Unhinged Comments

OMGosh!! I’m in tears 😭

Meaghan Prue

please don’t let her family die and Abby she is a human what if she dies poor Jackie

Merri Lazik

I completely love this series! I binge read the first yesterday and am excited to continue this one. I am hooked!

Taina Iosefo

OMG... they need to get rid of Jonathan and Osiris. I hope Neron and Onyx can get to Kiya quickly. Hope Darian doesn’t do anything stupid. hehe

Sherisa Weston

Guys it is not his father Neron said he wanted to kill and thinks took his mate, he is talking about Osiris. How are you all missing this?

Reader-003394

Did I read that Neron at one time did not want to hurt Kiya, that he had asked his father not to hurt her. I believe Neron was abused by his father and it was smacked into him that he should either beat her or he is saying his mother and sister deserved to die. I get it does not excuse fully what he did but it could explain some of it. Neron was a child to and between his pain at losing his mother and sister , to his fathers insanity and abuse i can see how it turned his heart to stone

Sherisa Weston

Hmm I keep having this strong feeling that Kiya and Neron are going to end up together and I am not sure how to feel about that. I am just mentally preparing myself for it. I don't hate the thought but I can't say I exactly love the thought either. I do love the books though 😆

Gee Higgins

oh no hope she doesn't kill him that will really take her to the dark side

WOW!! I now have compassion for him! Neron is 100% correct they need to burn down the old Zircon Moon and rebuild that terror of a pack! Great job on these chapters 💜

Alyssa

Ok, I have a new respect for Nerón!! He has shown the most growth over this whole situation. I believe that Nerón treated her badly because of Jonathan. Nerón knew that Kiya’s parents would take her home, but he called them because he knew it was best for her. I believe he delivered on his promise to Selene. He wants her happy even if it’s not with him ❤️❤️❤️

amanda Burrows

I need more.....chapter by chapter is killing so good!

😭😭😭 Ariel...

Ashley Delmage

when will the other chapters be released

I think Darien was once in love with Kiya... Is he? And I am sorry Neron but I suddenly want Darien and Kiya together.

Camie Michelle Smallwood

NO!!!! I am on the edge of my seat here!!!! I wanna know if they bring her back from the darkness? Does Selen help her? My gut is telling me she's going to kill Neron and I pray to the Moon Goddess that doesn't happen!!!!

The best way to start the new year! Woke up to 2 new chapters! Thank you, author! 😁 I am so glad that Lyra and Nickolai came to kick some butt. They are my favorite. Ashley is pathetic and Jonathan is a nutcase. They needed to be put in their place. Glad Kiya will be leaving, but something tells me that Osiris will make a move before “tomorrow morning” 😬😬😬

Did anyone witness Odessa's confessions? Darrien, my sister is still single. I can arrange a date once you're ready again. 😉

Please hang on Kiya 😞 Hopefully she can help heal Halima too... I truly have no idea what or who can help her now. She’s yet again left alone to deal with Hell. Maybe Neron needs to let Onyx save Artimas so they can work together to save Kiya/Halima.

Raine Stoehr

Alright, I have finally caught up to the most recent chapter, and I just have e to say one thing. several moments throughout the entirety of this series, I have thought the entire situation surrounding Kiya and her trauma reflected well with a song I recently became obsessed with, the Hero n’ Villain duet by Natalie Chavez on YouTube. But no moment has reflected it quite so well as when Kiya came face to face with her inner child, and I am just.... I’m in awe and eager to see how this all ends. You’ve crafted a captivating story here.

676lucy

is this book updated on a specific day and time or just whenever the author updates it? just so I can set my alarm 😂 this book got me hooked!!

Ryanrossfan

Think of Armie Hammer. His victims had to undergoe intense psychiatric treatment, due to multiple claims from ex-girlfriends of his rape fetishes and fantasies. If the author perpetuates that Neron's previous behaviour is acceptable, she is encouraging toxic and abusive relationships.

Glemmett Maylor

Oh no!!!! Is their bond breaking?

Teala Bossqueen Mills

Will Kyia ever take Neron as her mate please write off Johnthan

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

I knew it was him! Bah! I can't stand Osiris! I wonder if Darien still had traces of Osiris and that's why he acted funny? They both had negative reactions to Neron's necklace. But it's getting good. I hope they can kill Osiris.

Nasteeha Hussein

Marii Solaria please take care of yourself we can wait for the updates later but right your health is our number one concern...

Alyssa

Wow, I am crying real tears at this chapter right now. I have been abused as a kid, just like Kiya, and it literally hurts me that the abusers moved on with their lives and nothing ever happened to them 😢😢😢. My God this is so true.

Lalunafeliz

I just want to take a second to truly appreciate this writer. I was listening to Sabrina Claudio’s song messages to Her and reading the chapter inner child. I that moment I started to sob because I recognize how much my inner child has been hurt and how we probably all neglect ourselves in this way. Thank you for reminding us to take a moment to love ourselves and heal from the trauma that no one apologized for. So thank you ✨💜✨

Yahaida Perez-Lemon

👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

Sherisa Weston

Osiris really doesn't want anyone to find Kiya. He is even trying to snap to bond on Neron side. It is that ritual

HOLYYYYY MOLYYYYY. Things just got real 😳😳 ...and I’m disgusted that Osiris and Kiya kissed. No, just no!

holy cow I’m mute

Yes!! Nadia and Lucien are back!

Heather Kilmer Thrapp

I’ve been waiting for en update for almost a week. still only 60 chapters.

Marii Solaria

To my readers: Please be mindful that updates are drastically slower now because I’m recovering from emergency surgery from a few days ago. I’ll do my best to update, but it will not be at the same speed as before. Writing will be challenging and I hope to write a little bit each day. So please, this is a time where you really have to be patient. Thank you 🙂

Ommggg!!! Great chapter! Dying for the next one! I knew that asshole of an ex-Alpha had something to do with it!

Diana hmmmm she’s special ..... who’s spirit is she?? Amber is my guess. I think she will be the key to save both Kiya and Osiris.

Briley Armstrong

How often do you update?

I want to see them together but not so easily lol I’m loving the drama!

Well Damn 👀👀👀 l hate Johnathan and Odessa. Well They brought this on themselves she was trying to be nice but saying she was an object took the cake. Such a disgusting pack! l hope Neron leaves them. No one has changed really but him and her sister. So sad 😞

Mrs.Hyde

It breaks my heart for all r the abuse she went through and to know not only was she brutally beaten up but raped on a regular basis as well. And for her Raina, Stephen, Ashley even Valerian to all say it's time to move on and leave the past in the past? Like wth are they sipping on. My heart goes out to Kiya so much. As a rape survivor, those horrific experiences never go away. They later festering like an open wound in your subconscious, never to fully heal. Yeah you get up everyday putting one foot in front of the other but it has a ripple effect and changes your life in every way. I don't blame her for being so hurt and mistrustful of them. Years of unspeakable mental, emotional & physical abuse can't even be healed in years let alone a few months. I'm glad to see that Neron is making an effort to change but it seems he got a long way to go and Kiya biological family I feel like their betrayal is even worse than Neron because if anyone is suppose to love and cherish you it's your parents the ones that brought you into this world. They and Raina are asking for the almost impossible way to quickly and all because now they feel "remorse". But it can't be to asusage their own guilt. She deserves all the time in the world even if it takes a decade for Kiya to forgive them they need to give her that time.

Roza Pestana

I don't trust Osiris. He is manipulating Kiya into doing what he wants. I hope Neron and the others find her soon

Meaghan Prue

actually though it would be something to see a chapter from Artemis point of view locked away in kiyas darkness trying to reach out ro kiya and onyx

Meaghan Prue

the more i read the last chapter the more i want that bastard osiris dead torn limb from limb with no mercy

Senga Mai

😢😭😭oh my heart just broke

Lois Withers

omg can someone help me make up my mind on osiris I thought he was bad and wanted neron to straight up kick his ass but now I feel so sad for him and my heart breaks for him

Alyse Wilson

wow this book and the first book are amazing! to the author thank you for blessing us with such an amazing book and surrounding it around a woman of color. you don't find alot of books like that! thank you ♡♡

Rebecca Provan

luv luv luv luv luv

Reader-113080

A must read, not much of a book worm but I definitely enjoyed this one, so many twist and turns and I love the little quotes. I do hope that Neron is given a second chance in love.

Could Diana be Amber?

love it!! nope no redemption for the parents and l agree they only want her forgiveness to get rid of their guilt not because they are sorry. Aww did Neron call her parents? She does need them right now.

Brittney Allen

awesome update!!! Nikolai is a great father! He and Lyria are the parents I wish I had. They love and protect their children no matter what. side note: 🤔now you told me that Neron didn't snitch?😒 I see it was Jackie dry snitching and Neron provided the moisture 🤦🏾‍♀️... I aint even mad at them though cause Kiya needed her parents. They did the right thing, but I'm disappointed 😞 😔 😪 😕 😒. I though I was going to at least read Kiya choked out or scared Jonathan until he pissed his pants😈🤷🏾‍♀️😫😭😭😭🤣🤣🤣

Vickie Armitage

omg I need to finish it can't wait for next chapter so hooked

Sherisa Weston

Did Dianna first appear when Kiya arrived at Zircon Moon?

Nnaa

i think jonathan will do something more deadly to hold kiya back 🤔

Taina Iosefo

I am so glad Neron and Raina are trying to protect Kiya. I hope Tristan gets what he deserves along with Neron’s father. Can’t wait for the next update.

Alyse Wilson

some of you guys need to chill out with the judgment! shes doing the best she can writing this story and its a TREMENDOUS one at that. Alot of details go into books im sure and its not always going to be cookies and rainbows. Keep up the good work Marii Solaria 👏

Sherisa Weston

what chapter did Neron give Kiya that necklace?

Lois Withers

okay so awesome cuz I kinda feared that osiris would use this to get to her more but she has more strength than me if given the chance I would have mine suffer the Scaphism torture method and I would camp out on the river bank that or find a horse and have him raped to death lol sorry if that offends or upsets anyone at the age of 19 I was raped even at 34 ive managed to deal with a lot of it but some things are still more of a challenge at times

love the book so much.. Libya should start a new life but the goddess has plans for them.. is there more still waiting..?

Oh Halima... 😭 Poor baby! It's supposed to be frustrating that Kiya gave in because I expect her to get out of manipulation, and because she's an Avatar. BUT it felt right that she had embraced Halima... Embraced her inner child, her neglected feeling. Accepting that she may be an Avatar of the Light, but she has darkness in her, she's entitled to feel that way. Her feelings are valid. Maybe Kiya needs this too. Osiris may not see it now but I think healing Halima is the only way for Kiya to finally let go of her painful life.

My girl is sooo smart 💜💜

Yolanda Peguero

I really love this story being a survivor and having many traumas, I can truly identify with Kiya. One of the parts of healing is forgiving and letting go. forgiving oneself and others, allowing onself to move on to live and love. Kiya deserves happiness, love. She deserves to accept her past as it is and move forward only then true happiness can come. love heals !

is she okay are they gonna be okay? and who is the dang owl! ahhh I’m gonna pull my hair out! lol

Jamee Moore

I'm really confused on how Raina can punch Odessa in the face but Ashley and Steven just stand there like they don't see or hear what Johnathon is doing. In front of the ENTIRE pack, might I add. Kiya really shouldn't forgive anyone at this point. I'm not saying she should forgive Raina at this point though. Raina is just one of the few who truly is sorry for what she did, and wants to make up for it.

Reader-003394

I am absolutely in love with this book. As a writer you have drawn me in . I love these characters, Kiya is a great character. I will say this I want Neron and kiya to find the love they with each other. kiya needs to finally see that neron has changed and he loves her. one thing she should realize is when she says the mate bond is not love she tears the love her friends share with their mates.

Kimberly Bills

when is the next update please I’m loving this book

Reader-242451

when will you update?????

Amanda Rains

Marii, I would like to take a moment to say thank you for the wonderful work of art I have had the enjoyment of indulging in with these books. I get excited for the next chapter and cannot wait to read what's coming next. It saddens me when others cannot be more respectful, patient and understanding to the fact people need to have mind breaks. Or perhaps having children and a family or any other responsibilities besides 1. If this story teaches us anything, Love, Patience and Understanding is our greatest triumph to healing and choosing to have a better future and treat one another much better then so many do. Beautiful work!

Glemmett Maylor

Stop doing this to me woman! I swear I need the whole book! This is such good writing ....I feel all the emotions on these pages. sigh. Happy her real mom and dad have arrived. I agree with kiya, her birth parents are unworthy of her.

Crystal Spears

I don't mean to be pushy but... PLEASE add more chapters!! I'm dying here!! What happened to the car, Jonathan or Osiris? Is Neron gonna get to them in time??

Yolanda Moreofmetolove Benjamin

I have been amazed through this book and I find it rewarding that her parents have come to let her heal in peace But what will become of her and Neron?????

Sanmyaku Joan Kurisu

I still think Neron can still save Kiya. Osiris will soon get his karma big time.

Albertina Mcclain

This chapter broke me down. I cried with Kiya😪😭. They had to had seen the blood, bite marks and scratches. Neron did care back the because he was to busy sniffing Odessa's back side. shame on him!

Ashley Fuller

To think I hated Osiris just to learn this. He’s in pain for life because of his immortality. I think Kiya needs to find a way to show Osiris that Neron isn’t like them, and then Neron needs to listen to Osiris’ story. Destroy Jonathan because he will never change. Disband Zircon, Neron do what he loves, and let Neron prove himself to be his own man.

Jael Brown

I am so glad that Neron is becoming his own man and not the one his father wants him to be. He truly does care about Kiya, and hopefully they will get together. I am so glad Osiris dropped Odessa like a hot potato, she definitely got what she deserved. More misery will find it's way into her life. I can not wait for the next update.

Taina Iosefo

OMG... I love that even though Kiya didn’t want her real parents there, she felt comforted and loved. I loved her real parents going against her egg and a perm donors and Neron’s dad. Awesome chapter!

Taina Iosefo

This had to be the hardest and saddest chapter reading. I couldn’t imagine what she has gone through but with this chapter I feel her pain. I hope Neron can make it better for Kiya. 💔🥺😭😭

MzDiva1987

as much as I would love to see Kiya kill Tristan she shouldn’t. It willonly give into what Osiris wants

wolfey619

Kinda ironic how Ashley was shedding crocodile tears throughout the whole chapter but her feelings shifter suddenly to anger when she smelled Kiya's REAL mom and dad. If anything, she should be thanking them for stepping in as legit parent's where Steven and her failed. I hope they get some "humbling" from Kiya's adopted parent's 🤭

May I suggest on how she should do it in front of everyone? 1. Castrate him 2. then the fingers 3. then the hands 4. then his tongue- for the times she screamed 5. then the ears- for all those who refused to hear her cries 6. then the eyes- for those who turned blind eyes on her 7. then the feet, for having no one to run to So that everybody in the pack would feel more guilty.. and after just leave him like that in the dungeon.

Pupu

Neron should show that he truely cares about Kiya. I think only Neron's love and care will be able to thrawt Orisi and his ugly darkness. The assualt is unforgivable. And Neron needs to prove that he is a worthy mate. Kiya deserves to be loved , cared and protected. I hope Neron proves to be worthy enough for her.

YES! mom and dad are here.... I can’t wait for the next update

UGH! I debated whether or not to get hooked onto another ongoing book, but I couldn’t help it after Untouchable!! Anxiously awaiting new updates!!!!

I wonder who said the last "NOTHING!"... was it Kiya? Artemis or... the darkness that Osiris had been wanting to release from Kiya.

Tyler Taylor

yes! Kiyra is getting vulnerable with Neron, it’s the beginning of a beautiful love story ❤️

MP14

I love these books! I check all throughout the day for possible updates 🤷🏻‍♀️🤣 Keep them coming!

Jael Brown

Marii I am sorry to hear about your surgery I hope all is well and that you are doing better. I knew Nadia and Lucien were on their way to the Garnet Moon pack, to give them information about Kiya and Osiris. I wonder if Osiris knew that they were headed there and that's why he has Lots messing with them. Will we ever find out who Diana is in one of the upcoming updates I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out? Why is Rains so stressed out about Kiya missing or is guilt eating away at her still for how she and everyone else treated her? I am Ariel will get a chance to be separated from Odessa. I wonder what will happen to Odessa after the separation? I can't wait for the next update.

Nina072

awesome as always marii, and thanks for tears during Artemis chapter; definitely needed that with my coffee.

Angie O'Flaherty Thomas

I absolutely love this series, I'm patiently waiting for the next update

Sherisa Weston

Kiya, and her friends along with Neron are all in the 20s right? Including Raina and so forth?

Meaning - Kiya has FINALLY found peace within 💜 Such a well deserved feeling for her 💜

Shundra Samuel

So when does 17 minus 3 equal 15? She was 14 years old when Tristan started abusing her!!!!! Even worse!

spazz 31

I love this book! can't wait for a new update! I bet it's going to be amazing just as every other has been. can't wait to see the specialist in Diana. we all have our thoughts..I'm going to have to re read this more than once! luv luv luv u as an author!

Meryam Ahsan

finalllyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 I hope they finally figure out they love each other 🙄🙄 & I would sincerely doubt it’s as friends for either. shouldn’t be anyway. please, please let the new problems be dealing with the pack and navigating their relationship. I still think Neron should not have killed his dad without presenting it to the pack as such. but hey, it was life or death- and a parent who had love would willingly agree to allow their child to live instead of them. which johnathan was incapable of.

Bonib2

So good. I can't wait for the next update

Meowdel Em

also , my newest theory, lol 😂... Neron and Kiya already love each other in some way. Kiya wouldn’t cry over his sketch otherwise.. she just isn’t aware of the fact that she does in fact feel something for the Neron she’s gotten to know and remembers before Nuria rather than the one who rejected her.

Lisa Essler

Marie, you are a great writer. I love your ability to get right to the bottom othe character's pain and joy. After all, the joy we experience will be as great as the pain we experienced.

Laur S

Does anyone know since the author is out of commission for now if there are updates every two weeks, once a month or this book is on temporarily pause. I’m starting to forget things that happened and having to reread.

Debbie Carslake

update already plz

Ashley Fuller

No, no, no, no...NO!