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Bella Jersey 2

this when secrets are bad thing

Amal Samir

The story is interesting and fun to read. Is it really completed or there are new updates?🤔🤔

it was a good update I'm hoping that everything goes right on the full moon. looking forward to the next update

Great update, I hop that they do find the missing Queen and King

Jaelynn Heath

Not really good story telling. You could see they were trying to put good words in there instead of focusing on the details. Also they didn't put "speech Mark's" when people were talking. Also it was moving way to fast not getting enough across first before moving on. I feel the writer has good potential though they just have to work on it more.

I can't wait to see what happens great update

Katja Knip

zhx for sharing this Story. I like it ❤❤

I like the book, I look forward to your next chapter. I have read many many books that where not well done to the point of not being able to keep my sanity trying to read grammatical errors, I am glad to say yours is no where near that. Once you are truly done you can always go back and revise it.

I hope your exams went well. thank you for the update it was good.

kayleigh

I don’t like the way the book is written. there are no “ speech marks “ when people are talking to each other and you don’t say who is saying what. it is poorly written and very confusing.