Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
mariana rosa
This usually isn't my type of story but it sure got my up most attention.
09/04/2023 07:07Maneka Mathews
Why not just reject him? He’s an arse
09/04/2023 07:07chantong nasi
It is great, I love this
09/04/2023 07:07Maneka Mathews
Wait I didn’t read the sinopsis is she a underground fighter?
09/04/2023 07:07
Reader-388256
loving how she is slowly falling for him 😊
09/04/2023 07:07Maneka Mathews
Okay I like the beginning and I’m sure this is going to get real interesting. Somehow Werewolf stories are my new favorite type of read.
09/04/2023 07:07Estelle Houareau
This book is honestly extremely well written. I enjoy it so much I honestly cannot express how good it was. It deserves its recognition. Honestly I’m just happy I got the chance to read it. I genuinely enjoyed it.
09/04/2023 07:07Sans Alhebsi
i love this story so much! it’s so interesting and I can’t stop reading it :’0
09/04/2023 07:07
Miyabookworm
When I read the first few chapters of this story I was ready to give up because Ember seemed like she was a very weak female waiting for the world to rescue her. A couple chapters later and I find this girl is a whole ass kicker albeit she needs a mask to help give her confidence in herself and I was hooked. I love that her character development is a focus in the story seeing as she is a wholly different character at the end of the story than at the beginning, rather than the focus just on her relationship with Kane. There are a few loose ends like her relationship with her mother, do they ever speak again or see each other during pack meetings, what happens with her father, but they could easily be cleared up in a second book, because I'm ready for more.
09/04/2023 07:07Rea Lovrencic
So glad the writers recomended the book. So far it's going great. The plot is interesting and makes you sit at the edge of your seat the whole time. Grammar is good and chapter lenght is optumal. Love how the main character actualy has a backbone and the relationship between them is perfection. Please read the book it is so worth it. :)
09/04/2023 07:07Anne-lise Vilholm
league fan? Darius and Caitlyn was named hmmmm
09/04/2023 07:07
crystal rodriguez
❤️❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:07SS Lea
oh my God I absolutely love it it's amazing I love wild wolves!!!!!🥰🥰🥰🥰 and I love how the plot flows you are an amazing writer thank you for this!!
09/04/2023 07:07Jolina Junio
hello I read your story it's amazing 🙂 keep doing it 😉😊 cool
09/04/2023 07:07Ashlee Wendell
This book is mind blowing. I like the plot twist and turns. It keeps you on eage to see what's going to happen next.
09/04/2023 07:07merveil kankonda
Great storyline. Enjoying it so far.
09/04/2023 07:07
Xx_Yun_ xX
The writer recommended me this story. The whole story is amazing I like the personage
09/04/2023 07:07Shantel Coyugan
I really liked this story even though I only read a few chapters. The protagonist is strong and doesn't back down from a fight. The story is really interesting. Thanks to carlitabrandis for introducing this to me. Really enjoyed it ☺️.
09/04/2023 07:07エンゼル
I really 👍&❤️ the story.
09/04/2023 07:07
Asena Dilsu
I'm so glad the editor of the book contacted me. The book is awesome! I hope you continue!
09/04/2023 07:07
firegirl24
1.) I really like the writing style used in this book. It flows very well and has a wonderful word usage (which I love). It has a way of getting the reader more in depth with the story. And when it comes to a great book, most writers have that struggle. This is one book that I can sense going somewhere unlike most other werewolf books. 2.) The character backgrounds are outstanding and well thought out. 3.) The plot is clear. I don't really like the amount of background in the beginning. I feel like it should be spaced out a little more because when you give up so much background in the beginning it makes it seem like you depend on that for the chapter rather than the actual story arc. That's just my personal prefence as a reader though, many other readers might have an opposing view on that thought. Overall, I'm glad your editor recommended this to me. It's very well thought out and nicely written, Inspires me to get back to my own work and try a bit harder. I look forward to reading the rest and the second book. Hope your days wonderful!!
09/04/2023 07:07Stefani Dimova
It's a really good book!!! I recommend it 100%!!!❤️
09/04/2023 07:07Anarose S. Flores
I really like the way the author describes the scene and the features of the character it was easily to visualize by the readers. As I read some chapters, I got interested because there was something in the story That I want to know more about the protagonist. As a reader, your story captures my attention. The flow of the story was so smooth and captivating. Thumbs up for you! Hope I can read more chapters!!!
09/04/2023 07:07Asena Dilsu
I'm so glad the editor of the book contacted me. The book is awesome! I hope you continue!
09/04/2023 07:07Selvia Nara
good job author good story to tell 👍👍👍👍👍
09/04/2023 07:07
angel madi
this book is amazing 😱 l-
09/04/2023 07:07Shino Inuzuka
well, it's really not a disappointment. this story is good! glad I was recommended to this story 😊
09/04/2023 07:07yvhv57
This was recommended by the writers. It's different and entertaining. Take time to read you'll be glad you did.
09/04/2023 07:07Sings To Stars
honestly so far a good read. Love the plot, however there was not much background in the beginning and I dislike a few characters descriptions in the book. Otherwise a good read.
09/04/2023 07:07
uchizi k chavula
this is interesting, and unexpected..
09/04/2023 07:07Maria Dominguez
I've only read a few chapters and it truly is a story worth reading, I would definitely recommend for others to read.
09/04/2023 07:07
Nicola Maher
This story is Amazing 10/10 recommend. very well built storyline and great descriptions
09/04/2023 07:07Nika Lipiec
I already love this story! The prologue is very addictive. I really like the fact that the book is written in a simple but so direct language that we immediately empathize with the main character's situation and apply everything with her.
09/04/2023 07:07Okami Senpai
the writer asked me to check this out! it’s very good I’m glad it was recommended :)
09/04/2023 07:07
Stela Boce
good recommendation,
09/04/2023 07:07Kristi Hulbert
this really is an excellent read. very different from the usual mated wolves. I hope she rejects him tho.
09/04/2023 07:07
Dream Big
a very nice plot for a warewolf story. Not the typical alpha rejection. Great character development too. Keep it up 😊👍
09/04/2023 07:07Ivett Pinto
"I don't want you" Tell that in a few chapters jerk. I'm really grateful to the editor, this really seems like a hidden gem! Though I'm not really into the dominant and rude ML, I like the writing and I can kind of relate with the protagonist thanks to her way of expressing herself. Also, I'm not a native speaker and I'm just learning, but the flow of the writing is easy to follow and makes me want to keep reading! Really looking forward to marvelous story, I have great expectations on you author-sama! And you're doing really amazingly until now!
09/04/2023 07:07Stela Boce
wonderful story, I like it.
09/04/2023 07:07
Dipuo Shabele
This plot seems rather well thought out this far. I can see how tthe characters may develop and grow from here, it'll be interesting to see to how Kane turns out too, I can imagine a bit of toxicity here and there😏. Let me just keep reading to find out...
09/04/2023 07:07
vjkmendoza
thank you author for inviting me to read your story! i really like how your story goes. keep writing nice stories and more powers for you !!
09/04/2023 07:07
Na Jiel
I'm glad the writer recommended this story to me
09/04/2023 07:07
gem lover2
I love Ian he's so funny and awesome 😍
09/04/2023 07:07Elle Kingsley
Hi author thankyou for letting me checked and read your story
09/04/2023 07:07Jayn Villaruz Metano
I really love how the plot go. And I am excited to read more
09/04/2023 07:07
Sari
wow. i couldn’t help but cackle at the way i was shocked when he kissed her
09/04/2023 07:07
Emma Watson
this story is honestly incredibly amazing and such an enjoyable experience, I reccomend to everyone! its unique and has a warm and inviting type feeling, very well written too! there's humour and relatable characters and the whole story just works together and I hope I can read more eventually.
09/04/2023 07:07XXXYAZUXXX
I really like the book and I can understand why it has gotten this amount success. The first chapter was enough to get me engaged in the story, and I think the writer did a great job in terms of entertainment, character development, and just the plot of the story in general. I recommend this to everyone and I am thankful that the author advised me to read this.
09/04/2023 07:07
Jey Nie
Me imagining this a hollywood movie. Wow. 👌🏻
09/04/2023 07:07Tiffany Carey
Started reading this and it's really well wrote, the story flows togeather very smoothly and your immediately immersed in the story, one of the best I've read in a long time!!
09/04/2023 07:07
Lucy Baston
hehe
09/04/2023 07:07Emma Watson
I was reccomended this by the author and I was skeptical at first but honestly reading this was the best decision I made today by far, it was fantastic and the story is somewhat refreshing from all the others with its unique plott to me, everything works well within the chapters and its easy to follow along, it makes sense and has great grammar too. you can really feel the emotions from each characters thoughts and speach and that's something I most loved. its 100% worth your time to give this a shot, you won't be disappointed I promise!
09/04/2023 07:07Jey Nie
Me having a feeling of excitement while continuing reading this. 👌🏻
09/04/2023 07:07Sari
spain but without the s 🤧🤚🏾
09/04/2023 07:07Jey Nie
This is interesting. 👌🏻
09/04/2023 07:07
orin g
what an amazing book.... i realy love this story...
09/04/2023 07:07
deerwolf1234
This is interesting
09/04/2023 07:07Sari
whhoh
09/04/2023 07:07Aeri bree
finally I'm here reading this❤️
09/04/2023 07:07Sari
oh wow i love my heart 🤧
09/04/2023 07:07
Piyu
I am thankful to the person who recommended me this story. very intresting story with different concept.
09/04/2023 07:07Brittany Rushworth
Really well written. Equally strong male and female leads. Like the fact that it isn't the typical damsel in distress type werewolf story. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
09/04/2023 07:07Reader-528516
Thanks to the writer who recommended me to read this story because I really liked it, it has an amazing plot that has been developed well
09/04/2023 07:07
CitrusSlayer
bro I’m so glad I said yes this is so good
09/04/2023 07:07
Alyssa Rodriguez
I usually don’t go for books that aren’t about a movie or show but this is an amazing book and I can’t wait to finish it, I enjoy it very much and it’s so entertaining it literally the best I recommend you read it. You won’t regret it.
09/04/2023 07:07Sari
AHHHHHHH IM SHRIEKING 😭😭😭😭
09/04/2023 07:07
aleskandraa
i actually got this book recommend by the writer and i actually love it soo much, and it has an amazing storyline
09/04/2023 07:07Ciccone Tucker
she’s just so dramatic!!!! lol
09/04/2023 07:07Piyu
Intresting Starting of story is very strong and it make curious to know about it's further part.
09/04/2023 07:07Sari
i love this story omfg😭😭
09/04/2023 07:07Kaylin Joye
maannnn so well written but all that for it to just end like that. I'm left feeling a little dissatisfied. it wasnt enough closure between the two and what ever happened with Asters brother?? I hope there is a second book
09/04/2023 07:07Karishma Chavan
i have enjoyed reading this story....verywelldone..to writer and editor of this story
09/04/2023 07:07
Animesimper
ok girly Im here and she didn’t cut the cameras 😭😭😭 Im upset now he’s mad rude I don’t like dat 😭😭😭
09/04/2023 07:07
ziada adonis
I am so glad the writer recommended this story to me what a privilege it is to read such a fantastic story.It caught my attention from the very first chapter I’d decently recommend this book to people I know
09/04/2023 07:07teeth
beautiful
09/04/2023 07:07
Natasha Njobvu
I really love the story, it's just so indulging and interesting. I only read a few chapters of it and I have a feeling I'm going to love it even more as I continue to read it😄
09/04/2023 07:07Krishnaa Selvaraju
Okay Quick question is ember a girl or a guy?
09/04/2023 07:07Sari
wow
09/04/2023 07:07
Jamelia Cleaver
I found this book a very good read. I just felt that although it incorporates more of the supernatural world or fictional world the main character was to predictable with returning to her mate. It reads like all the other werewolf books, and though it excites you, at the end you feel as if the whole time the book was missing something more. So I will give this book 3 Stars.
09/04/2023 07:07
Preeti Renee
Its awesome
09/04/2023 07:07Sari
speechless
09/04/2023 07:07
Rei-Tokonova
hello my friend I love the story
09/04/2023 07:07
jungkooks_flee
Wow its a great story im just really use to wp writings so this is really new to me i got some sample chapters to i thought it was good so i checked it out i dont regret i thing its really good over all
09/04/2023 07:07Kayla Sangster 64
i'm so glad the writer told me about this because it's amazing, it it flows really well
09/04/2023 07:07Mallika Mohandas
awesome work
09/04/2023 07:07Maria Gracia Torreverde
I was asked from the author to kindly checked her work. And I am glad that I did. I found on the few chapters that story very good and promising. I know I am going to love it. and I already love Ember.😊
09/04/2023 07:07Sushil Godara
I Loved the book , the story is very engaging and the author has amazing storytelling skills. The characters are interesting and relatable. I am glad that I came across such a wonderful book and I really recommend it to readers who are interested in fantasy genre. It's such a great book and should be appreciated by many.
09/04/2023 07:07
Nova_lilly-95
I found out about this when the author contacted me on wattpad. I am really glad the author got in contact with me ad I am really enjoying the story so far, I love how each chapter flow into each other and that it keeps it you engage and entertain.
09/04/2023 07:07
Mitarashi8899
Kane Wilder used black khaki, white t-shirt and sneaker and I thing about Harry style 😁 Hello i am from watty, thank you for recommend this good story.
09/04/2023 07:07Neon Pink Flame
the writer recommended it to me too and I haven't read to much but right away it captures your interest and it does flow very nicely I am very picky when it comes to reading and this is perfect for me lol
09/04/2023 07:07jungkooks_flee
Wow this is actually a great quality book i like this
09/04/2023 07:06Reader-418711
excited to read!
09/04/2023 07:06
Shequina Shane Z. Fetalcurin
someone recommend this story and yeah I liked it
09/04/2023 07:06
Meickhe Fortuin
This book was recommended to me and I was skeptical at first as I am not a fan of werewolf/vampire stories but when I started reading, I could NOT stop. I love this so much and I'm so glad I read it!
09/04/2023 07:06yohi love
so Ian is a troll?
09/04/2023 07:06GRBOY
the editor recommended this book via wp and im glad that i could read this! the characters are so attractive and actually this is my first warewolf story but after reading the first chapter im so digged in. i loved it. so amazing and potential writer you are!
09/04/2023 07:06
Yemisrach Miheret
I found out about this book through the editor. I only got to read a few chapters but it was enjoyable. I love how the characters are portrayed. The plot is really nice and cool. I got to say the author is creative.
09/04/2023 07:06Carol Aruna 5009
I'm grateful to you for sending me the link of this book. This piece of art was mind blowing and I loved it...Thank you author nim ❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:06delacyer _
Hello!! The story is amazing and I'm in love with it...Thank you author for telling me to check it out...🥰🥰
09/04/2023 07:06Rachelle Kim
It's so nice!! I love It!✨💕!
09/04/2023 07:06
