V for Virgin! Comments

  • Reader-508976

    it is so annoying to read an unfinished book. don’t label it completed when it‘s not. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

    04/29/2025 13:58

  • user2504233516

    nooo I need more. do they wait for him? what happens when he gets back? so much left unanswered

    04/27/2025 04:17

  • Tazmania611

    Please, please, please, finish this book! It’s so good and you are really talented! it’s so sad that it just ends so abruptly with no actual ending. This has been my favorite read on here so far!

    04/25/2025 00:06

  • Cristina Mendoza

    please move on to the rest of the rest of the story. I will not be reading anymore. it’s unfortunate, you’ve outdone yourself. the plot is great, the characters are well written and to be honest, you should pursue big time writing!

    04/19/2025 03:05

  • Britt-c

    this book has potential. I dislike that the author has so many versions, why not just stick to one. It causes confusion which I dislike. I hope they continue on with this story, it’s good and like I said it has potential.

    04/18/2025 16:11

  • Visitor

    so like are you going to writing another book or something because the way you have it ending isn’t a ending especially with all the edits

    04/17/2025 22:26

  • Visitor

    okay I’m still confused did the book officially end at insemination part 2 . And then it went back to the second draft of where they had that fight and Seth was ready to leave . There were two other chapters but then it looks like they got removed . It’s not a bad story I’m not sure about the ending though . It would be nice if the author had just did all the second drafts together after the first one that would make it easier.

    04/17/2025 02:00

  • K H

    I like the story and the plot seems interesting but it's so very confusing to read with all the 'drafts' it honestly gave me a headache. I wish the author would pick one and stick to it instead of the chapters bouncing all over the place.

    09/05/2023 05:34

  • Love1419

    I don’t understand the different drafts. it’s making it so hard to read. Personally I like the first draft or second draft. see I’m confused now. the draft that doesn’t have all the extra details.

    09/04/2023 11:33

  • Book with Luv

    Hey can you help me please? I really need to know how can I be a signed writer. I hope you will help me

    09/04/2023 07:18

  • Cait Fore

    It's a good read and well written. However it's so difficult to follow with the chapters mixed up. Maybe keeping them all in order with the second drafts after the completion of the story?

    09/04/2023 07:12

  • Kalista Sanders

    I'm liking this story but it's hard to follow because of the way you formatted the "edits" maybe taking it down and only putting up your most recent edit in chronological order without all the other edit versions included would make this reading experience more enjoyable and a lot smoother for your followers

    09/04/2023 07:08

  • Fiona Wright

    huh. interesting

    09/04/2023 07:00

  • Wendy Syri

    Okay, so she wants to loose her virginity, but she’s giving blow jobs instead?? You want to have sex with your gay best friend, but you don’t even know how to go after what you want. she’s basically like a blow up doll just waiting for something to happen. She doesn’t even know how to grow or feel a man up...any virgin could do that. Ethan becomes a complete virgin who doesn’t know what to do either. Seth is the main attraction. The puppet master, pulling both of their strings. Without him, this story would be soo boring.

    09/04/2023 06:59

  • Wendy Syri

    this would be better if the chps weren’t all over the place and repeating more than once in all the edited chps.

    09/04/2023 06:59

  • Emily Brooks

    I'm ready 👀👀

    09/04/2023 06:58

  • HoneyToast Bunny

    is Artifical insemination 2/2 the last chapter ever?

    09/04/2023 06:58

  • Malond Ray

    I'm so ready to read more

    09/04/2023 06:57

  • Esther*

    so sexyyyyyy! wonderful description! totally got me there I wish I’m this girl ! 🥰🤪

    09/04/2023 06:56

  • HoneyToast Bunny

    This book is so jumbled it’s hard to read😭 I don’t know which chapters I’m supposed to read and in what order 😩😒

    09/04/2023 06:55

  • Kaitlyn Buckley

    is this book good

    09/04/2023 06:55