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Reader-781148

I was thinking that to that his mate was the girl that kept running away. This book is good every chapter keeps you guessing and wanting more

Reader-781148

I’m loving every chapter. if you can the next two chapters please

Reader-264357

I honestly love this book! always on edge waiting for the next chapter.

NA💕

😭😭😭 poor Ollie....I hope Marcus regrets it!...please one more chapter today lol 😂

Reader-781148

thank you

Mary M Collier

Loved this!! So excited this will be a series! Reading is my little escape from reality, thank you for sharing your gift of writing!

Reader-781148

I like this chapter and can’t wait to see what happens next. I’m going to check out your other book as well. Thanks for sharing with us

Reader-671139

Thank you for the update. Keeps getting more exciting :-)

Hernandez Giuliana

I was waiting all day for the update!

Tania Bouca

omgg yes i was hoping for damon to show up and save the day 😏

Ashley J.

Azrael sounds so intriguing and can't wait to see what will happen. Truly amazing story

Rachael Pardoe

love the book, looking forward to the second one ☺

Reader-671139

Love this chapter!! Happy to see Marcus becoming the leader he is meant to be :-)

Christy G

omg! please don't separate them! tyson needs his assistance kicked!

Reader-781148

I’m so excited it finally happened and can’t wait for the next chapter

Reader-781148

Finally 😊

Christy G

Oh shoot! Marcus's dad is totally suspect.

NA💕

No please!! they are trying to separate them!! don't believe him Ollie...go to war against the council! 😂 one more update please...💕

Andie Richardson

I need the next chapter. well. I need the whole story. I’m far too invested. I snuck off at work to the toilet not feeling well to read the latest chapter. 😂

Reader-781148

That was beautiful. Enjoyed this chapter as well and looking forward to the next chapter

NA💕

I love their moments together!! I wonder what’s going to happen at silver rock? 😉 being all alone and away hehe can’t wait for the next update!

NA💕

omg!!! I can’t stop reading!! looking forward for the next chapter...hopefully today!!! 💕

NA💕

oh no!! please don’t separate the two of them!😭😭🥺

Erin Marie Storbeck

The way Marcus expressed his love to Olivia☺ He seems to have matured while he was away. Thank you for 2 chapters😁

Reader-781148

I want to cry. I love the love they have for each other. I hope the council will change their laws after seeing how much they love each other. I’m excited for the next chapter

NA💕

I really think the secret ally is Marcus father! he’s pushing the whole ceremony a lot. I love that Marcus is not going to let anything separate him from Ollie 💕😍. can’t wait for the next chapter.

Alisha Kurio

yesssssss. I am loving this book

NA💕

No no no!! please, I can’t handle the suspense...😭. one more chapter today pretty please?😅 (Marcus deserves to see that!!)

NA💕

Oh hell no! they better not do something to separate Marcus and Ollie!! it took 2 years to get them together!! please noooo 😫 one more update pretty please 🥺💕

Reader-781148

thank you so much! I can’t stop smiling and sleep peacefully now. Looking forward to the next chapter

NA💕

Oh god!! the suspense is killing me!! 😅. will Marcus see Ollie with Tyson? omg omg please let there be another chapter today!! 💕

Christy G

I cannot wait for Tyson and Samantha to be caught.

Christy G

Oh My God! That was sssooo good.

Reader-781148

OMG, you have literally made my day with these two chapters and I can’t wait for the next one. Yah woohoo...

Reader-781148

Lol! I can’t wait for the next chapter. Can we please have 2 chapters at a time? Please

Reader-781148

I am dying here please another chapter soon. I going crazy waiting please please please. Great chapter as always

Reader-781148

Every chapter keeps me coming back for more. Enjoying the book and looking forward to the chapters

Christy G

Go get her Marcus!

Duski Brann

I'm loving this story!! I was just wondering how often you update... can't wait for more!

Christy G

Oh my God! They're finally together. My heart overflows. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Christy G

Omg! You can't leave me hanging like that! Please, please, please I need more! 😁😋🤣🤣🤣🤣❤❤❤❤

Reader-781148

OMG, can’t wait for the next chapter

Hege Slettebø

i can’t wait for next chapter. start reading this nigth, and i love it

NA💕

oh yeah!! loved this chapter 💕 so happy that they got away and that Tyson didn't get to ollie...cant wait to see what is to come, my guess a fight with the council 😏😅😂

Hernandez Giuliana

Deimos should find his mate as well.. it will be nice a story about that.

NA💕

I love seeing the “update” sign!! so excited for the next chapter!!! thank you @Amanda Steel! loving this story!! 💕😊

Reader-671139

I think the combination of Marcus and Damon (and throw in Olivia’s brother) could take down the whole council. 😀

Reader-671139

Marcus should demand that they look into Tyson and Samantha’s minds and find out what they have been doing!!! I keep screaming ‘Come on Marcus, turn the tables on them, be smart’

Reader-781148

I’m so exciting to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter

Hernandez Giuliana

oh yeah!! Samantha and Tyson will be in for a big surprise!! i can’t wait!

Reader-781148

ok so I got a little behind in reading the chapters due to school work. just read the last three chapters and every one of them were good. So I think Damon’s father is the ally? Can’t wait for the next chapter

NA💕

😭😭😭 god, the way Marcus loves Ollie! I loved this chapter. can’t wait for the next update ❤️❤️

Reader-781148

not a problem. hope you feel better

Christy G

So looking forward to reading the next chapter 😀

Reader-781148

So I guess we now know who the ally is. Please tell me someone will stop this and that Tyson and Samantha will be found out as well?

Hernandez Giuliana

Please don’t do it!! do not make them reject each other!! no please

Christy G

Oh my goodness. Hopefully Tanner and Damon find their mates.

NA💕

omg!! things are about to go down!! it's fight time lol 😆!!

Reader-781148

ok so was I the only holding my breath waiting and wondering what was going to happen. Great chapter looking forward to the next chapter. what’s up with that necklace?

Reader-781148

I can not express how happy I am that they got caught. Thank you for this chapter and I can’t wait for the next chapter

Reader-781148

I believe it’s Tyson and Samantha but please tell me it’s going to come out that their mates and have mated please

Reader-781148

I can’t get to the next chapter????

Christy G

Oh my goodness! Marcus and Olivia can not be separated! They love each other. Please have Tyson and Samantha get caught soon. My heart can't take it!

Andie Richardson

the next chapter won’t load for me. deviastated! hopefully will have by the morning

NA💕

I’m so happy!! so exited and looking forward to the next chapter! hopefully tomorrow 💕💕

Erin Marie Storbeck

I can see Marcus' father being the ally. my question is if he us then he must know that his mate is a siren? I hope Tyson and Samantha end up together, that conniving twosome deserve eachother😠 I love love love how Marcus is willing to leave his position and pack for Olivia😍💕 I hope she gets to know that

Reader-781148

Love it but you are killing. I was holding my breathe waiting for them to run into each other. please please I can’t wait I need more

Erin Marie Storbeck

I hope it's Tyson and Samantha and they get discovered as mates too. If Marcus and Olivia's scents combined then wouldn't theirs too?

NA💕

the moment I’ve been waiting for!! 😭😭💕💕...please tell me he will be there at club and will not reject her? can’t wait for the next update!

Reader-781148

I’m so excited. Finally it happened and I can’t wait to see what comes next. Thanks 😊

Amanda Caruana

ohhh I want Tyson & Samantha to be found out.... they make me so mad!!!

Christy G

That was beautiful! Finally...now he just needs to mark her. ❤❤❤❤❤❤

Reader-671139

Looking forward to the next chapter.Hopefully we will find out about Lizzie and Logan too.

ughhh I just want Marcus and Olivia to be together already. Please please please it’s killing me!! lol

Reader-781148

I can’t stand Samantha. I wish in the next chapter that her and Tyson get caught. Everything else in this chapter I loved. I wish the law will get changed soon

Reader-781148

enjoyed this chapter as well looking forward to the next chapter

Reader-781148

omg, I need the next chapter please

Reader-781148

that was intense, but it’s getting interesting. I can’t for the next chapter and I’m hoping for an extra one today. please please please

Reader-781148

wow! I feel for her. can’t wait for the next chapter

Christy G

More! Please, I need more!

Reader-781148

I can honestly say you are by far my favorite writer 😊

Reader-781148

I’m enjoying reading this book can’t wait for the next chapter

Reader-781148

Yes, please let some find out about Tyson and Samantha soon. Looking forward to the next chapter

Shelly Hay

currently rooting for Ollie to reject Marcus and choose damon! damon+Ollie! keeping writing, you're a great author😊❤

Reader-781148

every chapter gets better than last and I’m enjoying this book. can’t wait for the next chapter.

NA💕

I can’t wait for the next chapter!! 💕I love this story so far. I hope that you update a chapter soon! 😊

NurseAimz18

I am enjoying this book so much. This is really different from others I have been reading. I can’t wait for an update. Do you have any other books like this?

jackie c

when is the next update? I'm dying to continue reading this story. thanks author!

cait

I love the book so far. Can't wait to read on.

Amanda Steel

Dear readers, First and foremost I want to thank you all for showing me your support and I apologize for the errors due the grammar as it is being edited and will be corrected soon as possible. Please be patient a little but I'll try to fix them soon as possible. I appreciate your comments and pointers and hope that you all still enjoy the story as it goes. Thank you all for understanding and wish you all a wonderful day ❤

ashley greene

i just finished the last chapter 😭😭😭😭😭 when will you update again? please say soon!!!!

Reader-781148

I love this story please keep updating as soon as you can. Looking forward to the next chapter

Mira El Saleh

Dear Amanda, I am sure you will try ur best to edit your grammatical errors, but if u need any help proofreading I would be happy to assist.

Jennifer Christensen

I haven't begun to read this yet, however on the blurb for the book is, "Girls lay under his feet as he is very know as a player.". I'm guessing the author meant known as a player, but whether it is or not, I'd love to see the author edit this so it is corrected. I love to read and I am an extremely voracious reader, often reading up to a book a day, however, and read ARCs and Beta for many authors. I don't know if I key on errors due to being an ARC & Beta reader or if it just happens to be a personal pet peeves, however, of I was the author I'd want to know errors to found by readers in my work, to give me an opportunity to correct them.

Amanda Caruana

this is SO good!! like nothing I've read so far. can't wait to see where this book goes