Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
Esther Bacolado
the writer asked if I could like check it out and gosh I'm glad I did first few chaps made me go like wow 😁😁
09/04/2023 07:02Ayesha Ahmed
So far so good👍
09/04/2023 07:02YoungboySuckedMyToes
I like this
09/04/2023 07:02
KomadoDuh
this is actually good! thank you for recommending it editor!
09/04/2023 07:02
mochangchang
" Submission to larger predators was how the weaker survived in our world " i really like this line!!!
09/04/2023 07:02
Hussaina Murtaza
It is an awsome story. It is lyk every new unfolding page, gives it a new flavour, a new bash of spices. Once I started reading this story I found me fingers and eyes both disobey me when I thought it was enough reading for now!!!!!
09/04/2023 07:02
AstarteLor
That was an abrupt ending! lol. Enjoyed the story overall!
09/04/2023 07:02La'Naya Simmons
it's really amazing I can't wait to read more
09/04/2023 07:02
Anonymous122005
The story is really quite interesting and fascinating to read, and I've read quite few chapters, they're very good and the stories flows are very awesome. I love it. Keep up the good work, I'll always support. 😊❤
09/04/2023 07:02
Alyssa Uricek
I’m very glad I was recommended this book it is something I like to read all the time and I will probably recommend it to my friends
09/04/2023 07:02
Dreanagurl246 Dreanagurl246
I truly enjoyed the story! The friendship between Ember and Ian is wonderful. I imagine this is not the first time Ian has gotten them into a situation😄😄😄. It seems like Kane is regretting his initial decision of rejecting Ember. It's gonna be an interesting ride. I remember having a crush on someone in school. When he found out it was not pretty. As it turns out, it was a good thing that he didn't return my feelings. He's in jail now for DV. Grammatical errors aside, your writing style is clear and the momentum is building nicely. I hope there are some answers to why Kane behaved in the manner he chose and why he changed. Does he actually want Ember or just the pull of being mated? Thank you for the suggestion/invite.
09/04/2023 07:02Faithlyn Bowers
this book is really good I love it!!
09/04/2023 07:02exou isa
hi 👋nice story 😁
09/04/2023 07:02GAMBA
Really Good So far thank you for recommended me this I hope to read more as I read further along
09/04/2023 07:02Shae Bae
The editor recommend this book to me and I have to say it is an amazing story thank you so much for sharing this with me. 🤩🤩
09/04/2023 07:02Mac Rogers
I should thank one of the coauthors for suggesting this book. The descriptions are very detailed, which is great. Also I like how her faerie friend was introduced
09/04/2023 07:02Megan Smerf
This story is really interesting and pulls you in as you read along. I don't really read many stories like this so from reading part of it, i found myself actually enjoying it. i would totally recommend it to any of my friends. I'm thankful to the writer and editor who recommended this lovely story to me. keep up the hard work on this story and any of your other works.
09/04/2023 07:02
lilgxthshawty
I find the book interesting, especially since I’m an old writer in hiding. I’ll definitely read more !!!! highly recommend this book
09/04/2023 07:02
Rose lover
As I review I like to review piece by piece so I don't leave any critic out. I really enjoyed this prologe. The writing is clean and detailed and the explanation of how wolves act was just as good. But if I can give some critic. I was confused if the protagonist was female untill she met her mate. I also feel it needed a bit more intensidy when her Mate rejected her. But other wise great prologue. I'm intrigued. 🌹
09/04/2023 07:02
Sarah b
I really like how well written and paced this book is. It really takes the werewolf genre to a new and fresh side. I would recommend this book all the way! 🙂
09/04/2023 07:02
greengreen194
I usually don’t read books like this but I liked this one. I enjoyed the chapters that I read and thought the writing was good. The plot seems interesting and was good. Thank you for the recommendation.
09/04/2023 07:02Elise Bota
I got a small sample to review and I think is really interesting and enjoyable to read
09/04/2023 07:02EchoingSilence
Amazing story so far from what I've read! Thank you for reaching out to me. Definitely gonna have to read more of it.
09/04/2023 07:02Obrien Odri
I really loved your story🤗🤗 Keep going the good work.
09/04/2023 07:02nashaly rivera
Of what i have read so far im liking it its something i would read more than two times thats how good it is
09/04/2023 07:02Crazy Potato612
This is just the first chapter, and I'm honestly very into it so far. It's well written, I already like the main character, have I feel in love with this book by the first chapter? Yup. Do I mind? Not at all ❤
09/04/2023 07:02
SaphiraLilithMajesty
Wait wait wait... what?! HE doesnt want HER?! DX
09/04/2023 07:02Sailor Harmony
wow so amazing 😍
09/04/2023 07:02
Rowena Koisen
Very recommended story. I don't see any mistakes or misspellings so far and i think its a great story. The storyline is very interesting and intriguing(is that the same thing??).This story definitely gets a yes from me. Good job writing.👍👍👍
09/04/2023 07:02
wonderland girl
I found about this on watt, thanks whoever sent me it to messages, its amazing <3
09/04/2023 07:02Amina Lopez
I read a few of the chapters so far and I really like it 🙂 as of now my favorite character is Ian ♥️
09/04/2023 07:02
NuGgEt666
HEEEEELLO!its me(Viv-draws)from Wattpad!I have to say I LOVE this story!thank u for pointing this book out!i love how easy it is to get hooked and the flow of the book! have a good day!;)
09/04/2023 07:02Syb
This is a great story. Glad I gave it a read. ❤️
09/04/2023 07:02HANIYA NAVEED
honestly this story is soooo good. The author recommended me the story through wp and i don't regret coming here to read this. The plot is showcased in a very great way which doesn't make the reader loose interest in the story. I am looking forward to the more chapters that I still have to read. Keep working hard author-nim.
09/04/2023 07:02Taylor Snow
🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩
09/04/2023 07:02
Tjess
I got asked to read and write a review about this story. so, actually I don't really read story with this kind of genre, but when I read this story it's really interesting and the plot is great too. good job author
09/04/2023 07:02
Shinha0SuccubusGirl
how do you expect me to review this if I’m broke man?
09/04/2023 07:02Blue Knight
The plot is very interesting 😋. I am really eager to complete all the chapters at once. 😁😅
09/04/2023 07:02
Liv Steventon
this is so good already! I like that you've clearly done a lot of world building and the characters have been established nicely! the ONLY thing I'd change is the use of "orbs" to describe eyes - there are plenty of other synonyms to consider; apart from that everything else is well written and I can't wait to dive deeper 😁
09/04/2023 07:02
Tres Maria
still reading-completely love the story! keep making amazing stories thus of course try some other genres✨💖stay safe and love lots!
09/04/2023 07:02Lorna Hayes
I really like this book. like really like it. wow
09/04/2023 07:02
Catsarealiquid
Very compelling only read the first couple of chapter and am already hooked! The story flows perfectly add in the characters and the book grabs you and drags you in.
09/04/2023 07:02Complete._. wreck
Glad I came and started to read the rest! this is really good 😊
09/04/2023 07:02
Janet
It's a good story thank you for suggested me to read this ... And I appreciate your work .. keep it up
09/04/2023 07:02WolfDemon777
excuse me WHAT?
09/04/2023 07:02Shinha0SuccubusGirl
Definietly very interesting. Plus your grammar is really good compared to a lot of stories I’ve read.
09/04/2023 07:02WolfDemon777
I feel bad for the ground that supports the troll
09/04/2023 07:02Trisha Yadav
I love this book and so happy I agreed to read it. 😀😁😍
09/04/2023 07:02Shreya Sapkota
omgg allll thanks to the writer that she recommended me this book. 2 chapters in and im HOOOOKED. Its super entertaining and enjoyable the story is going soooo well that I don’t think im gonna sleep today lol. Recently, i’ve been a lottt into such stories and was searching for a good one. kudos to the writer. Can’t wait to read more. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:02Alicia Reddington
I like this story
09/04/2023 07:02
Keristin Lay
I really enjoy reading this story. Thanks for the recommendation.😆😆
09/04/2023 07:02Alessandra Rosales
It's very different I just hope she won't go back to the one who rejected her but All in all a well written book that I look forward in supporting
09/04/2023 07:02
nati barrera
I started readin' today 3 chapters, and I am absolutely lovin' it!! The plot is really interesting even do havent finished it the story yet. But it's absolutely a catch! Really good writing skills. People that love werewolf stories and others in general should totally read it!! I am goin' to end the story in some time and I'll write another review. Awesome work!!
09/04/2023 07:02WolfDemon777
Ian is such an ass imma kill him XD
09/04/2023 07:02Emilia Severus Snape
I haven't completed this story yet, but it's one of the most interesting paranormals I've ever read. Big thanks to the author for recommending this to me, I'm glad I found this story. Most werewolf stories I've read start getting cheesy after a few chapters, but this one is just as interesting as it was when I started it. Thank you for giving us this masterpiece.
09/04/2023 07:02
Gloria Offodile
I really love the book. I'm glad the author recommended it.
09/04/2023 07:02hEy sTaWp iT
i would have changed schools problem sloved.
09/04/2023 07:02Janera Windham
I can’t wait to read this 😊 the author of the book gave me a little snippet of what’s it’s about. so far I like it
09/04/2023 07:02Cassie Ofthedeep
This is amazing. I thought I wasn't into supernatural books but this is pretty dope.
09/04/2023 07:02WolfDemon777
holy-
09/04/2023 07:02
gaeafarrah
I’m so hooked!!! first few chapters made me crave to read for more and unravel why the hell kade was so hostile & unsympathetic! my feminist self was so livid whenever he’s acting up! but yeah, I think it was all part of building up his character. Ember was pictured soft & submissive & I’m truly devastated whenever she’s sad 😞 I like the way how the story come up with different fictional characters like for example the fairies and trolls, it was like the shadowhunter series minus the trolls lol with all the magic and supernatural stuff going on. All in all it was superb and very breathtaking! Can’t get enough!
09/04/2023 07:02
Rania styless
I love this!
09/04/2023 07:02
ThatisRelateable
This is amazing!
09/04/2023 07:02gaeafarrah
I’m so hooked!!! first few chapters made me crave to read for more and unravel why the hell kade was so hostile & unsympathetic! my feminist self was so livid whenever he’s acting up! but yeah, I think it was all part of building up his character. Ember was pictured soft & submissive & I’m truly devastated whenever she’s sad 😞 I like the way how the story come up with different fictional characters like for example the fairies and trolls, it was like the shadowhunter series minus the trolls lol with all the magic and supernatural stuff going on. All in all it was superb and very breathtaking! Can’t get enough! hoping that more readers can appreciate this! 💘💘💘
09/04/2023 07:02
OMI-OMI-KUN
The Author recommended the story for me and I like the plot and the story is super entertaining!
09/04/2023 07:02
YuukiBear
i found this book when then writed asked if i would check it out. honestly this story is so good, i've only read a few chapters so far and i'm glad i said yes to check it out. The character development is very cool, i just can't stop reading because the story is full of action and excitement that i love.
09/04/2023 07:02Clariose_
first time reading this, it’s actually good and really have a nice plot, I enjoyed reading the prologue :)
09/04/2023 07:02Chawa💕
Awesome!!! just checked it out and it has me glued to my phone screen!!!
09/04/2023 07:02WolfDemon777
why are guy bullies never ugly? seriously
09/04/2023 07:02Kaz
Absolutely amazing read! Couldn't put it down till I'd finished it! So captivating and enjoyable! Look forward to more reads from this author!
09/04/2023 07:02LaToya Harrison
very well written. I will share
09/04/2023 07:02
Eva Ikášová
Honestly, this was one of the best stories I've ever read. I really enjoyed reading, and if a book was published, I would definitely have it in my library. Good job and I look forward to more stories. 🥰
09/04/2023 07:02WolfDemon777
I like this Ian guy XD
09/04/2023 07:02
Leana Davis
I think this book is really different than other stories I have read, it pores more into the supernatural topic
09/04/2023 07:02Martina Gargani
love it
09/04/2023 07:02WolfDemon777
atta girl. lying is very easy to me
09/04/2023 07:02
Naya Clark
I love this story they did a great job on it and it’s very eye catching and intriguing
09/04/2023 07:02
Em_ma Sanchez
I love it, I'm not done and already I have enjoyed reading the first few chapters. I thank the author for showing me they're book, I can't wait to read the rest.
09/04/2023 07:02Q Meggs
She’s being VERY naive and WAY too trusting 😒
09/04/2023 07:02Monique Robinson
it's a really great book
09/04/2023 07:02super black wolf97
I like it......
09/04/2023 07:02
SweetPea
it's amazing
09/04/2023 07:02Brinley Woodall
Wow! This book is GREAT!
09/04/2023 07:02YuukiBear
Saya menemukan buku ini ketika ditulis bertanya apakah saya akan memeriksanya. sejujurnya cerita ini sangat bagus, sejauh ini saya hanya membaca beberapa bab dan saya senang saya mengatakan ya untuk memeriksanya. Perkembangan karakternya sangat keren, saya tidak bisa berhenti membaca karena ceritanya penuh dengan aksi dan keseruan yang saya suka.
09/04/2023 07:02MJ2601 M.Y
Its different and refreshing.
09/04/2023 07:02
Geetaanjali Hatle
I am really looking forward to this story
09/04/2023 07:02
jaber jaws
this a-hole
09/04/2023 07:02
aradzy
Thank you so much for reconmending your book!! xx
09/04/2023 07:02Monifah
I can already tell this is going to be good
09/04/2023 07:02
Piper Procanin
hey it’s piper , and I just wanted to say this story is fantastic! it’s literally the best . plz continue doing stories like this !!
09/04/2023 07:02
ash
gets a little confusing when they do flashbacks
09/04/2023 07:02Kriti Maurya
amazing story...thanks to the editor for recommending the book.
09/04/2023 07:02
kan.
i found this book because the writer recommended this to me, and i'm so glad to read this book. i just already read a few chapter and i know this story is amazing😃😃👍👍👍👍💖💖
09/04/2023 07:02Fatin Nabilah Azmi
good book ❤. thank you for recommend.
09/04/2023 07:02Rani Animations
I really like this story! It’s well written, has a good storyline, and, all in all, has me captivated from the first chapter. The whole story just works like a well oiled machine, and those little details that seem useless at the time come into play later on!
09/04/2023 07:02Jason-Derulo
The writer contacted me for some advice and I fell in love. The way the detailed are described sucks you in instantly and makes you want to read more. Very well done! 🙌🏼
09/04/2023 07:02Brett Richardson
This story is beautifully done! I am a little upset we didnt get a few more intimate/fights between Ember and Kane, I felt like I needed more when it came to their relationship and it irritated me when it seemed like they were never alone, someone always comes popping out of the woodwork.. I love Ember and the strength within her, and the fact that they end up fighting over who gets to protect whom is just icing on the cake. I'm also shipping Helen and her little protege friend.
09/04/2023 07:02
Muminah Manuel
It's the first chapter and I'm already heartbroken. That's a record. I like this book aready
09/04/2023 07:02shania smith
So glad I said yes to reading this book 😩
09/04/2023 07:02Namaia Rose
you already got me hooked to the story
09/04/2023 07:02
