V for Virgin! Comments
Visitor
this is quite interesting
08/01/2025 19:34Visitor
I’m enjoying every chapter more and more
07/23/2025 03:48Visitor
really good
07/22/2025 12:21Visitor
love this book !
07/19/2025 05:04Visitor
really enjoyed this book and couldn’t put it down. however the ending I didn’t like @ chapter 126. I’m hoping that more will be out as it felt like it just stopped in the middle
07/12/2025 18:45Visitor
lovely writing
07/07/2025 10:31Visitor
great book. exciting and fun to read I can’t put it down
07/02/2025 13:07Katie Burt
this is such an amazing and erotic book! I love it so much
07/01/2025 00:19Visitor
love this !!!
06/30/2025 21:28Visitor
the fact they all love each other is just perfect for me
06/28/2025 00:46Zoey Fontenot
I loved it
06/27/2025 03:06Visitor
I love that shes safe losing her v with her best friend and theyre okay with it
06/26/2025 08:59Kita Smith
this book is so good. I didn’t expect this but I just can’t stop reading it.
06/24/2025 21:19Visitor
the character is quirky
06/24/2025 03:37Visitor
After you get past the awkwardness in the beginning the spicy scenes are really good.
06/24/2025 03:28Visitor
It’s sooooo good! I can’t get enough! I’ve never been so intrigues
06/22/2025 22:11Reader-596580
I love the writing and the character dynamics of the story. it’s intense, but in the best ways.
06/22/2025 05:12Reader-304842
I hope there’s a sequel. I really like this book.
06/22/2025 01:21Visitor
I'm just getting into this book and its pulling me in quickly!
06/18/2025 03:33KS
is there a sequel?
06/14/2025 12:38Visitor
it just abruptly ended. not cool.
06/13/2025 16:22Visitor
is there going to be more added or another book?
06/13/2025 08:21Visitor
i usually bud out with spicy stories but this one keeps me turning pages over and over🤤
06/12/2025 22:45Visitor
great book so far
06/11/2025 01:27user2505185191
Great read, love, sex, passion and care. love it
06/10/2025 23:42Visitor
The book is great so far! I hope to see more in the future!
06/10/2025 17:58igobyunknown
Are you going to finish the book. I’m so ready for more
06/10/2025 00:11Visitor
I am addicted
06/10/2025 00:10user2503157507
just started reading and outside of the repeating I'm hooked
06/09/2025 07:46Tasha Corbett
why for the audio book ch 40 and 42 are the same chapter?
06/06/2025 17:27Visitor
I am addicted! I love this storyline. It could have more details but im really not complaining that it got straight to the point. so far im all in.
06/06/2025 05:50Visitor
I love the dynamic. I wish we would’ve gotten so background or built up to the sexual part.
06/06/2025 03:03Visitor
very different. great read so far
06/05/2025 14:55Visitatore
i love it
06/04/2025 10:24Visitor
I can’t wait to keep reading!
06/04/2025 06:45Visitor
can’t wait to continue reading it
06/04/2025 05:21Visitor
can’t wait to keep reading
06/04/2025 03:33Tasha Corbett
I love it so much I can’t wait to keep reading
06/03/2025 22:42Visitor
I like it so far but to much playing and not a lot of touch groping and foreplay
06/03/2025 20:18Visitor
When it starts getting interesting I buy unlimited weekly just to see i this story wasn't finished or going be updated so bummed.....
06/02/2025 10:49Carol Gilmore
talent and could be successful but know has lost so many fans
05/31/2025 15:28Carol Gilmore
this was one of the best books I had read till I got to the ending ... we hy does someone whol wants to write do this. I h a list of authors wh
05/31/2025 15:23Visitor
is it on published anywhere?
05/21/2025 15:19Kursten Ann Talley
I’m sad the author seems to have abandoned this story which is a shame because it started out so good, just a few errors here and there but still really good but by the end it’s so jumbled it’s hard to figure out what was trying to be said except for the different point of view ones those were pretty much the same as the beginning and honestly should have been put after the chapter they go with. I’m still going to keep it in my library though in hopes that the author dose come back to it,because it has so much potential and I really did enjoy reading it
05/10/2025 13:15Reader-508976
it is so annoying to read an unfinished book. don’t label it completed when it‘s not. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
04/29/2025 13:58user2504233516
nooo I need more. do they wait for him? what happens when he gets back? so much left unanswered
04/27/2025 04:17Tazmania611
Please, please, please, finish this book! It’s so good and you are really talented! it’s so sad that it just ends so abruptly with no actual ending. This has been my favorite read on here so far!
04/25/2025 00:06Cristina Mendoza
please move on to the rest of the rest of the story. I will not be reading anymore. it’s unfortunate, you’ve outdone yourself. the plot is great, the characters are well written and to be honest, you should pursue big time writing!
04/19/2025 03:05Britt-c
this book has potential. I dislike that the author has so many versions, why not just stick to one. It causes confusion which I dislike. I hope they continue on with this story, it’s good and like I said it has potential.
04/18/2025 16:11Visitor
so like are you going to writing another book or something because the way you have it ending isn’t a ending especially with all the edits
04/17/2025 22:26Visitor
okay I’m still confused did the book officially end at insemination part 2 . And then it went back to the second draft of where they had that fight and Seth was ready to leave . There were two other chapters but then it looks like they got removed . It’s not a bad story I’m not sure about the ending though . It would be nice if the author had just did all the second drafts together after the first one that would make it easier.
04/17/2025 02:00K H
I like the story and the plot seems interesting but it's so very confusing to read with all the 'drafts' it honestly gave me a headache. I wish the author would pick one and stick to it instead of the chapters bouncing all over the place.
09/05/2023 05:34Love1419
I don’t understand the different drafts. it’s making it so hard to read. Personally I like the first draft or second draft. see I’m confused now. the draft that doesn’t have all the extra details.
09/04/2023 11:33Book with Luv
Hey can you help me please? I really need to know how can I be a signed writer. I hope you will help me
09/04/2023 07:18Cait Fore
It's a good read and well written. However it's so difficult to follow with the chapters mixed up. Maybe keeping them all in order with the second drafts after the completion of the story?
09/04/2023 07:12Kalista Sanders
I'm liking this story but it's hard to follow because of the way you formatted the "edits" maybe taking it down and only putting up your most recent edit in chronological order without all the other edit versions included would make this reading experience more enjoyable and a lot smoother for your followers
09/04/2023 07:08Fiona Wright
huh. interesting
09/04/2023 07:00Wendy Syri
Okay, so she wants to loose her virginity, but she’s giving blow jobs instead?? You want to have sex with your gay best friend, but you don’t even know how to go after what you want. she’s basically like a blow up doll just waiting for something to happen. She doesn’t even know how to grow or feel a man up...any virgin could do that. Ethan becomes a complete virgin who doesn’t know what to do either. Seth is the main attraction. The puppet master, pulling both of their strings. Without him, this story would be soo boring.
09/04/2023 06:59Wendy Syri
this would be better if the chps weren’t all over the place and repeating more than once in all the edited chps.
09/04/2023 06:59Emily Brooks
I'm ready 👀👀
09/04/2023 06:58HoneyToast Bunny
is Artifical insemination 2/2 the last chapter ever?
09/04/2023 06:58Malond Ray
I'm so ready to read more
09/04/2023 06:57Esther*
so sexyyyyyy! wonderful description! totally got me there I wish I’m this girl ! 🥰🤪
09/04/2023 06:56HoneyToast Bunny
This book is so jumbled it’s hard to read😭 I don’t know which chapters I’m supposed to read and in what order 😩😒
09/04/2023 06:55Kaitlyn Buckley
is this book good
09/04/2023 06:55