end her suffering. she should have never left with him. I so hate Phobos for this I can’t understand. I’m in tears for her. mate or not he is an ass

Queen M

Luna Liz…love your writing first and foremost. I am excited to see how they unravel all there miss understandings. I wonder why he brought her to his pack now. I suspect that his pack pushed him to produce an heir. I am intrigued to learn more about his pack traditions. This last update feels like the story is finally starting. like everything before was an appetizer and this is the main course. I hope you get some rest. thank you for the long chapter.

I love this story I am just so frustrated with Phobos. The way he is with Moira. The way he treats her around his pack. The issue with Theia is she has all the feelings and rarely tells him. The only one who seems to see the truth of it is his Beta. I’m am glad she did the knives. She needs to kick his ass. And if she truly is his “beloved” then maybe he should actually treat her like she is otherwise it’s just words said in private and they mean nothing without true action.

I love your style of writing.

4amcripple

I love her and hope to God he ends up begging her and that his people love her more than him. I'm petty, but he has broken this girl. she has the worst luck of all your characters and I can't stand him for hurting her.

I haven't read queen yet...can't wait...(have a washing machine issue so I'm stuck trying to solve that)gonna savour it as I don't know if that's the update for the week! excited either way! 🥰

how often are updates on this book?💜

dr.penguin

why won't she actually communicate 🥲 in dying here

I love the new chapters but Moje Part IV ended on such a specific note and there is no mention of that in the new chapters. It feels a little disjointed and needs some better transition. I kept waiting for it to be visited in some kind of flashback or something and it never came. That chapter did *not* end with a resolution it needs one.

Jessica

I don’t understand why Phobos thinks she’s been with other men

Missy

the last chapter makes me think that it was Phobos visiting her secretly.

Another phenomenal update! But once again I feel so bad for Theia. Hooray for her standing her ground and slapping Phobos when he basically called her a hoe. If he doesn’t start communicating with Theia properly (and soon) he’ll lose her like Deimos almost lost Lumina. I love your writing style so much Luna Liz.

Lisa Huynh

hahahah author, I love your attitude. very well written on if or if not should read this novel

Thiea has to toughen up a little. I love Drakho ❤️. I’m trying to figure this chick Moira out, I don’t get a bad vibe from her. I have to see how this plays out, but i do feel like she holds some type of feeling for him. But if that’s the case sis need to go find her second chance mate! 😂

Heather Kelley

She needs to do more than just slap his ass. How dare he!

Katie Whitmore

absolutely loving this, please update x

ahhh, I can’t wait for more chapters. I love seeing what is unraveling between the two

Great update (loving the long and multiple chapter updates) but my heart breaks for Theia once again. Why would Phobos hunt her down and drag her back only to insult and put her down again? She made it clear at 18 that she didn’t want him. I really hope Argus isn’t Phobos’ son that would only break Theia more. Maybe she’ll do as Lumina did and run to Cronus or Deimos and Lumina. I hope Phobos gets his head out of his ass soon.

4amcripple

I love this book and can't wait for more!!!

Deimos would never! 😂❤️

Missy

I have the feeling that Phobos and Moira are more than besties

loved the first book as well as Phobos although he does not even resemble Phobos from Deimos, I understand growth of a character but boy 😱 looking forward to seeing how they meash together

So Phobos got ahold of some rumors 2. I hope the light bulb comes on.

Elsa Rodarte

thank you my Luna!

Ugh Phobos 🤤🤤🤤♥️

Tabitha Vickers

please keep going as you are. l really appreciate having 4-5 parts to read. I wish we could have extra updates to this book. It has me totally obsessed & I reread chapters just to get my fix. thank you

do what you must. we need to know how this ends.

I won't even complain about the cliffhanger. I absolutely love how you are weaving together Theia's strength beyond the bruteness of one's wolf. The way she has grown before my eyes has been amazing. I love how the stories interwine to show us both sides. I am looking forward to the next update

Jordan Retzer

when does the rest come?

Alexus Winder

what’s the update schedule?

it would be good to get more insight about Phobos instead of Theas POV because it’s hard to understand him & why he’s become this way towards her!

how long until the next update? I’m addicted lol

Female Alpha Skye

please please keep writing! I do not mind the cost-it is worth it💕

I’m glad Theia finally showed him some of her strength! now for him to work

When he said I won’t reject her for you! Its time to lay hands…you’ve got me messed up 👋🏽👋🏽👊🏽👋🏽👊🏽👊🏽👋🏽!

I wish the something that was coming was more chapters 😭😁

Tabitha Vickers

please. This book is taking so long

I worry for Theia’s mental well-being. She’s trying hard to communicate her feelings and the huge fact that Phobos was wrong in assuming she’s slept around. Yet, Phobos either ignores her or toys with her emotions like a dog with a new toy. She needs to pull a Lumina and go visit another pack, Cronos or Deimos or another friend or hell go to a hotel, call up her pack friends and decompress and let her emotions out. 😩💔😭

Cindy Griffin

👏👏👏

EllEnigma

I can't... I can't even. I NEED MORE!

Trisha Reynolds

how often are the updates. I’m hooked this is such a great story

I love that we finally get a description of Lumina and I am so loving this book so far as I am still madly in love with ATVT

Tina

hi Luna Liz hope the next update will be a big one Waiting patiently lol 🥰😍

I tried to read this book slowly so I wouldn't catch up to your writing, but I couldn't stop reading. so good ☺️👍👍

oh my days Luna Liz! I'd make every one wait another week before you update...some highly over critical people out there who don't deserve to read another chappy let alone the rest of the book. it's so unfair to you! I'm so excited to see what you have in store for our Female Theia while she misses her Male Phobos...I'm learning patience with your updates. 🌒🐺😁💗💕💖💞

I'm confused, I thought Phobos saved himself for Theia? What's this talk of all his other women?

whyyy ?!! why did I read this ? how will I have a whole weekend of waiting 😭😭 Lizzy you killing me lady!!! 😂 For those wondering my guess is that he didn’t took her virginity he was just “rubbing” if I may say - I think he was building himself up for it as it was his first time …. but I hope her reaction will make him wonder if he wrongly assumed she wasn’t a virgin but of course he wont say a thing he will keep his doubts and she will not say too. when they are back to Kal’s Bday its been one year and I don’t think they even have mated yet based on her talk to Lumina. I hope some more 🔥 happens between them on this year oh GOD … and just hope he doesn’t touch another and that Moira’s kid has nothing to do with him please…. This will be a long weekend 😭😭 beautiful chapters my dear Lizzy! ❤️