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Stacey Stratton
f8d1 this sounds like an interesting story! I’ll probably wait till it’s completed to read it though. hopefully it’s finished soon!
09/05/2023 00:13Rafael
#f8d1# ooooo. I like the introduction. I like the fact that the males get mated season. maybe is the first time that I read this. usually is the females. I will add it in my library but I am going to read it when it's finished. I don't like to wait.
09/04/2023 23:43Vicki usher
f8d1# haven't started this book yet has been in my library for a little time as the reviews said it was incomplete and wanted to wait till it was finished.
09/04/2023 23:31lunabug
to those of you reading this story I hope you will read this comment the story hasn't been updated and over a year there are rumors that the writer who wrote this has passed away or is not going to complete it so it is an incomplete story and has been for over a year.
09/04/2023 19:20Regina Moore
you no I keep hearing about punishment for khan what about forgiveness we are what we remember
09/04/2023 16:44
Mamabird
I'm just worried about the author and few Ive read had past one. i hope that's not the case.
09/04/2023 16:21Lynn Hepburn
last update appears to be 4/2021. I'm just not willing to start yet another abandoned story.
09/04/2023 15:18Samantha Crisman
oh my gosh. reading this on my last day working while also pregnant and I kinda wanna cry for Indie.
09/04/2023 15:07Barbara Jo Anderson
will there be more to the story?
09/04/2023 14:09Steph Oakley
This is a good book. Wondering when this will be updated or completed. Please let me/us know.
09/04/2023 13:49
Amber
is this book completed or ongoing because it seems to not have been updated in awhile
09/04/2023 12:42S M
is the story somewhere else
09/04/2023 12:11Victoria Murray
Have you abandoned this story?
09/04/2023 10:47So Khal died because he wasn't going to accept her kinda pretentious!
09/04/2023 10:40Sonia Hood
This is a good start to this story.
09/04/2023 10:30Keira Taylor
when will the next chapter be out???????????????
09/04/2023 10:12Jackie Fadell Jackson
I'm about to start, is it as good as it seems it's going to be?
09/04/2023 10:06Anita Mara
Hi, is the story complete?
09/04/2023 09:46Deniese M.
Hi was really enjoying the story still waiting on update .
09/04/2023 09:45Is Ryan the actual alpha of this pack they haven't said for sure so I could see indie havis the indie having the alpha of both packs coming for her wanting her
09/04/2023 09:40was Indy's Dad sold to the witch in the cave by Khals Dad?! 🤯
09/04/2023 09:36April Borchers
What does her wolf look like other than blue eyes I have no clue
09/04/2023 09:36
Quinisee
is this book abandoned?
09/04/2023 09:32AZ Trouble
12-10-21: Finished Chapter 68. The story was wonderfully written and I loved the ending. Great job author.
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09/04/2023 09:29AZ Trouble
11-01-21: Just finished reading Ch 68. The storyline has been good so far, but there are still some unanswered questions. Some commenters have mentioned that it hasn’t been updated in awhile. I hope that isn’t the case.
09/04/2023 09:28i I'm not sure which alpha is taking talking which person is thinking or talking I have a feeling that both the alphabet and the alphabet and the alphabet are both I'm a new pack I'll both hurt mates but it's confusing reading to get to that part so that part someone can change it say it whatever it is please get to the point and make it not so worthy worthy what's the word sometimes do not make a difference or meaning the same thing as what you are which leads me to believe that you are not from it's not from here the US which is not bad as your translation of the story is is not coming out the way that you would like for uswod really lomwbetter POV*S as. I am also speaking into my phone so it may not sound as correct as it needs to be the way the sentences flow but I am loving your story so far but I had to give my criticisms on what I think and how things are wording and how things are going
09/04/2023 09:12I love this story. yes she deserves love with a mate just like every other wolf out there!
09/04/2023 09:11Trinity Froehlich
love it
09/04/2023 09:09Deniese M.
Lovely stories so far can't wait to continue reading
09/04/2023 09:05Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/04/2023 09:04Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/04/2023 09:04Elizabeth Lanzi
Enjoying so far.
09/04/2023 09:02Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/04/2023 08:59Kayla Bertram
love it so far
09/04/2023 08:59Rie Harley
thus story is way better then I thought
09/04/2023 08:54sotporcha
it’s been a while, can we get an update please
09/04/2023 08:52Jenny Best Camacho
LOVE IT !!!
09/04/2023 08:50Victoria Murray
How often do they update?
09/04/2023 08:50Stngray3
It feel like the story has been abandoned which sucks because it’s been good so far. I really want to know what happens next…. It’s been months, please start updating again….
09/04/2023 08:45Lisa Casalez
I really like this book so far.
09/04/2023 08:43Vicki Trewella
Have really enjoyed the story so far 🥰 Thanks
09/04/2023 08:42Tanya R Smith
I don’t know if chapter 68 is the final but if it is you left a lot of things hanging and unanswered I hope you will be writing another bio to address them or make new chapters
09/04/2023 08:41
Nicole Bennett
is this book complete or will there be updates?
09/04/2023 08:41Hi! Is this story still ongoing or has it been abandoned? Just asking before I start reading :)
09/04/2023 08:39Angela Rolfe
update please also referring back to the 1st ultrasound they're talking with the doctor and the doctor said "opportunity" to miscarry shouldn't that be "possibly"
09/04/2023 08:36love it!
09/04/2023 08:36is there anymore chapters coming?
09/04/2023 08:34Vicki Trewella
any updates soon? please???
09/04/2023 08:33Remy Bergez
I up to 41! Personally I'm surprised the Brothers are feeling jealous this is different from other twin mate stories I've read. Why is Indy still giving Khal a 2nd thought, sure the mate bond but Now that she is a Royal and powerful he will accept her but when she was an Omega he called her horrible names ? How Can she just forgive & forget?? Indy needs to figure it out! Story is very interesting tho so I will keep reading!!!
09/04/2023 08:33Jody Carroll
like how it's going so far but I thought the other woman was actually her. birth mom
09/04/2023 08:33is this book done? There hasn’t been an update in a long time.
09/04/2023 08:33CherryBlossom
Please complete the book, before i read, the updates take too long.
09/04/2023 08:30
Melissa Conaway
please say theirs more to come! I love this book!
09/04/2023 08:29
Dani Udelhofen
This story is going well. It hurts to know she had to go through such termoil and lost the babies. I hope she is able to recover and have more children. I feel for Raki but I know he'll be happy cuz of his mate. Please update soon. xoxo keep up the great work
09/04/2023 08:27patiently waiting for an update!
09/04/2023 08:26Dani Udelhofen
I hope all is well and you're able to update soon. Loving this book!
09/04/2023 08:25Manuela Müllauer
Is there an update coming or is it finished? Unfinished and no end in sight?
09/04/2023 08:22Melissa Conaway
was that the end? or will there be more to this book? 🤔
09/04/2023 08:21Cyra Wolfire
ooohhh this is getting good!! and her former alpha is such a dickwad!
09/04/2023 08:20
Reader-371843
loving it!!! hope she makes her ex Alpha squirm!!!
09/04/2023 08:19I've gone through the comments and the last I see from the Author is 4-5-2021. Are more updates coming or is the story done? it still says ongoing....?
09/04/2023 08:19Author - can you please let us know if you will continue this book. I understand things happen sometimes to stop the writing process, but can you at least let us know your intentions?
09/04/2023 08:17Jessica Lei' Young
This is a good one, thank you for it 😊
09/04/2023 08:16Sunrise
i was hoping so much that raki would win and ask hunter to lead by his side :(. he's already been through so much and sure didn't deserve another shot to his ego and self :-(
09/04/2023 08:16
elle
Ginang dont stand for lady,,,Ginang is for married and older lady,,,since indy is not married it's should be Binibini
09/04/2023 08:13
Donna Moncus
so glad you are back to updates. I hope everything is going ok for you
09/04/2023 08:12Donna Moncus
please update. I love this story
09/04/2023 08:11Laraib Yousaf
bruh my eldest daughter was born in 2015 and her birthday is on 2nd of june lmao 😂
09/04/2023 08:10erin c
When was this last updated and when will it be again?
09/04/2023 08:09Cyra Wolfire
lolz good alpha khal needed an attitude adjustment but can Indy reject him without consequences abs just keep the hot brothers? who accepted her right from the start!
09/04/2023 08:09
Bella Jersey 2
chapter 8: what new problems are coming our way?
09/04/2023 08:09sotporcha
I love the story but this chapter was way to short and it was a little boring
09/04/2023 08:08Siobhan R
I was so into it that I wanted to hold my spot. I took a screenshot for that purpose only. it’s my first book on this site. it’s awesome so far!
09/04/2023 08:08Stephanie Schneider
I'm enjoying the story so far, and can't wait to read more.
09/04/2023 08:07
Rebeca Castro
nooooooo why did you tellll himmmmm that was big mistake
09/04/2023 08:07
Bertina Delta
Hi dear readers - I want you to know I was not able to update the past week, due to personal issues. I'm so sorry! But I'm still recovering and clearing up the mess this week, so I'm asking for a bit more patient! I'm not sure when I'll update this week... I'm planning to update at least one (bigger) chapter, but I can't tell when.I hope you understand... Stay safe, stay strong! xx^B.
09/04/2023 08:05Bella Jersey 2
then alpha a$$hole will want her
09/04/2023 08:05Vali
the part where Ryan says I love big butts….I started singing “I like big butts and I can not lie.” song.
09/04/2023 08:04Bella Jersey 2
twelve: secrets always find a way of coming home
09/04/2023 08:02Reader-671139
Love the story, hope you update soon. Can’t wait to find out the father.
09/04/2023 08:01Lillie Harris
it is a very good thing that that Imdy found her mate
09/04/2023 07:58Alena O Barry
So sorry that Indy lost her pups. It took me almost a year to recover from my miscarriage.
09/04/2023 07:57Joan Carter
Awesome story Wonder if there’s going to be a sequel xx
09/04/2023 07:57Bella Jersey 2
six: what problems are coming? is this ra.pe where the woman are completely saying no? could it be unwanted sex but they change their minds?
09/04/2023 07:57this feels like this is being dragged out. idk if it’s because the chapters are short and updates are LONG in between.
09/04/2023 07:56
G G Goyal
I feel like khal had childhood trauma or smth.. she just killed him..she could hv explained that y she is like she is rather than kill him.. or simply rejected him...book was interesting.. now m not sure..
09/04/2023 07:56Dani Udelhofen
not sure what happened, I had unlocked and read up to chapter 22 and was waiting for more to be posted and now I came back to continue and it locked chapter 10-whatever is there and won't let me unlock and continue. :( very sad cuz I wanna see what happened after she killed her first mate. I hope this gets fixed soon.
09/04/2023 07:55Cyra Wolfire
omg yaaasss I saw that coming but please please tell me that scott is her mate too and she gets hot twins and her previous alpha mate can suck it!
09/04/2023 07:52Debra Conklin
yes they need each other, now she can be happy
09/04/2023 07:52Bella Jersey 2
chapter 10: I’m glad Fiona is moving on with the mating process
09/04/2023 07:52Reader-571703
please don’t make her lose one they are important
09/04/2023 07:51Bella Jersey 2
two: I think it’s disgusting what’s going on. I don’t know if the human race might not do the same thing if we were dying off
09/04/2023 07:51Bella Jersey 2
one: do you think the alpha is her mate?
09/04/2023 07:51
Miss Lynne
Khal is not to be trusted. He definitely is starting to remember more.
09/04/2023 07:51Bella Jersey 2
chapter 8: you do feel bad for Indy. you can Fiona to be happy but SO scared of being alone
09/04/2023 07:51Reader-613006
not a fan of Kahl but rejection and offering him a second chance mate, gives you an opening for a spin-off book
09/04/2023 07:50
J C
I still hate Khal, but this is interesting.
09/04/2023 07:50Reader-312183
I love this book. please update soon. I hope she rejects her old Alpha. He doesn’t deserve her
09/04/2023 07:50Christina Depass
omg this is awesome love your book. I love that she is not the skinny wolf you always read about. she got curves and I love it
09/04/2023 07:49
