Chapter 3: Revelation
That evening, against Sage's protests and my own better judgment, I went to meet whoever had sent me a text message claiming to be Sarah Chen.
The message had arrived that afternoon: "Meet me at the mine shaft tonight. Come alone. I have something to show you about the real Spring Water."
I brought every piece of recording equipment I owned, determined to capture evidence that couldn't be erased or explained away. If Spring Water was running an elaborate supernatural hoax, I wanted documentation from every possible angle.
The mine shaft looked different at night. The rusted barriers seemed less substantial, and the darkness beyond felt alive with movement and whispered conversation. I set up cameras at multiple angles and activated all recording modes—visual, infrared, audio enhancement.
At exactly midnight, she appeared.
Sarah Chen walked out of the mine shaft like she was emerging from a building rather than a collapsed tunnel system. She looked exactly like her missing persons photo—Asian-American, late twenties, wearing hiking clothes and carrying professional camera equipment.
Except she was translucent, visible but not quite solid, and she moved without making any sound.
"You came," she said, her voice distant but clear. "I wasn't sure you would."
"Are you really Sarah Chen?"
"I'm what's left of her. What Spring Water kept when it took the rest."
I checked my camera displays. All of them showed Sarah clearly, from multiple angles and recording modes. Whatever was happening, it was consistent across all my equipment.
"What happened to you?"
"The same thing that's happening to you. I came to Spring Water looking for supernatural explanations. I found them, but by then it was too late to leave."
"Too late how?"
Sarah gestured toward the mine shaft behind her. "The town doesn't just trap people physically. It feeds on their life force, their memories, their connections to the outside world. The longer you stay, the less of yourself remains."
"That's impossible."
"Is it? You've been here three days, and already your evidence is disappearing. Your car was sabotaged. Your phone service cut off. How much longer before your memories start changing? Before you forget why you came here?"
I thought about the footage that had vanished from my cameras, the way other visitors seemed resigned to their permanent residence in Spring Water. How long had it taken them to stop trying to escape?
"What do you want from me?"
"I want you to do what I couldn't. Get out of Spring Water, and take the truth with you."
Sarah pulled a small device from her camera bag—a backup hard drive, the kind photographers use to store important files.
"Everything I discovered about Spring Water is on here. The real history, the pattern of disappearances, the thing that lives beneath the town and feeds on trapped souls."
I took the device, noting that it felt solid and real despite Sarah's ghostly appearance.
"Why can't you leave yourself?"
"Because I'm already dead. My body died of heat stroke three years ago, just like Sheriff Henley told you. But my consciousness, my memories, my unfinished work—Spring Water kept all of that. I exist now as a warning to others."
"A warning about what?"
"About the choice you're going to have to make. Stay in Spring Water and become part of its collection, or find a way to break free and lose everything you've found here."
"Everything I've found here?"
Sarah smiled sadly. "Sage Morrison is a good person, Fern. She's been trapped here longer than anyone, but she's never given up hope. She's been waiting for someone strong enough to help her escape."
"You know about Sage?"
"I know that love might be the only thing powerful enough to break Spring Water's hold. But only if you're willing to risk everything for it."
Before I could ask more questions, Sarah began to fade. "Remember—the choice isn't whether to stay or go. The choice is whether to fight or surrender."
She vanished completely, leaving me alone with her hard drive and more questions than ever.
When I got back to the inn, I found Sage waiting in the lobby. She was holding two coffee cups and wearing an expression of determined resolve.
"Did you find what you were looking for?" she asked.
"I found Sarah Chen. Or what's left of her."
"And?"
I held up the hard drive. "I found evidence. Real evidence that can't be erased or explained away."
"What are you going to do with it?"
"I'm going to find a way out of Spring Water. And I want you to come with me."
Sage set down the coffee cups and looked at me with eyes that held years of suppressed hope.
"Fern, I need to tell you something. I've been in Spring Water for fifteen years, not eight like I claimed. I came here when I was nineteen, running from parents who disowned me for being gay. At first, it felt like sanctuary."
"What changed?"
"I tried to leave. Many times. But every time I reached the edge of town, something would happen. Car trouble, sudden emergencies, reasons to turn back. Eventually, I stopped trying and convinced myself I was happy here."
"And now?"
"Now there's someone worth trying again for."
I reached for her hand, and she didn't pull away. Her fingers were warm and real and completely human—everything Spring Water's supernatural residents were not.
"Sage, I think I'm falling in love with you. I know that's crazy, given that we've only known each other for three days and we're trapped in a supernatural desert town that feeds on human souls."
She laughed, the first genuinely happy sound I'd heard since arriving in Spring Water.
"It's not crazy," she said. "It's the sanest thing that's happened to me in fifteen years."
We spent the rest of the night reviewing Sarah Chen's files and planning our escape. The evidence she'd collected was extensive and compelling—documentation of the town's supernatural nature, maps of the underground spring system, and most importantly, a theory about how to break free.
According to Sarah's research, Spring Water's power came from isolation and despair. It fed on people who had nowhere else to go, nothing left to lose, no connections to the outside world worth fighting for.
But love created connections that transcended physical boundaries. If two people could maintain their love for each other despite Spring Water's influence, they might be able to break the supernatural barrier that kept visitors trapped.
The underground spring system formed a complex network beneath the entire area, with Spring Water at its center. Sarah theorized that the water itself was somehow alive—or at least inhabited by something that had learned to manipulate human consciousness over the centuries.
"Look at this," Sage said, pointing to a geological survey in Sarah's files. "The spring network extends for hundreds of miles underground. If something lives in the water, it could influence a huge area."
"That would explain the pattern of disappearing desert communities. They weren't all centered on Spring Water—they were connected by the same underground water source."
We made plans to leave at dawn, driving straight out of town before anyone could stop us. If Sarah was right about love being the key, then our connection to each other might be strong enough to overcome whatever force kept people trapped.
It was a theory worth testing, even if it killed us both.
As the first light of dawn crept through the inn windows, Sage kissed me softly.
"Whatever happens," she whispered, "I'm glad you came to Spring Water."
"Even if we can't escape?"
"Especially then. Some prisons become bearable when you have someone to share them with."
But I was determined we wouldn't find out. Love might be powerful enough to break Spring Water's supernatural hold—and if it wasn't, at least we'd face whatever came next together.
Outside, the desert was waking up to another day of holding onto the people who'd found their way to its hidden heart.



















































